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How to use this booklet
In this booklet, there is a lesson for each of the 15 poems in the GCSE English Literature Power
and Conflict anthology. You should work through the activities for one poem each lesson.
For each poem, there is information about the author and the poem to support your understanding
of the poem. You should the poem carefully, picking out interesting language as you go, making
annotations about the effect of the language that you spot in the poem.
Four key quotations have been picked out of each poem, for you to make detailed annotations.
You should identify and make note of the effect the devices that the poet has used and make
notes about the connotations of key words.
There is then an analysis question for you to answer about each poem. There are sentence
starters provided if you would like to use them, but you are welcome to articulate your ideas
differently, as long as you are using quotations and analysing the poet’s language.
Once you have studied each of the 15 poems, there is a bank of comparison questions that
require you to focus on two of the poems: you must analyse the different ideas the poets present
and how they use language to do so.
At the back of the booklet, there is a glossary of key poetic terms, with definitions and examples.
Please make reference to this if you are unsure of a poetic device that you spot.
Contents
Page 2 – Ozymandias
Page 5 – London
Page 8 – Extract from The Prelude
Page 11 – My Last Duchess
Page 14 – Charge of the Light Brigade
Page 17 – Exposure
Page 20 – Storm on the Island
Page 23 – Bayonet Charge
Page 26 – Remains
Page 29 – Poppies
Page 32 – War Photographer
Page 35 – Tissue
Page 38 – The Emigrée
Page 41 – Kamikaze
Page 44 – Checking Out Me History
Page 47 – Poetry Comparison
Page 48 – Glossary of Poetic Terms
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‘Ozymandias’ by Percy Bysshe Shelley
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings; Mock – this word has a double meaning –
it can mean to make a model or but also to
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair! make fun of.
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Colossal – huge. This word describes the
statue but is also a metaphor for the King
Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare himself.
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”
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‘London’ by William Blake
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ABOUT THE AUTHOR
William Blake was a poet and artist who specialised in religious imagery but who rejected
established religion for a number of reasons. One of the main reasons Blake rejected the
Church of England was its failure to help children in London who were forced to work.
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‘Extract from The Prelude’ by William Wordsworth
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“But huge and mighty forms, that do not live / Like living men, moved slowly through the mind / By
day, and were a trouble to my dreams.”
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‘My Last Duchess’ by Robert Browning
That’s my last Duchess painted on the wall, Would draw from her alike the approving speech,
Looking as if she were alive. I call Or blush, at least. She thanked men—good! but
Worked busily a day, and there she stands. Somehow—I know not how—as if she ranked
Will’t please you sit and look at her? I said My gift of a nine-hundred-years-old name
“Fra Pandolf” by design, for never read With anybody’s gift. Who’d stoop to blame
Strangers like you that pictured countenance, This sort of trifling? Even had you skill
The depth and passion of its earnest glance, In speech—which I have not—to make your will
But to myself they turned (since none puts by Quite clear to such an one, and say, “Just this
The curtain I have drawn for you, but I) Or that in you disgusts me; here you miss,
And seemed as they would ask me, if they durst, Or there exceed the mark”—and if she let
How such a glance came there; so, not the first Herself be lessoned so, nor plainly set
Are you to turn and ask thus. Sir, ’twas not Her wits to yours, forsooth, and made excuse—
Her husband’s presence only, called that spot E’en then would be some stooping; and I choose
Of joy into the Duchess’ cheek; perhaps Never to stoop. Oh, sir, she smiled, no doubt,
Fra Pandolf chanced to say, “Her mantle laps Whene’er I passed her; but who passed without
Over my lady’s wrist too much,” or “Paint Much the same smile? This grew; I gave
Half-flush that dies along her throat.” Such stuff Then all smiles stopped together. There she stands
Was courtesy, she thought, and cause enough As if alive. Will’t please you rise? We’ll meet
For calling up that spot of joy. She had The company below, then. I repeat,
A heart—how shall I say?— too soon made glad, The Count your master’s known munificence
Too easily impressed; she liked whate’er Is ample warrant that no just pretense
She looked on, and her looks went everywhere. Of mine for dowry will be disallowed;
Sir, ’twas all one! My favour at her breast, Though his fair daughter’s self, as I avowed
The dropping of the daylight in the West, At starting, is my object. Nay, we’ll go
The bough of cherries some officious fool Together down, sir. Notice Neptune, though,
Broke in the orchard for her, the white mule Taming a sea-horse, thought a rarity,
She rode with round the terrace—all and each Which Claus of Innsbruck cast in bronze for me!
