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Advanced Journalism
Fourth Quarter

Sports Writing A strong headline could also be the


• A specialized field of writing which following:
combines news reporting, editorial
writing, and feature writing, the
content of which is sports and
athletics, and physical education.
Straight News Reporting vs. Sports Writing
• News Writing
✓journalist uses short words, short
sentences, and short paragraphs.
✓news reporter is not allowed to
include his/her opinion.
• Sports Writing
✓journalist has more freedom in his
writing style and has more pep In writing the headlines in a sports story, these
(energy and high spirits, liveliness). are the example verbs that you can use:
✓writer can use jargons and figures of Close Game One-sided
speech. Nips Crushes
Three Types of Sports News Stories Edges Manhandles
• Advance Story – sometimes called Survives Dismantles
dope or prognostication, builds up Holds off Whips
enthusiasm for coming events. It may Trounces Bludgeons
be straight news story, a background Escapes Drubs
story, or a prediction story. Beats/Defeats Thrashes/Wallops
• Coverage Story – an on-the-spot
coverage of an actual game. 2. The Lead
• Advance Coverage Story – includes • It introduces the body and
the information of a coming event as summarizes the story.
the first part of the story and the • It has two parts: Upper half
information on a past event as the last contains the angle, teams, and
part of the story. score; Lower half contains the
Structure of the Sports Story game, venue, and date.
1. The Headline • The angle has two kinds:
• The rules in headline writing are • In-Game (during the game)
followed. ✓ Most dominant player
• Colorful but forceful words, ✓ Game-winning shot/moment
especially verbs, are used. ✓ Turning point of the game
• A strong headline uses hammer ✓ Injuries
and kicker. • Novelty (wala sa game)
✓ Weather (Sinabayan nang
mainit na panahon…)
✓ Crowd
✓ Appearance (height- mas
maliit, mas malaki; age,
experience, looks- maayos na
sapatos)
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Types of Lead I. Novelty lead (Staccato)
A. Classical information

J. Novelty lead (descriptive)


B. Outstanding player

3. The Body
C. Key play • Team and/or individual standing
• Decisive plays – crucial part of the
game that leads to winning.
• Best score for the day
• Play-by-play account – summarize
the description of each round/fight
in detail.
D. Analytical approach • Quotation

Eight (8) elements that make up a good


sports story according to the former
executive director of the Manila Times Jose
Luna Castro.
1. Personalities
E. Implication and significance 2. Play-by-play description
• In the fourth quarter, the Aces opened
up an 11-point lead as Calvin Abueva
converted two consecutive three-
pointers.
• The Aces opened up an 11-point lead,
56-45, early in the fourth quarter as
Calvin Abueva converted two
F. Background information consecutive three-pointers but the
Beermen were vigilant enough as they
posted an 8-0 run to stay on track, 56-
53.
3. Statistics
The Aces got possession after the jump
G. Novelty lead (punch) and Abueva, who had been shooting
48% from the free throw line, was
fouled by Fajardo as he listed the
team’s 20th in the charity lane.
4. Quotes by players
5. Quotes by trainers and coaches
H. Novelty lead (parody) Samantala, kahit natalo ang LPNHS-
Main sa larong ito, inamin ni coach
Jever Sales na mas matinding
pagsasanay pa ang kanilang
gagawin para masiguro ang panalo
sa inaabangan ding Cluster 1 Meet.
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“Posibleng makakaharap namin ang • Sizzled with 22 points
Golden Acres sa Division Meet kaya • Came charging back with a game high 23
‘yon ang dapat naming points
paghandaan,” ani coach Sales. • Career high 22 points
• Season high 25 points
“Dapat mas matibay na ang team
• Amassed 20 points
namin sa susunod naming laban.” • Inflicted just the second loss for Team B
• Got their bearings in the third set and played
6. Background stuff on players like a well-oiled machine
The Aces opened up an 11-point lead, • Woke up from their slumber and swept their
56-45, early in the fourth quarter as foes the rest of the way
point-guard Calvin Abueva converted • Team rallied and went ahead for good
two consecutive three-pointers but the • Player A sunk his pair of free throws
top-seeded Beermen were vigilant • Had a slim 46-44 lead at the half
enough as they posted an 8-0 run to • Used a 26-14 third period to go up big, 72-58
• With 12 minutes remaining in the game
stay on track, 56-53.
• With 5 seconds in the shotclock
7. Importance or significance of the • With 5 ticks left
game or event • A 6-3 run to start the final canto padded Team
8. Background of the game A’s lead 78-61

Sports Lingo Basketball – pivot, rebound, technical foul,


• Surged back after losing quarter count, hook shot, lay-up, icebreaker, tip-
• Suffered a setback losing in straight sets in, zone defense, man to man, 30 second rule, full
• Got off to a flying start in the opening set court, gun time, keyhole area
• Fought their way back to flip the charts
• Kept the winning momentum in the early Baseball and Softball – diamond, pitcher,
phases of the second set backstop, deep center, struck out, lower fourth,
• Widened their lead up to eight points, 20-12, shut out, hitless inning, hit a homerun, two-
to pocket that section of the game with a baggers, no-hit-run
massive 25-15
• Got back on track after edging Team B, 23-18 Volleyball – spikes, change court, wallop, block,
• Series of ties from 24-all up to 27-27 straight set, booming service, net ball
• Kept cool and eventually restored their
supremacy Field – heaved the shotput, hurled the javelin,
• Showed great composure in the first set threw the discus, hop step and jump, high or long
• Locked in a battle of attrition jump, broad jump, pole vault, Grecian disc
• Bounced back from their worst first canto
performance Sports Page Layout
• After a high-wire 90-88 win ✓It should have its own nameplate.
• Will gun for jugular tomorrow ✓Use other stories such as features,
• Avoid going through the wringer again columns, and editorial.
• Crack Team B’s game plan for defense
✓Use bolder photos.
• Player A spelled the key to the in
• Play hard-nosed defense
✓Use action photos.
• Continue their fine form ✓Layout should be masculine.
• Have found the right formula ✓Use hammer head or kicker
• Easily disposed off Team B in straight sets, ✓Observe other principles employed in the
(score) news page.
• Zoomed to an early 20-point lead
• Pour in 20 points Photo Qualities in Sports Page
• Chipped in double figures with 14 points 1. Must show action
apiece
• Tallied 22 markers
• Posted 15 points
• Notched 20 points
• Registered 20 points
• Logged 20 points
• Dished out 20 points courtesy of six 3-pointers
and a couple of free throws
• Tabbed 20 points
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2. Must have visual appeal

3. In captioning photos, use the


descriptive captions

Take note of the ff. in captions:


• Who is that? (In most cases, identify
people from left to right unless the
action in the photograph demands
otherwise.)
• Why is this picture in the paper?
• What's going on?
• When and where was this?
• Why does he/she/it/they look that
way?
• How did this occur?
✓ Simply stated, cutlines should
explain the picture so that
readers are satisfied with their
understanding of the picture.
✓ They need not — and should not
— tell what the picture has
made obvious.
✓ It should supply vital information
that the picture cannot.

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