Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Business Communication
in English
Semester ONE
HENRY Caroline
JAMES Johnnie
LHEOTE Mary
MASSET-BEACH Melanie
NEAVYN Barbara
ROBERTS Paul
SOHET Belinda
STEAD Joanne
The main objective of the English course is to introduce students to the language and vocabulary
necessary to be operational in an English-speaking professional and academic environment. The
lectures will address one of the primary objectives of NEOMA BS, “to communicate through different
business situations and media in several languages” and more specifically to CESEM “to relate
managerial practices across cultures and across disciplines”.
Through a variety of themes linked to the world of business, students will acquire fundamental
linguistic and communication skills through role-plays, case studies, team projects etc. Professional
and academic writing skills will also form an intrinsic part of the lectures so that students will be able
to deliver high quality academic work respecting register, structure, and research etiquette.
Learning Outcomes:
Semester 1 will focus on the acquisition of academic and professional linguistic skills: public speaking,
debating, academic writing, note taking.
Lesson 1 Who’s Who? - IELTS Speaking Section Introduction - Company Practice on Speaking Section 1
Vocabulary with partner. Revise company
vocab
Lesson 2 IELTS Speaking continued & Presentation Skills Practice Speaking sections 2
&3
Lesson 3 Management Styles Research work; Road to
IELTS study plan
Lesson 4 Leadership & Management Styles continued Group preparation of
PowerPoint presentation
Lesson 5 MS PowerPoint presentations Self-practice IELTS Speaking;
Road to IELTS study plan
Lesson 6 Introduction to IELTS Writing Task 1 Complete any exercises
Lesson 7 Commentary on Company Performance (WT 1-related Road to IELTS study plan
task)
Lesson 8 Grammar Pitfalls Practice WT1 in groups of 3
Lesson 9 Introduction to IELTS Writing Task 2
Lesson 10 Introduction to IELTS Listening & Reading Practice WT2 in groups of 3
Via ZOOM
Lesson 11 Group work on IELTS Writing Tasks 1 & 2 Look over Writing Task skills
Lesson 12 Full Mock Exam - IELTS
Lesson 13 Grammar & Vocab Consolidation Consolidate grammar points
Lesson 14 The Field of Luxury Research into the luxury
Listening Comprehension - The Apprentice. market
Lesson 15 HCC Going global Project Research into the male
fragrance market
Lesson 16 Advertising & the Henri Claude Marketing Mission Complete any remaining
exercises
Lesson 17 Henri Claude Marketing Mission Meeting and group Prepare group PowerPoint
preparation of PowerPoint presentations presentations
Lesson 18 Group PowerPoint presentations of the Henri Claude Note reading from
Marketing Mission. (CC Oral Mark) Marketing PowerPoint
presentations
Lesson 19 Introduction to Short Report Writing (HC example) Exam preparation and
revision
Lesson 20 Exam Revision
Evaluation
100% Composed of ONE final written assignment mark & ONE oral assignment mark - namely: Going
Global Case Study (Oral) 35%; Road to IELTS 10 %; IELTS WT1 10% & IELTS WT2 25%; Soft Skills 20%)
January exam: Weighted as 40 % of final first semester mark (QCM Vocabulary/Grammar; IELTS-
oriented Writing Tasks)
All written tasks will be assessed using the following mark breakdown of /20.
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IELTS
In Semester 2 you will sit the official IELTS certification. Your performance in the IELTS certificate is a
photograph of your command of English written and oral comprehension, as well as your written and
oral expression.
Obtaining a satisfactory score in IELTS will be essential to your studies in a foreign university.
Furthermore, your studies in 3rd and 4th year will be conducted exclusively in English so you must
demonstrate a sufficient command of the language in order to pursue your studies successfully.
Formal Preparation:
Your teacher will introduce the test format and provide exercises & tests.
There will be an in class mock IELTS in Semester 1.
Advice and guidance from your teacher throughout the semester.
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Lesson ONE
IELTS Speaking
The IELTS Speaking section generally consists of personal questions about familiar topics. You will
be expected to speak correctly, clearly, and with ease and confidence in response to each question.
The Speaking section is divided into FOUR parts.
For this lesson, we will concentrate on Part 1.
You will be required to speak to your classmates in order to find out who’s who.
Sample questions...
Let’s talk about accommodation:
Tell me about the kind of accommodation you live in.
How long have you lived there?
What do you like about living there?
What sort of accommodation would you most like to live in?
4/ The percentage of the market for a product or service that a company supplies ; ___________
9/ An official right to be the only person/company allowed to make or sell a product/service ; ______
10/ To present a product/service to the public for the first time ; ________
14/ The advantage that you have over your competitors ; ________
15/ Direct costs attributable to the production of the goods sold by a company ; ___________
16/ The fact of a customer repeatedly buying products or services from the same company ; _______
18/ A form of analysis that identifies the strengths, weaknesses, opportunities and threats of an
organization ; _________
19/ Cash or anything that can be sold (e.g. stock) - converted into cash within a year ; _________
21/ An article that is sold cheaply in order to attract the public and make them buy other items ; ___
23/ A person or firm to whom money is due (as opposed to debtor) ; __________
26/ The amount of a product which is available (offered) and the amount which is wanted by
customers ; ____________
32/ A statement of the financial position of a business which states the assets, liabilities, and owners'
equity at a particular point in time ; ___________
35/ The act of predicting business activity for a future period of time ; __________
A/ Read the following list of possible reasons why companies exist and prioritise your answers
(from the most important reason = 1 to the least important reason = 8).