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Annotate the following quotations by answering the questions for each:
“(since none puts by / The curtain I have drawn for you, but I)”
“A heart – how shall I say? – too soon made glad, / Too easily impressed;”
“as if she ranked / My gift of a nine-hundred years old name / With anybody’s gift.”
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‘The Charge of the Light Brigade’ by Alfred, Lord Tennyson
IV
I Flashed all their sabres bare,
Half a league, half a league, Flashed as they turned in air
Half a league onward, Sabring the gunners there,
All in the valley of Death Charging an army, while
Rode the six hundred. All the world wondered.
“ Forward, the Light Brigade! Plunged in the battery-smoke
Charge for the guns!” he said. Right through the line they broke;
Into the valley of Death Cossack and Russian
Rode the six hundred. Reeled from the sabre stroke
Shattered and sundered.
II Then they rode back, but not
“ “Forward, the Light Brigade!” Not the six hundred.
Was there a man dismayed?
Not though the soldier knew V
Someone had blundered. Cannon to right of them,
Theirs not to make reply, Cannon to left of them,
Theirs not to reason why, Cannon behind them
Theirs but to do and die. Volleyed and thundered;
Into the valley of Death Stormed at with shot and shell,
Rode the six hundred. While horse and hero fell.
They that had fought so well
I III Came through the jaws of Death,
Cannon to right of them, Back from the mouth of hell,
Cannon to left of them, All that was left of them,
Cannon in front of them Left of six hundred.
Volleyed and thundered;
Stormed at with shot and shell, VI
Boldly they rode and well, When can their glory fade?
Into the jaws of Death, O the wild charge they made!
Into the mouth of hell All the world wondered.
Rode the six hundred. Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred!
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“Boldly they rode and well, / Into the jaws of Death, / Into the mouth of Hell”
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‘Exposure’ by Wilfred Owen
Our brains ache, in the merciless iced east winds that knive
us . . .
Wearied we keep awake because the night is silent . . .
Low drooping flares confuse our memory of the salient . . .
Since we believe not otherwise can kind
Worried by silence, sentries whisper, curious, nervous,
fires burn;
But nothing happens.
Now ever suns smile true on child, or field,
or fruit.
Watching, we hear the mad gusts tugging on the wire,
For God's invincible spring our love is made
Like twitching agonies of men among its brambles.
afraid;
Northward, incessantly, the flickering gunnery rumbles,
Therefore, not loath, we lie out here;
Far off, like a dull rumour of some other war.
therefore were born,
What are we doing here?
For love of God seems dying.
The poignant misery of dawn begins to grow . . .
Tonight, this frost will fasten on this mud
We only know war lasts, rain soaks, and clouds sag stormy.
and us,
Dawn massing in the east her melancholy army
Shrivelling many hands, and puckering
Attacks once more in ranks on shivering ranks of grey,
foreheads crisp.
But nothing happens.
The burying-party, picks and shovels in
shaking grasp,
Sudden successive flights of bullets streak the silence.
Pause over half-known faces. All their eyes
L Less deadly than the air that shudders black with snow,
are ice,
With sidelong flowing flakes that flock, pause, and renew,
But nothing happens.
We watch them wandering up and down the wind's nonchalance,
But nothing happens.
Pale flakes with fingering stealth come feeling for our faces—
We cringe in holes, back on forgotten dreams, and stare, snow-dazed,
Deep into grassier ditches. So we drowse, sun-dozed,
Littered with blossoms trickling where the blackbird fusses.
