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A glance at the line chart provided some similarities about USA and China’s

birth rate from 1920 to 2000. It is evident that both countries showed fluctuation until
mid of 20th century and then slightly decreased towards the end of the graph.
At the beginning of the chart, China rose from approximately from 10 percent
to 15 percent in the 1935, then rapidly plunged to its one third. Afterwards it
consisted constant few years, from 1945 it dramatically increased to 20 percent at
peak in 1950. Subsequently, rate steeply fell to its half within 3-4 years, then it
showed plateau until the end of 21st century.
Meanwhile, USA’s birth rate is started from 2 percent higher than that of the
other nation, also followed the pattern of China. Moreover, the all-time low of 5%
occurred in 1945, then it remained above that level until 2000.
To sum up, the birth rates of USA and China’s birth rate fluctuated during the
1920-1950, after that it gradually decreased the end of the chart.
Revised and edited version:
A glance at the line chart provided some similarities between the USA and China's
birth rates from 1920 to 2000. Both countries fluctuated until mid of 20th century and
then slightly decreased towards the end of the graph.
At the charts beginning, China rose from approximately 10 per cent to 15 per cent in
1935, then rapidly plunged to one-third. Afterwards, it consisted constant few years,
from 1945 it dramatically increased to 20 per cent at peak in 1950. Subsequently, the
rate steeply fell to its half within 3-4 years; then it showed a plateau until the end of
the 21st century.
Meanwhile, USA's birth rate started from 2 per cent higher than that of the other
nation, following the pattern of China. The all-time low of 5% occurred in 1945; then it
remained above that level until 2000.
To sum up, the birth rates in the USA and China fluctuated from 1920 to 1950 and
gradually decreased at the end of the chart.

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