5/Conditions of service?
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6/ Working environment?
a) small private office b) large open-plan offices
7/ Working hours?
a) respecting the legal maximum b) working the time it takes to get the job done.
8/ Holidays?
a) just the legal minimum and no more b) paid leave to compensate for the high level of
employee commitment
11/ Teamwork?
a) lots b) some c) none
14/ Perks?
a) a company car b) discount on the company’s products c) none but higher basic pay
Lesson TWO
I’m going to present... /explain our position on... /brief you on… /inform you about...
/describe...
Referring to questions
If you don't mind, we’ll leave questions till the end.
I’ll be glad/happy/pleased to answer any questions at the end of my talk.
After my talk there’ll be time for discussion and questions.
The hook
Did you know that…
What would you do if/Have you ever...?
Recently, I…
Effective Openings - The HOOK.
The first three minutes of a presentation are the most important. A ‘hook’ is a simple technique for
getting the immediate attention of the audience. A good start makes you feel more confident.
Use the structures below to help you prepare effective openings by using……
1/ PROBLEM Technique
Now practice a brief introduction with a hook, using the models above.
Checking understanding
Is that clear so far?/Are there any questions?
Conclusion
Signalling the end
That brings me to the end of my presentation.
That completes my presentation.
Before I stop/finish let me just say....
That covers all I wanted to say today.
Summarising
Let me just run over the key points again.
I’ll briefly summarise the main issues...
To sum up...
Concluding
As you can see, there are some good reasons for...
In conclusion...
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Answering questions
I’d be glad to try and answer any questions.
Any questions?
Use your hands to emphasize your ideas, therefore keep them out of your pockets!
Do not just read from the PowerPoint - the audience knows how to read!
Greeting?
Hook?
Register – appropriate for content & audience? No verbal tics “Like” or slang/swearing?
Eye contact?
General PowerPoint images & slides - good visuals, clear & concise slides? Key facts on slides
(names/dates/figures)? No spelling mistakes?
Restatement of objective?
Face the audience, but point to the relevant elements on the screen.
Always have TWO computers and a USB key ready per presentation.
In the Speaking Part 2 test you will be given a task card on a particular topic, and this will include key
points that you should talk about.
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This section of the test gives you the opportunity to speak for longer on a topic.
You will be given one minute to prepare to talk about the topic on the task card.
The examiner will ask you one or two questions on the same topic (approximately 1 minute.
To conclude Part 2 section of the Speaking test, you will be asked ‘rounding-off’ questions…
Tell me :
In Part 3of the Speaking test the examiner will ask further questions which are connected to the
topics discussed in Part 2.
Leading on from the Part 2 task card dealing with what you value most in Life…
Sample questions…
Part 2
Talk about a road trip you have done.
You should say:
Who you did it with…
What happened on the trip…
Why you remember it…
Explain how a road trip can change your life.
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Why do people prefer to take cars even though it takes longer than the train?
Part 2
What it was…
Part 2
Talk about something you did that might have had a negative result but ended up positive.
Do you think that when we stop taking risks we stop living life?
Lesson THREE
What is management?
Management is the function that coordinates the efforts of people to accomplish objectives, using
available resources efficiently and effectively.
What is the role of a manager? Choose your top three roles from the following and explain your
ideas.
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Managers should:
2/ know where you are and what you are doing at all times during working hours.
7/ keep their distance from staff and not get involved in socialising outside work.
Democratic (Participative)
Welcomes the others’ contribution in the decision-making process.
Every decision is made with the majority's agreement.
Paternalistic (Persuasive)
In the best interest of company/ employees.
When the management makes a decision, it is explained to the employees & obtains their support as
well. Maintains a high morale within the organization.
Laissez-faire (Delegative/Chaotic)
Hands-off, laid-back management.
The manager is a facilitator for the staff.
The employees take the responsibility of different areas of their work.
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1/ Phil Knight is an American business magnat, who is the co-founder of NIKE and has an estimated
net worth of __________ .
3/ At the time of the company’s creation, where and by whom were the best running shoes made ?
5/ The key element is _________ and getting them to __________ , for a common ______ .
6/ To motivate the work force, you must create the right __________ and give them a little
__________ .
7/ It is important to recognize that each __________________ and that you should not
_________________ .
8/ The whole focus of the first ten years of the company was ____________ with large amounts of
investment in ______________ .
9/ However, it is vital to find a ________ in the market and have a reason to _________ .
11/ An entrepreneur must be prepared to cope with the _______ moments, when everything is on
___________ .
12/ Much of NIKE’s success today came from the _____________ of the mid-80s _____________ ;
deciding ________ and defining the __________ .
13/ Unlike many other entrepreneurs, Knight says that getting help should indeed be encouraged as
part of a lifelong search for ________ .
16/ The corporate HQ in Oregan is a _________ to sporting excellence. The workers there are
referred to as ‘____________’ .
18/ To Knight, NIKE is more than just a ________ , it is more than just _________ . It is a _________ .