—Is it that we are dying?
Slowly our ghosts drag home: glimpsing the sunk fires, glozed
With crusted dark-red jewels; crickets jingle there;
For hours the innocent mice rejoice: the house is theirs;
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“Our brains ache, in the merciless iced east winds that knive us…”
“The burying-party, picks and shovels in shaking grasp, pause over half-known faces.”
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‘Storm on the Island’ by Seamus Heaney
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“…you can listen to the thing you fear / Forgetting that it pummels your house too”
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‘Bayonet Charge’ by Ted Hughes
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Ted Hughes (17 August 1930 – 28 October 1998) was an English poet and children's writer.
Critics frequently rank him as one of the best poets of his generation, and one of the twentieth
century's greatest writers. He served as Poet Laureate from 1984 until his death. Many of his
poems reflect his passion for nature and the natural world and wild animals are frequently used
as symbols and metaphors in his work. He was married to a fellow poet Sylvia Plath, who
committed suicide after their relationship broke down, a tragedy which cast a shadow over the
rest of his life.
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“In what cold clockwork of the stars and nations / Was he the hand pointing that second?”
“King, honour, human dignity, etcetera / Dropped like luxuries in a yelling alarm”
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‘Remains’ by Simon Armitage
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Simon Armitage Born in Huddersfield in 1963, Simon Armitage spent much of his working life
as a probation officer. His poetry is often inspired by events in the world around him, and he is
particularly concerned with violence and its effects, especially on young people.
On another occasion, we get sent out End of story, except not really.
to tackle looters raiding a bank. His blood-shadow stays on the street, and out on patrol
And one of them legs it up the road, I walk right over it week after week.
probably armed, possibly not. Then I’m home on leave. But I blink
Well myself and somebody else and somebody and he bursts again through the doors of the bank.
else are all of the same mind, Sleep, and he’s probably armed, and possibly not.
so all three of us open fire. Dream, and he’s torn apart by a dozen rounds.
Three of a kind all letting fly, and I swear And the drink and the drugs won’t flush him out –
I see every round as it rips through his life – he’s here in my head when I close my eyes,
I see broad daylight on the other side. dug in behind enemy lines,
So we’ve hit this looter a dozen times not left for dead in some distant, sun-stunned, sand-
and he’s there on the ground, sort of inside out, smothered land
or six-feet-under in desert sand,
pain itself, the image of agony.
One of my mates goes by but near to the knuckle, here and now,
and tosses his guts back into his body. his bloody life in my bloody hands.
Then he’s carted off in the back of a lorry.
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“One of my mates goes by / and tosses his guts back into his body”
“And the drink and the drugs won’t flush him out-“
“Here’s her in my head when I close my eyes / dug in behind enemy lines”
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He describes, “[quotation]”.
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‘Poppies’ by Jane Weir
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Jane Weir was born in Italy in 1963 and grew up in Italy and Manchester. She also lived in
Northern Ireland during the troubled 1980s. As well as publishing a number of poetry
collections, Weir is a textile designer and her love of the forms and textures of fabric is often
reflected in her poetry.
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“I resisted the impulse to run my fingers through the gelled blackthorns of your hair.”
“I walked with you, to the front door, threw it open, the world overflowing like a treasure chest.”
How does Weir present the effects of conflict and individual experience?
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He describes, “[quotation]”.
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‘War Photographer’ by Carol Ann Duffy
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Born in Scotland, Carol Ann Duffy was the British Poet Laureate from 2009-2019, the first
woman to hold the post. She has published many collections of poetry.
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“A stranger’s features / faintly start to twist before his eyes, a half-formed ghost.”
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‘Tissue’ by Imtiaz Dharker
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Imtiaz Dharker was born in Pakistan in 1954 and grew up in Glasgow. She is a film-maker and
artist as well as a poet and her work is often concerned with themes of cultural and
geographical freedom and gender.
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“Let daylight break through capitals and monoliths, through the shapes that pride can make.”
