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“I wince a little as I Page 10 The author used simile watch her staring at her Chapter 1 here to describe Lucy’s still-closed textbook like status as if someone has somebody smacked her smacked a textbook on across the face with it and her face (astonished and she’s still getting her unable to reflect with breath back. It’s obvious anger). Under the she’s trying not to cry.” pharmacodynamic of simile, Lucy’s anger and grievance have been fully revealed to the reader. However, the most important reason I choose this quote to analyze is because I also had similar experience to Lucy in this case, I’ve also experienced unfair punishments from the teacher in the past. Sometimes I feel guilty Page 15 The reason I choose this that I don’t miss him, but Chapter 2 quote is because I feel I can’t pull up even the sympathetic toward tiniest sense memory. I Vivian’s thought and was only eight months old experience here. My when he died, and after it grandma always tells me happened Mom and me stories of my grandpa, he moved back to East passed away when I’m Rockport so my 100 days old. At that time, grandparents could help he suffered from lung take care of me while my cancer and multiple mom went back to school diseases. My dad was and finished her nursing worrying that my grandpa degree. will pass his disease to me, so he didn’t let me into grandpa’s house. My grandma said the only thing her husband can only see me playing in the playground downstairs through his yellowing window. Every time my grandma mentions her husband, tears will bleed from her eyes. However, I can’t force myself to cry with her, because I have no impression to my grandpa. In addition to the super Page 29 Simile again was used by cool haircut, he’s got Chapter 3 the author here to make olive skin and full lips the boy stand out special and dark eyes like two toward Vivian. Seth is a storm clouds. He’s new student, his long hair watching the activity on and special appearance the gym floor below him covered him with with confused interest, mysteriousness, people like the pep rally is part are always attracted by of some documentary on new things, especially a one of those strange new person. Readers can tribes in the Amazon that see how special and has never had contact attractive the boy is to with modern civilization. Vivian from word phrases like “storm cloud” and “pep rally in strange tribes.” “Vivian, was this you?” Page 41 The success of smoking she asked, arching an Chapter 4 protest gives Vivian some eyebrow. experience of protesting, “I don’t knooooooow,” I it also foreshadowed what said, arching an eyebrow Vivian will do to promote back. “It could be some feminism and sexual anonymous anti-smoking equality in the future. In person.” I loved playing my opinion, anonymous some secret avenger. Even protest can be a good if in my heart I knew I idea. Vivian didn’t tell his wasn’t actually so secret. mother not to smoke My mother rolled her eyes straight away, she alluded at me, but something her mother not to smoke. funny happened after she Vivian’s mother knew found all of the cards. who made these little She stopped smoking. For posters and it was her good. My mission had daughter, I think this is worked. why she stop smoking, for Vivian, not for herself, she wanted to live longer to accompany Vivian more. My heart thrumming, I Page 53 The description of slide into the first girls’ Chapter 5 Vivian's mental activity bathroom I see. Once and movements here inside, I take a breath and highlights the tense reach inside my backpack feeling at this moment. for my copies of Moxie. The embellishment of My hand slips around a exaggerated techniques stack of about twenty has played a role in zines, then pauses. If I further strengthening the pull them out tense atmosphere. and put them down and walk out, I can’t take it Through Vivian’s back. Not with the early conversation to herself in bell ringing in thirty her mind, it is easy for minutes. readers to notice that she’s The plink plink of a tortured by contradictions. drippy sink taunts me in At one side, Vivian sees the background. herself as a normal You. Can’t. You. Can’t. student who stick to the You. Can’t. school discipline and go I’m a girl who studies for along with the crowd. At tests. I’m a girl who turns another side, Vivian wants in homework on time. I’m to be a leader who starts a a girl who tells her justice protest, who stand grandparents she’ll be out in dilemma and tries over in five minutes and to fix it. It is hard to have shows up in three. I’m a the gut to change, and it is girl who doesn’t cause a even harder to start a fuss. I even shrink into my movement for revolution, desk when a teacher