1/ autocratic a/ collaborative
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2/ centralising b/ controlling
3/ directive c/ delegating
4/ empowering d/ democratic
5/ hands-on e/ people-orientated
6/ task-orientated f/ laissez-faire
C/ Read the article below about Anna Wintour, Chief Executive of Vogue, the fashion
magazine and decide which of these statements are true for this CEO.
1/ Thinks most meetings are a waste of time.
1/ Not caring if you have to harm others to get what you want.
temper. He was completely ruth less and did not care about his staff at all. He acted like a
dictator. He had a ……….. management style, insisting that everything was exactly right.
He was also very demanding, making us work really unsociable hours. In my new company,
the managers are good communicators, decision-making is open and transparent and the
style is ………….. Management is by consensus. All the staff are ……….. and experts in
their own fields. They are ............and trusted to work without supervision.
Anna Wintour
60 Minutes' Morley Safer interviews Vogue's Editor in her first lengthy U.S. T.V. profile. She is said
to be the most powerful woman in fashion and she does nothing to dispel that belief. Her name is
Anna Wintour, a name that strikes terror in some and loathing in others. It should also be said she
commands a loyal band of friends and admirers. "The blurb on your unauthorized biography reads
'She's ambitious, driven, needy, a perfectionist'. Accurate?" 60 Minutes correspondent Morley
Safer asked Wintour. "Well, I am very driven by what I do. I am certainly very competitive. I like
people who represent the best of what they do, and if that turns you into a perfectionist. then
maybe I am ,"
Wintour replied.
Wintour is involved in every detail of the magazine: the clothes, editing the pictures and articles.
She is decis ive, impatient . and bears a look that says "I'm the boss, and you're boring." "An editor
in the final analysis is a kind of dictator-a magazine is not a democracy?" Safer asked. "lt's a group
of people coming together and presenting ideas from which I pick what I think is the best mix for
each particular issue, but in the end. the final decision has to be mine." Wintour explained. "We're
here to work. There's on-duty time and off-duty time, and we·re drawn together by our passion for
the magazine. If one comes across sometimes as bei ng cold or brusque. it's simply because rm
striving for the best." "lt 's not Ii ke a tea party here. We work very hard," Vogue's Editor-at-large
Andre Leon Talley told Safer. Asked what kind of boss she is. Talley told Safer, "Let's say thatAnna
can be intimidating. I think that is her armor, to intimidate. To give the people the sense that she is
in charge. She is not a person who's going to show you her emotions ever. She's like a doctor,
when she's looking at your work. it's like a medical analysis." Vogue Creative Director Grace
Coddington says, "I think she enjoys not being completely approachable, you know. Just her office
is very intimidating. right? You have to walk about a mile into the office before you get to her desk,
and I'msure it's intentional."
G/ Give the opposite meaning for each of these adjectives, using the prefixes:
in-, ir-, un-, il- or dis-. Then provide the noun forms.
1/ considerate 9/ loyal
2/ competent 10/organized
7/ inspiring
8/ logical
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Lesson FOUR
«A true leader is born, not made. They simply have brains that are wired differently to most».
«A leader does not lead through official authority and power alone, they also do so through
inspiration, persuasion and personal connections».
«Leaders don’t lead by telling people what they have to do. Instead, leaders cause
people to want to help them».
«Understanding social networks and key influencers in that social network is another key part of
leadership».
«Leadership is more often than not about “soft skills” rather than hard skills».
«Great leaders are born, but it takes circumstances to make them great. Some are
born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them».
«Leaders are like scientists ; they learn by trying out new techniques and figuring out
what will work and what will not work».
«While many see 'failure', as negative, leaders see this as the potential to take a bad situation and
create something good out of it».
«The most successful leaders have more grey matter in places that control decision-
making, self-regulation and memory, giving them a vital edge».
«Most people can ride a bicycle, but not everyone can be an Olympic winner. It's the same with
management and leadership».
«Leaders network with people higher up the food chain in order to rise».
«Effective leaders look forward to change because it brings far more opportunity
than statis».
A/ Which of the above statements do you agree with? Explain your reasons.
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Vocab Consolidation
Fill in the gaps with the appropriate vocab.
highway subordinate to delegate bossy hands-on people-oriented involved
self-starter proactive laid-back selfish loyalty consistent the bigger picture
to take advantage conflict resolution trouble-shooting participative to empower
task-oriented demanding driven assertive
1/ Someone who is _________ behaves confidently and is not frightened to say what they want or
believe but does so without shocking or offending other people.
3/ The process of identifying, planning and resolving a problem, error or fault ; _________ .
6/ Having a broad, long-range vision that is not distracted by detail ; to see ____________ .
7/ Closely involved in managing and organizing things and in making decisions ; _______ .
10/ To unfairly get what you want from someone, to your own benefit ; _________ .
11/ A workplace where each individual is respected, valued and empowered is ___________ .
12/ An individual who gives people orders and who wants things his/her own way ; _______ .
13/ A person who is sufficiently motivated or ambitious to work on their own initiative without
needing direction is a ___________ .
14/ Style of management in which the boss involves subordinates in goal setting, problem solving
etc ; _____________ .
15/ Focused on getting a job done without worrying about the personal development or satisfaction
of the team ; ____________ .
16/ Making others work hard or meet high standards; not easily satisfied (adj) ; ___________ .