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Dharker presents life as…
He describes, “[quotation]”.
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‘The Emigrée’ by Carol Rumens
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Carol Rumens (b 1944) was born in London. She has published plays and novels, translated
poetry, edited poetry collections and taught creative writing.
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‘Kamikaze’ by Beatrice Garland
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Beatrice Garland (b 1938) lives in London and is an NHS clinician as well as a poet. She won
the national Poetry Prize in 2001. Many of her poems concern the way people behave towards
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“a shaven head full of powerful incantations and enough fuel for a one-way journey into history.”
“little fishing boats strung out like bunting on a green-blue translucent sea.”
“he must have wondered which had been the better way to die.”
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‘Checking Out Me History’ by John Agard
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
John Agard was born in British Guiana (now called Guyana) in the Caribbean, in 1949. He
moved to the UK in the late 1970s.
He uses non-standard phonetic spelling to represent his own accent, and writes about what it
is like being black to challenge racist attitudes, especially those which are unthinking.
Nanny
Dem tell me
see-far woman
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of mountain dream
Wha dem want to tell me
fire-woman struggle
hopeful stream
Bandage up me eye with me own history
to freedom river
Blind me to me own identity
Dem tell me
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But now I checking out me own history
I carving out me identity
Annotate the following quotations by answering the questions for each:
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Poetry Comparison
In your exam, you will need to compare how two poems present their ideas and perspective on a particular theme.
The diagram below demonstrates some of the thematic links that can be made across the 15 poems.
Using the questions below, begin writing comparisons of the poems you have studied throughout this
booklet. You should use 3 quotations from each poem, and analyse the language that the two poets use to
present similar and different ideas.
How do the poets explore ideas about the pride of man in My Last Duchess and Ozymandias?
How do the poets explore the power of nature in Storm on the Island and The Prelude?
How do the poets explore ideas about identity in Checking out Me History and The Emigree?
How do the poets explore ideas about the reality of war in Charge of the Light Brigade and Exposure?
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Glossary of Poetic Terms
Alliteration – repetition of consonant sounds at the beginning of words, e.g. ‘funny face’ or ‘cowardly custard’. Note
that sound, not spelling, is what matters: ‘philosophical fish’ is still an example of alliteration. The similar sounds do
not have to be right next to each other:
‘Then on a sudden, lo! the level lake,
And the long glories of the winter moon.’ – Tennyson, ‘Le Morte D’Arthur’
Assonance – repetition of the similar vowel sounds. These could be the same vowel sounds with different
consonants, e.g. ‘blue moon’, ‘funny tummy’, or the same consonants with different vowel sounds, e.g. ‘black block’,
‘sad Sid’.
E.g: ‘Your eyes smile peace. The pasture gleams and glooms’ - Dante Gabriel Rossetti, ‘Silent Noon’
Context – something outside the text that affects its meaning, e.g. its historical context and/or its social context.
Advances in science or transport, expectations of women, life expectancy, religious belief, whether or not there was a
war on when it was written – these are examples of context. If the poem is any good, though, it will stand on its own,
i.e. it will give you something valuable even if it’s all alone on the page. When you include context, use it as a torch to
illuminate the poem. Do not let it get in the way. ‘The poem is king,’ as one examiner said.
Dialect words – a dialect is a form of language spoken in a particular area or by a particular social group. ‘dialect
words’ are examples of words or meanings that distinguish a dialect from standard English or from other dialects. This
could be a word that only occurs in that dialect, e.g. ‘mardy’ in Yorkshire, West Midlands etc. meaning ‘grumpy, surly’.
It could also be a word that occurs in standard English but with a different meaning in a dialect, e.g. ‘starved’ meaning
cold in some Northern dialects of English. Non-standard grammar also indicates dialect, e.g:
‘Old pirates, yes, they rob I;
Sold I to the merchant ships’ – Bob Marley, ‘Redemption Song’
Dramatic monologue – an imaginary speaker addressing an imaginary audience, e.g. ‘My Last Duchess’ by Robert
Browning. Usually in iambic pentameter in a single stanza, i.e. no breaks. The person just will not stop talking!