calls especially to younger on me in class. I’m a girl people who symbolize who would prefer to immature and tender. evaporate into the ether rather than draw even positive attention to herself. Drip. Drip. Drip. You. Can’t. You. Can’t. I’m worried that talking Page 64 Vivian clearly doesn’t about it too much might Chapter 6 want other people to make me look suspicious know that she’s the one even though me being the who established Moxie. creator of Moxie is about Vivian denies her identity as likely as me visiting the of deserving to become a International Space strong revolutionary Station or inventing the leader to run a cure for cancer in my revolutionary protest, she chem class. At least that’s worries what others will what the people who think of her and she know me would say. worries if no one will I’m not sure if I expected support her. Vivian, just anything to come of it. like everyone else was Maybe it’s all over now. just a normal person, she Maybe making Moxie was also feared to be the only just a way to vent. sapphire butterfly among Sure, Vivian, but why did caterpillars and it’s you include that thing normal to have that about the hearts and stars thought. On the other if you didn’t want it to go side, Vivian also wants anywhere? her plan to work, like I grimace, trying to every girl in East ignore the question, but Rockport, she also wants that’s impossible. Because gender equality. The somewhere inside I do presentation of Vivian’s want the Moxie zines to mental activity and the go somewhere. I know I use of simile here made do. I’m just not sure I the plot of the story more want to commit to being dramatic. Like a glow of the one to take them light in the dark that fades there. Wherever there is. a little before it glows even brighter. The way she says the Page 77 Feminist = Patriarchy word feminists so Chapter 7 casually, so easily, sort of Vivian thought the word blows my mind. “feminist” is not a regular Claudia nods and smiles word to say. Strictly politely, but her eyebrows speaking, feminist can be jump a bit. a sexism word, but in I’ve heard my mom use Rockport, where the word feminist when patriarchy occurs, she talks to old friends on feminism should be taken the phone. (“I mean, into account to balance honestly, Jane, as a out patriarchy. Lucy looks feminist that movie just like a more revolutionary pissed me off.”) Riot kind of person to be the Grrrls were into leader of Moxie, she also feminism, obviously, but has experience of being a up until this moment in leader of a feminist club. the gym I didn’t think of Lucy is a powerful source them as feminists so much to help Vivian in order to as super cool girls who win her protest. took no shit. “Sorry. I didn’t mean to Page 89 The exaggerative style of scare you.” Chapter 8 writing and simile used Oh, you didn’t scare me. here make Vivian’s Just rendered me mute. nervousness when talking Give me like five years, to Seth more obvious. and it should wear off. Different to the awkward “I’m fine,” I manage. circumstance when Vivian “That’s good.” sees John and felt SILENCE. Awkward speechless, Vivian wanted silence. Please, God, to talk. Vivian wanted to don’t let me be grab Seth’s attention in getting those freaky hives this case, she’s just too on my chest and neck like nervous to face Seth, I sometimes do when I’m since they meet each other nervous. I glance down to and talk too suddenly. It’s check. not hard to notice that My chest looks like a Seth also likes Vivian and strawberry farm had a he also felt nervous bumper crop. Dang it. coming up to chat with her. I have a question here, Vivian was simply attracted by Seth’s appearance and mysteriousness here, what if she later found out that Seth was also a person who looks down on woman, will she stop liking him? (Personality vs appearance) Modesty is a virtue that Chapter 9 The dress code policy never goes out of style! Page 101 from East Rockport is What a bastard! I can’t clearly directed against help myself. Glancing up female students, boys to make sure the teacher aren’t getting isn’t paying attention, I punishments for wearing lean over to the rolling- shirts that have eye girls—Marisela Perez inappropriate words on it, and Julia Rivera—and but girls will be criticized whisper, “Have you ever if they’re wearing too noticed he never goes exposed. Thus, I think after the guys wearing Chinese schools solve this those gross shirts about problem very well, most sex?” schools demand students to wear the same uniform from Monday to Friday, and when everyone wears the same shirts and pants, no protests for unfair dress code policy will occur. Back to the book, S “I saw your hands that Page 117 Seth was the first person day,” I answer, aware Chapter 10 to