17/ Taking action to make changes rather than just reacting to things that happen ; _________ .
20/ Someone who is informal, relaxed and not too demanding is __________ .
In mini groups, select a leader/manager in the business world – past or present – in order to give a
PowerPoint presentation (around 12 mins) offering an analysis of the personal profile and
influence of the individual, their management style and its pros and cons. The presentations will
be performed in Lesson FIVE.
Refer to Presentation Checklist and respect target language & register.
Lesson FIVE
Do not just read from the PowerPoint - the audience knows how to read!
Greeting?
Hook?
Register – appropriate for content & audience? No verbal tics “Like” or slang/swearing?
Eye contact?
General PowerPoint images & slides - good visuals, clear & concise slides? Key facts on slides
(names/dates/figures)? No spelling mistakes?
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Lesson SIX
IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 (data-based writing)
In the IELTS exam, you have 2O mins to write an answer of 150 words minimum in response to a
given task, focused on visual data – ie an infographic (chart/graph/table/diagram). The final band
score (1-9) is based on your Lexical Resource, Grammatical Range and Accuracy, Coherence and
Cohesion & Task Achievement (each worth 25%).
The response to this task is an objective (neutral) written description of the facts. This is not an essay,
where you are expected to explain, elaborate, give meanings, draw conclusions and make
predictions. There are no personal references (I/me/we).
The Introduction
Start your Task 1 answer by introducing the graph from your question, writing 1-2 sentences to say
what your graph shows and for what period of time (if there is one).
To do this, underline the key words in the IELTS task statement and the visual data to focus your
attention and then paraphrase the information given. You do not have to make up a completely new
introduction. Just take the given topic as a base, and change/add some details, use different forms of
vocab (noun – verb etc).
The graph/chart/table/diagram (do not change the name of your visual data):
The table compares five companies in terms of the number of employees.” OR “The table illustrates
the number of employees in five companies.”
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Paraphrase
shows the number of people ... = shows how many people ...
depicts changes in spending on ... = depicts how much/how far spending on ...changed….
75% of global expenditure was spent on food in 1990, while only 20% was allocated on
education.
= 75% of global expenditure was spent on food in 1990, while only a fifth was allocated on
education.”
The proportion of foreign students experienced an increase from 25% to 31% in 2004.
= The proportion of foreign students experienced an increase from 25% to just below a third in
2004.
A minority of – 5% -10%
A small/insignificant number of – around 2%
Just over a fifth – around 22%
Just under a fifth – around 18%
Nearly a fifth, almost 19%,
Slightly less than a quarter – 23%
A small fraction, a moderate number, a small minority
More than two fifths – around 42%
Approximately half – 48%
Double
Twice as many/much
Around a fifth – 19%
In the region of 40%
A significant portion, the overwhelming majority
Increased three-fold
Around two thirds
More or less three quarters
A large/significant number of – around 70%
A large/considerable proportion of – around 80%
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In the 2004 Olympic Games, China won 32 gold medals, while Japan won 16 gold medals.
= In the 2004 Olympic Games, China won twice as many gold medals as Japan.
Between 2010 and 2015, £20,000 was spent on advertising, whereas in 2016 it was
£40,000.
= Between 2010 and 2015, £20,000 was spent on advertising, whereas in 2016 it was twice
as much/twice that amount..
In 1998, the proportion of unemployed people was 15%. 2 years later, it increased to 45%.
= In 1998, the proportion of unemployed people was 15%. 2 years later, it saw a threefold
increase/it increased threefold.
There was a twofold increase in homelessness over the given period/Homelessness
increased twofold…
The Overview
It is vital to give an overview in your writing, preferably straight after the Introduction or possibly
after your final body paragraph. It is best to write 'Overall,…' when giving an overview so that it is
clearly highlighted. Without an overview, your writing will not accomplish the task set and you will
lose points for your band score of Task Achievement.
You should not state any specific details in the overview, simply write what is shown on the graph in
a general sense. Briefly describe the major trends on your visual support. Ideally, you should describe
2-3 key features (do not give precise figures etc here).
The present simple is used to introduce the topic (This line graph depicts…), but then if the
infographics refer to the finished past (years provided on data), use a past tense. Likewise, if the
material gives dates concerning the future, use an appropriate future form (present progressive,
going to, will etc).
eg
The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005
and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where
relevant.
= Introduction…
The line graph illustrates the percentage of households recycling in the UK, France and Germany
from 2005 to 2015.
= Overview…
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Overall, the recycling rates of the UK and Germany showed a steady but significant rise over the period,
while the percentage of recycled waste in France experienced a downward trend.
(Basically, in the overview you are saying - UK and Germany’s rates ↑ , France’s rates ↓, but without
giving any numbers…)
After the overview, you should group data by some feature (category/trend etc) and give specific
details (figures etc) to support this.
In Writing Task 1 you are not giving your opinion, you are just giving a written description of visual
data provided.
eg.
In 2005 the recycling rates of the UK and Germany were nearly 35% and 20% respectively.
Germany's rate increased sharply throughout the period, exceeding France's rate in 2009 and
reaching almost 60% in the end of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste
in the UK grew to 40% in 2007, and then remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011 it
experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in
2015.