‘My Last Duchess’ is in iambic pentameters that rhyme in pairs. These are called ‘rhyming couplets’. Look out for the
following:
a) words or phrases that imply a setting in which the speaker is talking:
e.g. ‘That’s my last Duchess painted on the wall’
b) words or phrases that imply a listener and perhaps their actions, too:
e.g. ‘Nay, we’ll go/Together down, sir.’
c) words or phrases that sound like a person talking, especially interjections:
e.g. ‘A heart – how shall I say? – too soon made glad’
End-stopping – when there is a pause at the end of a line, usually a full stop:
‘To err is human; to forgive, divine.’ – Alexander Pope, ‘An Essay on Criticism’
Enjambement – when a sentence runs over from one line of verse into the next. The word comes from the French
word for leg: ‘la jambe’.
This is a poem about a line of ants
running along one twig and then another
twig and the enjambement reflects the
unending movement of the ants until one of them
stops.
Form – the shape of the poem. Some shapes have names, e.g. sonnet, ballad, dramatic monologue. Others do not,
but there will always be something that binds the poem together: a particular rhythm, rhymes and so on. Think: why
does this form, this shape, suit the subject and its treatment by the poet?
Half-rhyme – (also called pararhyme) words that almost rhyme but not quite: very similar to assonance.
The effect can be unsettling, as in this war poem about two dead soldiers meeting underground:
‘It seemed that out of battle I escaped
Down some profound, dull tunnel, long since scooped
Through granites which titanic wars had groined.
Yet also there encumbered sleepers groaned…’
- Wilfred Owen, ‘Strange Meeting’
If you find ‘assonance’ and ‘half-rhyme’ confusing, yet you want to comment on a bit that almost rhymes, either term
will do. Most importantly, say what you think the effect is. Is it funny? Dreamlike? Unsettling? Above all, is it in any
way like the thing it is describing? For example:
‘The half-rhyme here is funny: it emphasises the fact that the children sing out of tune.’ Remember that a sound effect
can enhance, underline, emphasise and so on. Sound alone, however, cannot convey much. You must know what
the words mean for them to convey meaning to you!
Hyperbole – deliberate exaggeration for effect. ‘I’ve told you a thousand times!’ is one annoying example.
Iambic pentameter – a line of verse with five beats, which fall on the second syllable of each pair: ti TUM ti TUM ti
TUM ti TUM ti TUM
Imagery – language that describes something using at least one of the five senses. Often this will be a mental image,
but imagery can also describe a sound, a smell, a taste &c. It is a very broad term indeed, and is also applied to
figurative language such as metaphors and similes. In fact, it is so broad a term that you may well be wondering: what
is not imagery? An abstract thing like a question, a thought, anything you know is there because it strikes your mind
and not your senses: that is not imagery. There is no imagery in this statement: ‘I thought about the question for a
bit.’ There is imagery in this one: ‘A question formed in my mind, like smoke.’
Literal and figurative language – Literal language means directly what it states. ‘I laughed a lot’ is literal. Figurative
language does not mean directly what it states. ‘I laughed my head off’ is figurative.
Note: metaphors, similes and personification are all examples of figurative language.
Metaphor – an image which implies a comparison by stating that something is the thing it resembles. ‘The sea was
woman; the woman was the sea.’ – Ray Bradbury, in his short story, ‘The Shoreline at Sunset’, about some boys who
find a mermaid.
Onomatopoiea – when the words sound like what they mean, e.g. ‘buzz,’ ‘crash’. Movement may also be imitated,
e.g. ‘splishy-splashy fish’. In poetry, the words often behave like what they describe. The sound of the words, their
pace, rhythm, softness or harshness often reflect their meaning.