know Vivian is the that I’m actually creator of Moxie, it stringing words and seemed to be the special sentences together and secret shared between not passing out. “You them. I also wonder what marked them with hearts the true purpose of Seth is and stars.” supporting Moxie, is it “I did,” Seth purely out of supporting acknowledges. “I found a feminism or it’s because copy in the hallway. I he likes Vivian? However, guess someone dropped I think that Seth does it. To be honest, I thought want a sexual equalized it was pretty kick-ass.” environment because he Pretty kick-ass. Does that draw hearts and stars on mean he thinks I’m pretty his hand before he knew kick- ass? My chest feels Vivian is Moxie. After like exploding. I decide Seth knew Vivian’s that Seth Acosta deciding identity, he points out that I’m kick-ass is even better he wanted to help putting than him thinking I’m these booklets into boy’s pretty. Definitely better. bathroom, but Vivian “I mean, I can see why refused. This refusing act you’d want this to be a alluded the current lady thing,” Seth says, circumstance of East dragging his hand Rockport, when nearly all through his hair. “You’re boys look down on girls. preaching Bibles full of Seth further grabs truth.” He glances Vivian’s heart by around, his eyes wide and recognizing her actions, his voice a whisper, then and lateral expressing his pronounces, “This school praises for her. is fucked up.” My heart slips back down Page 123 Big environment VS to my chest where it Chapter 11 person belongs. I exhale. I want to walk by them so they’ll Vivian always afraid that see me and know her plan will not get recognized and supported they’re not alone, but just by others. Vivian gets then I feel someone nervous when she’s the collide into my left only one who wear shoulder. bathrobe, but then felt joyful when others also “You did it!” wear it. A protest will not be able to success when It’s Lucy, and she’s there are only few people wearing not only a puffy protesting, so seeing pink bathrobe that makes many girls wearing the her look like a Hostess same type of cloth to go Sno Ball, but also fuzzy against school discipline, pink slippers that match. it can be seen as a successful starting of a protest. In addition, there’s an old idiom in It’s been three days since China, “Roads aren’t the bathrobe stunt, and themselves at the not a single girl has been beginning, they become called out for dress-code roads after many men violations since it walked across them.” happened. (chapter 12) when many girls wear bathrobes, then bathrobes become an appropriate wearing for East Rockport. We got our ASSES Page 149 Chapter 12 is all about the KICKED tonight—lost Chapter 12 first date of Vivian, and it 42–7 ... but who cares was well and truly HOW WAS YOUR described. Anxiety, DATE?!?!?!? nervous, speechless, I know Claudia will hate excitement, me for not responding, embarrassment, and joy but I toss my phone onto were all mixed together. the carpet and slide There are many deeper under the covers, statements in the chapter hoping I’m asleep before when Vivian talks to my mom gets home. I herself about Seth and the don’t think I could stand date. Seems like dialogues one more person asking that Vivian said to herself me how the night went. are even more than dialogues between she and Seth. This approach of writing, presenting more mental activity of a character can serve as an enhancement on the awkward and tense atmosphere. “Is this guy that bad?” Page 151 People can’t fully Claudia asks. Chapter 13 understand a person by I don’t want to have to judging their outfit, make my case to Claudia. movements, and She should be on my side belongings. I think automatically. So I just possible reasons that sigh dramatically and say, Vivian doesn’t like John “I don’t want to talk about is because she’s too into it.” the stereotype that every man supports patriarchy, or it’s because Vivian worries that her mom will care less about her after she make up with John. To conclude, Vivian’s reaction toward John highlights her crisis awareness, insight (understand John by his car, through his talk and action), and determination. This morning, as I make Page: 171 The bump ‘n’ grab my way to English, it Chapter 14 activity started small but happens to me. I can’t grows big, but I wonder even get a sense of which why does every girl that guy does it, he’s so fast, has been harassed didn’t but his fingers manage to do anything to stop it? Or make it just under my they’ve tried to report it to shirt, cold and rough on the school but didn’t my waist. work? First of all, I think I want to yell out, chase the principle was East him down, scream out Rockport did consider loud. But I’m frozen from stopping