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Hook:

Would two people with the same level of talent win gold in an
event if they had different levels of discipline? Can discipline
be the deciding factor between winning and losing?
Stand:
Absolutely agree
Thesis Statement:
Talent is a key factor to any outcome but discipline can be the
diciding clip in the game of winning and losing because it
polishes talent, creates opportunities for improvement and
increases the chance to sustain winning streaks(A series of
consecutive successes, a run of good luck,).

Point 1:
TS: Discipline determine if a person wins or loses because
high discipline will help a person polish their talent to beat
others in their field
R: Discipline will help them to be methodological (relating to the
system of methods used in a particular area of study or activity.) about learning al aspects of their field
and this commitment will improve their level of proficiency and lead to wins and more successes to
come. If they do not have structure from a regimented 受管制的training schedule, they may not be
able to perfect their grasp of all the nuances (slidely difference)of their field of competition.
EX:Sportmen like weight lifers and sprinters such as Usain
Bolt or people who compete in chess games or even Poker
need a disciplined training schedule to help them learn the
basics, explore the dfference strategics and alternative
techniques to improve their performance stc.
C:Discipline ultimately hones talent to give a person the
much-need edge to win ot at least prepare them to win.

TOPIC 2
TS:Discipline allows a person a beyyer chance at wnning
because it creates better opportunities for a person to improve
in their field
R:When a person has high discipline, and they work
systematically to improve their knowledge or their game
strategics, it will then create more opportunities for them to go
up the ranks and challenge others that are at a similar par to
them. This will push them upwards and give them the chance
to shine compared to those with talent but no discipline, hence
missing the opportunities to become better in their chosen
field.
EX: Tennis players that have good discipline go up the ranks
and may even create upsets when beating the seede players
like Naomi Osaka who is the dirst Asina player to hold the tip
ranking insingles most likely due to their strict discipline in
training
C:We can have a higher chance to win if we focus on a good
training strategy that opens more doors of opportunity to go
against others in the same field, working their way upwards
steadily.

POINT 3
TS:Winning on fluke (an unlikely chance occurrence, especially a surprising piece of
luck) is mathematically possible but sustaining a winning streak takes high discipline.

R:Discipline can ndeed guarantee success more than failure


because it cultivates your muscle memory to execute the
moves or strategies after preactising thousands of times. It
then becomes much easer to obtain the same winning outcome
time and time again with such high levels of discipline.
EX:People at the top of their game do not just stop training or
practicing, they have the discipline to go back to whiteboard
and start from scratch or trying different strategies to maintain
their winning streal just like how ice-skaters likeNathan Chen
of Japan and gymnasts like Farah Ann of Malaysia waycj and
rewatch their performance videos to learn from mistakes and
improve their delivery to keep them on the podium (the
position of first, second, or third place in a sports

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