 Not clear who the target audience, probably teenagers.

We guessed it could be intended for

a textbook or maybe for a website. It seems to us that it could be a blog post or something
similar. In that case, it would need more structure, links to other websites, diagrams, more
colours, etc.
 The layout is poor and a bit boring, there is only one picture and too much text, even if it is
intended for a textbook. Some sections could be highlighted, they could use more diagrams
and colours and use the bold or cursive font styles in some sections and titles.
 If the target audience are teenagers, they would not enjoy reading the text and would not
identify themselves with it.
 Changes in structure: divide it into clearer sections, make the titles clearer and corresponding
to each section.
 We don’t understand the purpose of the text.
 We cannot say whether the text meets genre requirements because it isn’t clear to us what
type of text it is.
 Some sections of the text do not sound appropriate and there are some syntactic and
grammar mistakes. We also find that the wording is a bit weird in some parts, e.g. “impure
stuff”, and in general the vocabulary is a bit poor.
 There is a section where they ask if one of your friends is being cyber-bullied, and a couple of
lines below they explain what cyberbullying is. We think it would make more sense to
introduce the definition first and then apply it, not the other way around.