the event, but the shock of it, standing she considered more so still that some kids about Mitchell, he’s the behind me whine that I’m most important guy blocking the hallway. (sportsman than receive My cheeks burning, I scholarship) in the school, make my way into class. and he brings honor to With just a few days left East Rockport. Under the before break, Mr. Davies pressure of fame and has decided to show the stakes, the principle film version of Romeo decided to ignore the stain and Juliet (even though in East Rockport caused we’ve never read the play, by Mitchell. As time so go figure), and I passed, girls in East collapse into my seat, Rockport felt numb to thankful for the cool daily harassments from darkness of the classroom. boys, so much of them Lucy leans toward me choose to endure. over her desk. Although Vivian was the “You, okay? Your face is head of Moxie, but she’s all red.” not a new student like Lucy who’s still tough, she is ultimately an ordinary high school student. Therefore, Vivian wanted to scream but didn’t, the fear of environment has deeply rooted into her bones. However, bump ‘n’ grab may be the trigger to let Vivian further confirm her protest career, to change this circumstance. Did she get in trouble at Chapter 15 Vivian sees Claudia as her school? No, Claudia isn’t Page: 188 best friend, she started to a Goody Two-shoes, but think and concern without she’s not a troublemaker Claudia opening her either. mouth, she started to Finally, she sits up and concern about Claudia takes a big, shaky breath, through her action and then wipes the last few expression. Claudia didn’t tears away from her tell Vivian her problem at cheeks. first, she first thinks of “I’m sorry ... that I didn’t Vivian. Claudia text you back last night.” immediately apologized I frown. “Claudia, fuck for not texting back to that! That doesn’t matter. Vivian last night, but Don’t apologize. I want to Vivian clearly cared more know what happened to about the reason why you!” I squeeze her hands Claudia looks so pale at and then wrap my arms this time. From Claudia around her. I’m so much and Vivian’s mental bigger than Claudia that I activity and dialogue, it can always get a really shows how strong and good hold on her when unbreakable their we hug, and right now relationship is. I’m especially grateful for it. Through Mitchell’s “Well, when I was action, he clearly thinks walking out of the girls’ that he’s the boss of East locker room, I ran into Rockport and he gets to Mitchell Wilson.” She do basically whatever he sort of spits his name out wants. Mitchell sees —all four syllables. Then Claudia’s action of she shuts her eyes and accidentally bumping into shakes her head. him as an offense toward Something heavy starts his authority, and he descending over me, and I decided to react dirty to it. know I could be an actual On one hand of giant and I would still feel maintaining his own like I’m being crushed. identity and power, it also “You know that hallway, presents the severe gender right outside of the locker inequality problem in East rooms?” Rockport. Touching a The hallway that’s not girl’s private parts is that well-lit. The hallway already impolite under that’s usually empty. The accident condition, not to hallway with no mention how bad it is to classrooms or coaches’ intentionally touch. My offices or teachers impression to Mitchell hanging out, gossping has further been with each other in the downgraded, but I still corners. think that Mitchell can be I nod, starting to feel sick. a much different person if “Well, Mitchell walks up he choose to go to another to me, just, like, comes school, everyone will right at me, and does that somehow get affected by fucking bump ’n’ grab the surrounding bullshit,” she says. environment with “Only ... when he grabs different degree. In me, he just, like, pins me addition to the up against the wall and he topic(Mitchell’s actually slides his hand up ridiculous action to under my shirt. And he, Claudia) Vivian and like...” She pinches up her Claudia are discussing, it face, wincing. “He, like, again shows how grabbed me. Grabbed one unbreakably their of my breasts and friendship is because squeezed it.” Claudia shares sensitive That motherfucking messages about herself to asshole. Vivian. She shrugs and carefully Chapter 16 Based on previous peels back the lid of some Page 200 chapters, Vivian didn’t Rocky Road. “Just this have good impressions argument about politics. toward John, it is fair to He said he didn’t think say that she even hated Ann Richards was that him and wanted mom to great of a governor.” leave him. Things I stare at her, confused. changed after Seth kissed “Ann Richards, sweetie. Vivian, the kiss I’ve told you