Professional Documents
Culture Documents
1. YOU ATTITUDE
Definition:
Instead of:
1. Tuesday is the only day that we can promise a quick response to purchase order
requests. We are swamped the rest of the week.
2. At Construction Resources, we are proud to supply the highest-rated engineered
wood in the entire Midwest
Try This:
1. …
2. …
Even better:
Instead of this:
1. You failed to deliver the customer’s order on time.
2. You must correct all five copies by noon
Try this:
1. …
2. ….
2. MAINTAIN ETIQUETTE
Definition:
Instead of this:
You’ve been sitting on our order for two weeks, and we need it now!
Try this:
Definition:
Instead of this:
1. It is impossible to repair your laptop today
2. We wasted $300,000 advertising in that magazine
Try this:
1. …
2. …
Instead of this:
Try this:
1. …
2. …
If you’re trying to persuade audience members to buy a product, pay a bill, or perform a
service for you, emphasize what’s in it for them.
Instead of this:
1. We will notify all three credit reporting agencies if you do not pay your overdue bill
within 10 days.
2. I am tired of seeing so many errors in the customer service blog.
Try this:
1. …
2. …
4. BIAS-FREE LANGUAGE
Definition:
Is it political correctness?
5. BUILD CREDIBILITY
6. TONE
3. Make it emphatic:
4. Make it parallel:
Our Super Bowl ads have three objectives: We want to increase product use, introduce
complementary products, and our corporate image will be enhanced.
Let’s practise:
Emphasis
For each of the following sentences, circle (a) or (b). Be prepared to justify your choice.
1. Which is more emphatic?
a. Our dress code is good.
b. Our dress code reflects common sense and good taste
Parallelism
Revise the following sentences so that their parts are balanced.
10. (Hint: Match adjectives.) To be hired, an applicant must be reliable, creative, and show
enthusiasm.
11. (Hint: Match active voice.) If you have decided to cancel our service, please cut your
credit card in half and the pieces should be returned to us.
12. (Hint: Match verbs.) Guidelines for improving security at food facilities include inspecting
incoming and outgoing vehicles, restriction of access to laboratories, preventing workers
from bringing personal items into food-handling areas, and inspection of packaging for signs
of tampering.
13. (Hint: Match adjective–noun expressions.) The committee will continue to monitor
merchandise design, product quality, and check the feedback of customers.
14. (Hint: Match verb clauses.) To use the fax copier, insert your meter, the paper trays must
be loaded, indicate the number of copies needed, and your original sheet should be inserted
through the feeder.
15. (Hint: Match ing verbs.) Sending an e-mail establishes a more permanent record than to
make a telephone call.