In early 2005 the recycling rate of France (50%) was the highest among these three countries.
However, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015, but
France's recycling rate was the lowest in the end of the period.
The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
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The introduction is 1 or 2 sentences, paraphrasing the statement information, mentioning what the
what graph shows, and for what period of time.
eg
The bar chart provides information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between
2011 and 2015.
The general overview is the second paragraph of your answer, briefly describing major trends
without numbers…, starting with ‘Overall….’.On the graph here, it is obvious that:
Sample Overview =
Overall, Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout
the period. Both countries’ divorce rates had some fluctuations. Although Finland initially had a lower
rate, it overtook Sweden at the end of the period.
The Body paragraphs provide detailed information. When you have two countries (or any other
two things depicted on the graph), the simplest way of grouping data is to describe each entity’s
trend in a separate paragraph. NB* When analyzing a bar-chart, we cannot always give exact details
(due to inaccuracies of the chart), so use words around, about & approximately when giving inexact
data.
Sweden’s divorce rate was about 45% in 2011, being higher than Finland’s rate by approximately 8%.
Then, it rose to almost fifty percent in 2012. However, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about
47% in 2013 and continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014
and hitting a low-point of about 37% in 2015.
Percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012, when about
one third of marriages in Finland ended with a divorce (as opposed to almost a half in Sweden).
However, the figure experienced a steady growth during the next two years. It rose to approximately
39% in 2013, then increased by around 3% in 2014, and remained steady for the next year, outracing
the rate of Sweden.
The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy
of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons
where relevant.
The Introduction
Look at the information from the task statement, underline key words and paraphrase the whole in
the following way:
shows → illustrates
the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey →
how different industry sectors contributed to the Turkish economy
percentage-wise
in 2000 and 2016 → in the years 2000 and 2016.
NB *pie charts = pie charts (do not change this)
Sample Introduction =
The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the Turkish economy
percentage-wise in the years 2000 and 2016.
The Overview
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Give your overall view in one or two sentences. There are two main options to describe key features
here:
The smallest segment = contributed the least to…/made the lowest contribution to…/made
up the smallest part of the chart/was the least significant part of ….
The largest segment = contributed the most to…/made the greatest contribution/made up
the biggest part of the chart/was the most significant part of …
Use linking words such as:
Overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of Turkey
and agriculture was the most significant economic sector. In comparison, at the end of the period
healthcare and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was
made by financial, business and other services.
accounted for/represented/made up
to experience an increase/decrease
Sample Body Paragraphs =
The construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey's economy in 2000, and experienced a more than
threefold increase to 12% in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14%
in 2000 and experienced a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the period, manufacturing
and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of Turkey's economy, respectively, and
these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016.
Agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey's economy in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In
2000 economic outputs from government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12% and 17%,
respectively, and both decreased by 3% after 16-year period. In contrast, contribution from
healthcare and education sector remained constant in both years at 17%.
Sector X was 3%
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Sector X made up 3%
Sector X accounted for 3%
Sector X comprised 3% of [the whole chart]
Although diagrams are not very common in IELTS Academic, they do appear in Writing and are very
different from the other types of graphs you may get as a task.
The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons
where relevant.
The Introduction
Use synonyms and paraphrase the topic from your task statement.
Sample Introductions =
The diagram demonstrates the way in which steel rods are produced for the furniture industry.
The diagram shows the process of metal rod production for the furniture industry.
The Overview
Give a general overview to summarize what is going on in the diagram. Unlike line graphs, pie charts
and bar charts, diagrams have no general trends or key changes to identify. So, in the overview
paragraph you need to write:
Sample Overview=
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Overall, the process consists of eleven stages, beginning with the raw material and ending up with
the product’s inspection.
Write about specific details of your diagram in the body, describing each stage of the process in
detail. Do not forget that you should provide information in a logical way.
First of all, iron ore, yellow ore and carbon are collected to serve as a raw material for steel rod
manufacturing. After that, this raw material is melted in a melting slit, where it is heated to a
temperature in range of 1300-1500 °C. The melted mass is then transferred to a smelting cabin to
undergo refinement. Next, the candescent metal is put in a pouring machine and poured into ingots.
In the next stage, the ingots are connected to a cooling reservoir, where the temperature falls to 60-
100 °C. Metal goes through special nozzles and cools down, forming strands. Following this, the
metal strands proceed to rollers that change their shape. Next, the products are put into a heating
machine, where they undergo heat treatment. Subsequently, a measuring automaton completes a
surface check of the products.
After that, the metal rods are sized by special cutters and get ID stamping. Finally, the products
undergo inspection and are ready for use.
Using connectors
A Process is a series of changes that happen over time and therefore connectors are extremely
important when writing about process diagrams. Use these words to describe specific features of
your diagram:
First of all…
Firstly…
To begin…
After that…
Then…
Next…
In the next stage…
Following this…
Subsequently…
Finally…
The task diagram will often provide additional information and hints for most stages of the process.
Make sure that you use all of this when describing the specific features of the data given.
However, sometimes you may see that some stage lacks information for description and so you do
not actually know what happens exactly during this stage. In this case, you can use a verb to undergo
( = to experience).
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Do not draw conclusions in Writing Task 1 as you are not giving your opinion, you are merely
describing the facts provided.