about her. symbolized relationship She was the governor of and love, and Vivian Texas back in the ’90s and accepted the kiss from she was super tough and him. Therefore, Vivian super smart.” She taps her and Seth have officially finger on the bright pink become lovers, but refrigerator magnet that something changed. reads, “Ginger Rogers did Vivian started to concern everything Fred Astaire about John, she clearly did—just backward and in sees Seth more important high heels.” than her revolution, so she “Ann loved quoting that started to worry that if line,” my mother tells me, mom and John break up, smiling faintly. will it affect her “Oh yeah,” I say. I like relationship with Seth. hearing about tough There is also another way ladies, but I’m anxious to to interpret this. Vivian’s make my mother relive relationship with Seth something negative about dragged her out of the John. “So what did John dark pool, she was in a say?” better situation now. Maybe Vivian used to hate John because she doesn’t like to see her mom enjoying the joy of love when she’s suffering with things in East Rockport. However, since Vivian established a relationship with Seth, she have the mood to concern for others. “Girls, to say I’m angry Chapter 17 When boys at East would be an Page 211 Rockport are doing understatement,” he offensive things like begins. “I’m livid. There wearing shirts about se are stickers all over boys’ and doing the Bump ‘n’ lockers and reports that grab activity, or touching girls are placing stickers girls’ breast, principal on boys’ shirts.” I’m Wilson didn’t do anything surprised he doesn’t to stop it. Clearly, this mention his truck. I hope shows that he either is a it’s because he’s too principle who only cared embarrassed. “This about honor and fame, or destruction of school he is a sexist, or even property must stop. This both. I’m not sure the bad behavior must stop. reason he’s angry, is he Immediately. The cost to angry of the stickers on remove these stickers will the locker or female eat into the school budget, students starting to rebel so in the end, you’re only and get their rights back. hurting yourselves.” Overall, the comparison of principal Wilson’s reaction toward inappropriate things that boys and girls did present the sexism and patriarchy environment around East Rockport. “Well, she basically hated Chapter 18 Dark night, calm scene, living here when she was Page 229 and ease wall made a teenager and she had people think deep, people this whole plan to leave then grow through deep East Rockport, and she thinking. Vivian thought did it. Then because of me of her mother through she had to come back and walking and talking with live next door to her mom Seth, this is the first time and dad. She works long she thought about her hours to make ends meet mom, she feels sympathy and does it all on her own. for her mother. Therefore, This guy John that she’s this chapter symbolized dating, he’s only the growth, maturity, and love second boyfriend she’s (love to parents). had in my whole life.” It’s a system of brackets Chapter 19 Well, the March Madness with sixty-four junior and Page: 241 system is much more senior girls, about a ridiculous than putting quarter of the girls in each moxie stickers on lockers, class. The rest aren’t and in seeming turns into included because they’re a long-term ritual at East not deemed ballot-worthy. Rockport because of The brackets are created principal Wilson’s by the upperclassmen neglection towards it. guys who rule the school Defining a person by their —the jocks and the “fuckability” is clearly popular guys. The unacceptable, a person Mitchell Wilsons of our have many other world. Over the course of identities, and also, a couple of weeks, they sticking name tag to a girl use some complicated and call her the most system of voting and fuckable woman in East personal testimony to pit Rockport will also bring girls against each other as severe harm to her. I think the brackets lead to one that march madness isn’t girl in the junior or senior an activity that a normal class. The final girl is person could come up referred to—casually and with, the person who frequently—as East come up with this system Rockport’s Most is totally a pervert and Fuckable. sexist. I’m also very curious about how moxie would stop March Madness since the moxie club will be closed by the school soon. When I made this issue of Chapter 20 The use of simile made Moxie, I felt rage Page: 254 Vivian’s feeling toward coursing through me like starting Moxie and steam. Like a venomous enlarging Moxie more snake. And when I slipped obvious. Vivian described on a hoodie this morning Moxie as an issue because before distributing the it brings too much copies, I felt