The poet Alexander Pope put it like this:
‘The sound must seem an echo to the sense.’ – ‘An Essay on Criticism’
In poems, the words often behave like their subject: bouncy and springy when describing a spaniel puppy in
springtime, heavy and plodding when describing an old man in winter. (Of course other forms of writing such as
novels can do this, but it would be wearying for a whole book!) If sound or movement are the main qualities imitated
by the words, you can say the lines are onomatopoeic or that they use onomatopoeia. If in doubt, i.e. if it is not sound
or movement but something else that the words imitate, you can use Pope’s phrase and say that the sound echoes
the sense. Either way, this is one of the most amazing things about poetry. See ‘Anthem for Doomed Youth’ by
Wilfred Owen for a great example.
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Personification – describing something non-human as if it has human characteristics such as feelings. This could be
an inanimate (non-living) object: ‘the broken toaster spat crumbs at me’. Or it could be an abstract idea, like love or
truth, given a human form, e.g. ‘I laugh in the face of Danger and throw ice-cubes down the vest of Fear’ –
‘Blackadder’. Also:
‘Grief fills the room up of my absent child,
Lies in his bed, walks up and down with me…
Stuffs out his vacant garments with his form:
Then have I reason to be fond of grief.’
– Shakespeare, ‘King John’, probably written after he lost his own eleven year-old son to the plague.
Refrain – a recurring phrase or lines at the end of each stanza of poetry, like a one-line chorus. Can you think of a
song you like that has a refrain?
Rhyme scheme – the way rhymes within a poem are organised. You write about this by using aabb, abab and so on.
Each new letter represents a new sound. Rhymes bind a poem together. They also emphasise similarity or difference
in the meanings of words. Rhyming couplets are two lines following each other which rhyme. In a play, a rhyming
couplet is often said by a character who is very certain of something. This may be a bad decision he or she has just
made!
Rhythm – the arrangement of words to form a regular beat through a pattern of stresses. Rhythm is to poetry what the
beat is to music.
Sibilance - alliteration of the ‘s’ sound, e.g. ‘serious snakes stay sober’.
Sonnet – a poem of fourteen lines, usually in iambic pentameter. Shakespearean sonnet – has a rhyming couplet at
the end. E.g. Simon Armitage’s poem, ‘The Clown Punk’. Petrarchan sonnet – has no rhyming couplet at the end.
Instead, there is a turn or ‘volta’ in the argument, around the eighth line. E.g. Shelley’s ‘Ozymandias’.
Speaker – the ‘voice’ that is speaking in a poem written in the first person. Note: take care when deciding whether to
write ‘speaker’ or ‘poet’. The poet is the actual person who wrote the poem. The speaker is the character within it: the
one whom the poem is pretending to be! If your poem is about a fish remembering his life, you could write this: ‘The
voice of the speaker is full of sadness, until he remembers his first swim. Here, the fish sounds….’ If you wanted to
comment on the writer’s skill, you would write things like this:‘The poet uses a bouncing rhythm and images of glitter to
evoke the speaker’s memories of the salmon run.’ What you would not want to write is that ‘the fish uses alliteration’.
Hahaha!
Stanza – a clearly demarcated part of a poem. Another word for ‘verse’, really!
Structure – how the poet has organised his or her work into patterns, e.g. the number of stanzas/verses and their
length; the line lengths; the rhymes and the rhythms. E.g. ‘This poem tells a story in three verses. The first two are
the same length but the third is very short, reflecting the sudden death of the fish.’
Symbol – something used to stand for or represent something else. Note: a symbol is like a heavy-duty metaphor. It
stands for something bigger than itself. E.g. the rose is often a symbol of love; the cross is a symbol of Christianity.
Tone – the overall feeling or mood of a poem. Note: look out for any changes of tone and see how precise you can
be about which word or phrase creates that change.
‘You were really nice,
just like pudding rice,
just like fluffy mice,
then you stole my car
and my fishtank
and now you are like
a really annoying wasp.’
From line four onwards, there are no pleasant adjectives, no rhymes and the rhythm is irregular. All this emphasises
the change of tone from friendly to angry in this brilliant poem by me. :o)
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