Verbs
Upward movement
to rise to peak
to increase to rocket
to surge to soar
to grow to leap
Downward movement
to fall to plunge
to decrease to plummet
to decline to nose-dive
to dip to fluctuate/to vary
to dive
Adverbs
sharply wildly
suddenly
rapidly steadily
abruptly slightly
dramatically gently
significantly gradually
considerably steadily
markedly modestly
marginally
Adjectives
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sharp substantial
sudden spectacular
rapid marginal
abrupt slight
dramatic gentle
steep gradual
significant steady
considerable consistent
marked modest
Language Register
Do not use ‘lazy’ words…. Your language should sound formal and professional. You should avoid
repeating the same basic adjectives and nouns, where possible.
Lesson SEVEN
rose dramatically
stabilized
maximum
minimum
increased slightly
slight dip
peaked
levelled off
fluctuated wildly
From week 1 to week 5, profits _______________________. Then from week 6 to week 8, profits
_______________________ and _______________________ at 3.0 million at week 8. From week 8
to week 15 profits _______________________ with a _______________________ at week 11. Then
from week 15 to week 21 profits _______________________ with a _______________________ of
3.5 million at week 16 and a _______________________ of 2.2 million at week 17. From week 21 to
week 23, profits _______________________ at 2.8 million.
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increased gradually
dropped substantially
minimum
spike
decreased slightly
maximum
fluctuated mildly
bottoming out
From week 24 to 28, profits _______________________ and then from weeks 29 to week 36, profits
_______________________ with a _______________________ at week 33 of 4.2 million. From week
37 to week 40, profits _______________________, _______________________ at 1 million at week
40. From week 40 to week 46, profits _______________________ with a _______________________
of 1.2 million and a _______________________ of 0.8 million.
level off
shoot up drop
plummet
slump
In a business setting, these expressions can be used to explain why changes took places in the
corporation. Here are some more examples:
Rewrite the following sentences using the expressions ‘due to’ or ‘because of’.
Discourse markers…
Sequences Similarity Contrast Effect Addition Example
Firstly, First of all, Similarly, However, Therefore, In addition, For example,
Next, In the same Nevertheless, As a result, Moreover, For instance,
Then, way, In contrast, As a consequence, Furthermore,
After that, On the Consequently,
Finally, contrary
In groups of 4/5 students, find an example in the business world of a company that experienced
significant change in performance (+ or -) in recent years.
You will prepare to give a short (10-minute maximum) PowerPoint presentation of the sector
concerned, company performance, putting this clearly into a social/economic/historical context
where possible.
You must highlight the relevant numerical data using the appropriate target language, as studied,
to demonstrate the evolution observed and employ an appropriate formal register.
Lesson EIGHT
Lesson NINE
For Task 2, you will be presented with a specific topic and asked to write a 250-word essay.
There are many different topics for the IELTS Writing task 2.
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Usually, the IELTS essay will require you to do one of the following:
• Agree/disagree
You will be tested on Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, Grammar Accuracy
and Range to give a band score of 1-9.
• Art
• Education
• Environment
• Health
• Relationships
Depending on the topic, decide what your opinion is and why. Take a clear position, do not hesitate
between two opinions. Then find examples to support your position.
You will be marked on your structure (Cohesion and Coherance). How you lay out your ideas will
obviously have an impact on the effectiveness of your work overall (Task Response).
1 Introduction:
Paraphrase the topic statement + give your Thesis Statement. This should give an indication to
structure (Body paragraphs 1 & 2) but NOT in the ‘French’style ie We will see…in a first time.
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2 Body paragraphs:
Each should have its central idea, which is generally stated in the first sentence. Develop your point,
giving reasons and supporting them with appropriate examples. Write at least 2 and no more than 5
sentences per paragraph.
Conclusion:
Rephrase the central message of your Thesis Statement from the Introduction; do not repeat word
for word.
If you only answer half of the question and fail to expand your opinion, you will lose points for Task
Response. Be sure NOT to go off the subject. Make sure that each paragraph in Writing task 2 has a
central idea that is not repeated.
It Is a bad idea to write more than 300 words in Task 2 Writing, as this will lose you points in your
final band score.
• In my opinion,
• In my experience, ...
• to attest
• to prove
Outlining facts
• It is obvious/clear that …
Generalizing
Giving examples
Concluding
• To conclude, ...
• In conclusion, ...
You must ensure that you cover equally both views to the given topic of discussion and then clearly
state your opinion.
Example
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,
however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Sentence 1 - Paraphrase the task statement to give a clear indication of the topic of the essay.
The government and citizens of a country sometimes have contrasting views about how their
country’s progress should be measured.
While I agree that economic growth is essential (Body 1), I believe that other forms of progress are
just as important (Body 2).
*In this manner, you do not need to state the structure of your essay since this is incorporated into
your Thesis Statement (ie This essay will look at….and then study……)
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that
they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those
related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
First, introduce the general topic before you present the two different sides.
People have different opinions about the subjects that university students should be permitted to
study ( = General topic). While some people that students should only study areas perceived to be
useful in the future, such as science and technology ( = View 1), I believe that students should be free
to pursue their studies of choice ( = View 2 & Opinion).
Agree-or-disagree essay questions are very common for IELTS Writing Task 2. This type of question
asks you to say whether you agree or disagree with a given statement and to justify your opinion.