like a soldier trouble. However, Vivian on a dangerous mission, has to do this, or the determined to succeed no problem of sexism will matter what. The anger just get more severe. was enough to make me Moxie changed Vivian to almost forget what a a person with more treacherous position I was maturity, dignity, and putting myself in. bravery. I hope Vivian can also change East Rockport school to a school with more gender equality, harmony, and fairness. As I watch Lucy spin and Chapter 21 Now Vivian has knock her dark curls Page: 269 completed the around, and as I listen to transformation from an Claudia laugh and sing ordinary high school along (badly), it occurs to student to a mature me that this is what it revolutionary. She is no means to be a feminist. longer a coward, she is no Not a humanist or an longer timid, she is no equalist or whatever. But longer afraid of setbacks. a feminist. It’s not a bad She is a feminist who word. After today it might firmly opposes people be my favorite word. like Mitchell who discriminate against women. She brings light, equality, and kindness to East Rockport High School. I walk into class, blinking Chapter 22 Vivian has deeply fallen back tears I didn’t know Page: 279 into his revolutionary were threatening to spill career, so he also takes it out. for granted that his “You okay?” Claudia asks boyfriend Seth should as I take my seat in front support him. However, of her. Seth questioned her “I just got into a...” I viewpoint because there search for a better word, was insufficient evidence but there isn’t one. “I got to prove that Mitchell was into a fight with Seth. He a rapist. Seth's rational was saying he wonders if thinking was not wrong, the girl who made the but Vivian also flyer is even telling the mistakenly believed that truth.” Seth did not support her. I think Seth's thinking is very good, and I also appreciate his rational thinking. However, Seth, as Vivian's boyfriend, should also support her ideas. So, if I were Seth, I might help Vivian find evidence to prove that Mitchell is a rapist. “Mitchell,” she says, Chapter 23 Vivian was still her voice clear and Page: 298 contradicting inside cutting. “Fuck you.” herself, the fear of being the first one to do big And she walks out. things is still deeply rooted in her bones. She’s not two steps However, she made out the door before I improvements, she at least get up and follow, was encouraging herself my skin buzzing, my inside to stand up and heart on fire. In that leave. Also, she learned to moment I don’t even be a leader who supports care if any other girl everyone, she followed is following me. All I Emma not just because know is that I won’t she meant to, but also as a let Emma walk out supporter of her to alone. resolutely resist Mitchell. “I’m sorry if I acted like a Chapter 24 Nobody is perfect, people dumb ass,” Seth blurts Page: 313 can’t read each other’s out. I smile. “You’re not a mind, but this doesn’t dumb ass,” I say. split two lovers. If you “I shouldn’t have doubted love someone, this means what the flyer said. I that you love the cons and should have tried to pros of that person, you understand better what like his/her humorous Moxie was all about.” way of talking, at the “Well,” I say, “I shouldn’t meantime accepting have expected you to be her/his naughtiness. When perfect.” two people start to “Nobody is,” says Seth. understand each other “Especially not me. But I better and accepting their promise that from now on weakness, this is when we I’m going to try to listen define that as love. People better about the stuff I get their first impression can’t totally understand of another person through because I’m a guy.” their physical appearance, “See, there you go,” I but eventually, what they whisper, our eyes truly love must be the meeting. “You say you’re inside of a person, how not perfect, but that they act, talk, and do. answer makes me think Vivian is successful, not you’re pretty close.” only successful on moxie and Seth, but moreover gaining a meaningful experience. I smile at Emma. Of Chapter 25 The book ends with a course I have time. It’s the Page: 322 good ending, with a summer, with long, lazy successful rebel and days ahead of me. Ahead relationship. Initially, of us. Perfect for Vivian struggles to dreaming. Perfect for balance her own self- scheming. Perfect for interest and fear with her planning how Moxie girls rage and desire to help fight back. others. However, she grows through experiencing revolution, decisions, relationship, and communications. Eventually, she became a feminist who persistently protects the right of girls. In reality, she should all be like Vivian, having the gut to stand against evilness and supporting gender equality.