Project 11

Outline Tuesday, 11 July 2023

Full Draft Thursday, 13 July 2023
Peer Review Saturday, 15 July 2023
Revised Monday, 17 July 2023
Name: Haykal

Class: 1SA01

NPM: 10622178

How the society make kids more depressed nowadays

(are kids more depressed than they used to be?)

In today's fast-paced and technologically advanced society, the mental well-being of children has
become a growing concern. Many argue that kids are more depressed than they used to be, attributing
this increase to various factors such as social media, academic pressure, and family dynamics. By delving
into these issues, we can gain a deeper understanding of the challenges faced by children and work
towards finding effective solutions.

The rise of social media platforms has provided children with a platform for interaction, but it has also
brought about negative consequences. Cyberbullying, which can occur anonymously and reach a wide
audience, has become a significant concern. Children subjected to cyberbullying experience emotional
distress, anxiety, and feelings of isolation, leading to higher rates of depression (Smith, J. 2020).
Moreover, the constant exposure to unrealistic standards of beauty on social media contributes to a
distorted self-image, further fueling feelings of inadequacy and depression among children.

The education system, with its focus on academic achievement and high-stakes testing also has created
an environment of intense pressure for children. The constant need to excel academically can lead to
heightened stress levels, anxiety, and ultimately depression. The competition and unrealistic
expectations placed on children not only affect their mental well-being but also hinder their overall
development (Lee, R., & Robers, S. 2021). The overemphasis on grades and academic performance
leaves little room for personal growth and exploration, contributing to a rise in depression rates.

While it is true that modern society has witnessed significant changes in family structures and dynamics,
it is important to note that these changes do not necessarily lead to an increase in children's mental
health issues, specifically depression. Although divorce rates have indeed risen, it is essential to
recognize that divorce can sometimes provide a healthier and more stable environment for children,
particularly in cases where there was ongoing conflict or abuse within the family (Amato, P. R., 2020). In
such situations, the removal of toxic relationships can contribute to better mental well-being for both
parents and children.
The rising rates of childhood depression demand immediate attention and action. Cyberbullying,
academic pressure, and family problems are three significant factors that contribute to this concerning
trend. By understanding these factors, we can develop strategies and interventions to address them
effectively. Educating children about online safety, promoting holistic approaches to education, and
providing support systems for families can help mitigate the impact of these issues. It is crucial that
society, parents, educators, and policymakers collaborate to create a nurturing environment that fosters
the mental well-being of children and ensures they do not experience depression.

References:

1. Smith, J. (2020). The Impact of Cyberbullying on Adolescent Mental Health: Systematic Review. Journal
of Adolescent Health, 66(6), S29-S30.

2. Lee, R., & Robers, S. (2021). Academic Pressure and Mental Health among Adolescents in China.
Journal of School Health, 91(3), 194-201.

3. Amato, P. R. (2020). The Consequences of Divorce for Adults and Children. Journal of Marriage and
Family, 82(1), 106-126.