Example
An agree-or-disagree question asks you to clearly determine whether you agree or disagree with the
statement. Unlike questions that ask you to what extent do you agree or disagree, this question asks
you to have a clear opinion. After you have decided your opinion, generate 2-3 supporting points.
Sentence 1 - Paraphrase the task statement (you can use ‘It is argued/considered/thought that’ to
start):
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if the work does
not appeal to you at all.
Sentence 2 – Write your Thesis Statement, stating whether you agree or disagree and extend your
opinion. Include a contrast linking word (whereas/while/even if/despite+ing/in spite
of+ing/however/nevertheless) or an extra information linking word (not only+inversion subject-
verb/in addition to+ing/neither – nor).
However, I would disagree with this since money alone cannot bring satisfaction nor can it bring
lasting advantages.
Body paragraph 1: State the first reason you agree/disagree with the task statement and then explain
the reason. Give examples to support your arguments.
Body paragraph 2: Give a second reason – remembering to refer and respond to the opposing
argument(s) to substantiate your answer and to avoid it seeming too one-sided.
Conclusion
You can write the conclusion in one sentence that summarizes your opinion and briefly gives the
reasons for it. Do not write new ideas in the conclusion!
Such questions are very common for IELTS Writing Task 2. Your task is to say whether you:
• Partly agree/disagree…
Example
The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should
invest these funds in public services instead.
Unlike classic agree/disagree questions, to what extent you agree or disagree questions do NOT ask
you to clearly determine whether you agree or disagree with the given statement.
You can therefore write the supporting points of your body paragraphs in the following ways: agree +
agree/ disagree + disagree/agree + disagree.
Introduction
It is often argued that the government should finance public services instead of spending its budget
on arts, music and theatre.
Although I agree that government’s investments in public services play a very important role, I think
that proper funding of the arts sector is also crucial for society.
Conclusion - Write the conclusion in one sentence that summarizes your opinion.
(Intro statement paraphrase) It is often argued that the government should finance public services
instead of spending its budget on arts, music and theatre. (Thesis statement ) Although I agree that
government’s investments in public services play a very important role, I think that proper funding of
arts sector is also crucial for the society.
(Body 1) On the one hand, the government should definitely allocate a large part of its budget on
public services. This economic sector determines the overall quality of life, ensuring that some basic
services, like schools, hospitals and roads, are available to all citizens irrespective of their income or
social status. Public services satisfy the primary needs of the society and thus need a proper funding,
while artists and musicians are not curing diseases or building houses, so their role is secondary. For
example, any country can live without music concerts, but absence of medicine will create significant
problems. That is why the government should adequately finance public services in the first place.
(Body 2) On the other hand, arts, music and theatre are not a waste of money, since they are an
integral part of the society’s cultural and intellectual development and amusement. Firstly, art and
music draw people’s attention to diverse phenomena and represent the inward significance of things.
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Quite often a single drawing, piece or song can exhort myriads of people to reconsider their attitude
towards some situation. This way, art serves as a major source of nation’s personal and intellectual
development. Moreover, visiting museums, watching movies and listening to music are common
ways of relaxation and entertainment. Thus, art sector is also important for the society and should
not be neglected.
(Conclusion) To conclude, although I agree that the government should allocate a large part of its
budget on such urgent needs of the society like public services, I think that arts, music and theatre
should also be financed since they play an important role in people’s development and
entertainment.
Another example
Sample Introduction
(Intro statement paraphrase) While the main purpose of a business is most often to earn money,
some people believe that businesses also have social obligations. I strongly agree with the idea that
businesses have responsibilities to society, especially in terms of their environmental policies
And another…
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only
way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste ?
Sample Introduction
(Intro statement paraphrase) Although recycling has become more common in recent years, certain
people feel that the percentage of household waste is still too low and that the only way to
encourage people to recycle more is through legislation. Greater recycling is certainly required (Body
1) but I fully believe that laws are unnecessary since raising awareness and positive incentives are
sufficient (Body 2).
The causes-and-solutions essay is one of the most common question types in IELTS Writing Task 2.
This question asks you to describe causes and propose solutions for a given problem.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness
are decreasing.
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What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve
them ?
Sample Introduction
In different countries worldwide, levels of health and fitness are deteriorating whilst average weight
is increasing. The main causes of these problems are poor nutrition and exercise habits (= causes –
Body 1). Fortunately, these issues can be solved by the provision of healthier food and more
opportunities to exercise ( = solutions – Body 2).
This type of essay often seems more complicated because of the double question format.
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development ?
Sample Introduction
Social technology has altered the way people communicate in the modern world ( = general topic).
Due to this, we can instantaneously communicate with each other worldwide and maintain
relationships that would have previously been impossible ( = Body 1). While this such technology has
also had negative effects on social interactions, overall the advantages far outweigh the drawbacks
( = Body 2).
Lesson TEN
The Listening section lasts 30 minutes (plus additional 10 mins to transfer your answers onto the answer sheet). It contains
40 questions (10 questions per section). Each question is worth 1 mark.
Booking conference facilities/Finding out about specific courses/Finding out about travel services.
Section 2 - A monologue talk or short speech on a topic of general interest with a transactional purpose.
Information about a public event/Talks about different tourist attractions/Information about facilities e.g. a library
Section 3 - A discussion between 2 and 4 people set in an educational context eg. tutorial or seminar.
Discussion about a research project/Talk and questions about a specific topic/ Interview with an expert on a topic
You are listening for main ideas, specific information, attitudes and opinions.
Talks about scientific research/A Lecture on environmental problems/ A talk about how to develop in a specific career
• multiple choice
• short-answer questions
• sentence completion
• matching
• classifying
Listening tactics
There are a variety of question types so making sure the instructions are understood is very important, especially in short
answer questions.
Examples:
Write NO MORE THAN THREE WORDS AND/OR A NUMBER for each answer.
Things to remember:
Use the time wisely – look at the pictures and questions carefully.
Don’t worry about understanding every word – concentrate on picking out the information you need.
Don’t panic!
Practise anticipating the next question while listening/writing the answer to the previous one.
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Don’t over-worry about correct spelling/grammar now, wait until the 10-minute answer transfer time to check
your answers.
Marking
To be considered correct, the answer must be the right information, spelt correctly and grammatically correct.
There is no negative marking so test takers should not leave blank answers but should try to write something.
This is 60 minutes in total length (including time to transfer answers to the answer sheet.
The academic version includes 3 texts ranging from descriptive to analytical (they become increasingly more difficult)
Question types
Matching
Complete sentences
Multiple choice
Choosing headings
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Categorising/classifying
Labelling
Reading sub-skills :
SURVEYING Looking at a text very quickly before reading to get an idea of lay-out: title, pictures, graphs, headings
which helps with prediction.
SKIMMING Reading a text very quickly to get the general understanding and to activate your schematic
knowledge.
SCANNING Reading a text with the specific purpose of extracting information such as numbers, facts, words etc.
READING FOR DETAIL / CLOSE READING Reading a text in order to understand the detailed meaning.
INFERRING MEANING Reading a text in order to discover the writer’s opinions or feelings from the language and
way it has been expressed or presented.
DEDUCING MEANING Reading a text and working out the meaning of vocabulary from the surrounding context
and information given.
The question states the number of words to be used (hyphenated words count as one word, contracted words
are NOT tested).
The question states that the words must come from the text. Do NOT use own words.
Read through match alternatives. What type of information are you looking for? e.g. nationalities/countries.
Read text around each item for the type of information you need.
Compare the information with the alternatives, if it matches write in the answer.
If there is no match, go back to context. Look for negatives or references to previous or following information.
There is a difference between ‘No’ and ‘Not Given’ (or ‘False’ and ‘Not Given’). In the first variation of the task, ‘No’
means that the opinions or claims of the writer explicitly disagree with the statement – i.e., the writer somewhere
expresses a view or makes a claim which is opposite to the one given in the question; ‘Not Given’ means that the
view or claim or statement is neither confirmed nor contradicted.
Any knowledge the students have from outside the passage should not play a part when deciding on their
answers.
The order of the questions is the same as the order the information appears in the text.
Survey the text to get main idea – underline topic sentences, be aware of what each paragraph deals with.
Find answers, considering synonyms, put (possible) answers directly on answer sheet.
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Lesson ELEVEN
Lesson TWELVE
Full Mock IELTS Exam (CC mark for Writing Tasks 1 & 2)
Lesson THIRTEEN
Lesson FOURTEEN
For the next few lessons, you will be working on an international marketing campaign
concerning the field of luxury. This will enable you to put into practice new skills and notions
through teamwork, in preparation for a professional PowerPoint presentation (CC Oral mark).
What is LUXURY ?
Look at the quote below and discuss its meaning with a partner.
«Luxury is the ordinary of the extraordinary people and the extraordinary of the ordinary».
Jean-Noel Kapferer (New Strategic Brand Management)
Now think how you could define it under the headings of the 4Ps of marketing. What comes
to mind when you associate ‘luxury’ with these different aspects ?
Product
Price
Place
Promotion
Hedonist: a person who believes that the pursuit of pleasure is the most important thing in
life.
The core of Luxury is the symbolic desire Luxury products are ‘timeless’ or
to belong to something that represents part of a cultural heritage.
superiority ; an elite.
Luxury doesn’t suffer crisis.
Premium brands have a supply greater than demand whereas luxury has
demand greater than supply/sales.
Mass market products have in-built
obsolescence.
They are not made to last but to provide
instant gratification.
The ubiquitous logos, symbols and icons of the luxury world do not seek the
democratization of the brands.
The world of luxury is not the business of fashion - based on trends or what is
‘in’ or ‘out’ for the season.
16/ They wish to take it out of the UK later on as the exports ________ are extremely good.
17/ Modern Gentleman plan to open a ‘booty’ ________ store in their first year in London.
18/ Sweet Thing want to create a retail ________ centre around confectionary – being
forward-thinking.
19/ They will specifically reach their target on celebratory moments of the year; Christmas,
birthdays, ________ , Valentine’s Day, but will have year-round appeal.
20/ Sweet Thing’s pricing strategy is problematic because with such low price-marking the
company cannot cover ________ from their retail sales.
21/ Although Lord Sugar found that Modern Gentleman had no ________ factor, he thought
their concept was more professional and better thought-out than the other team’s.
22/ Indeed, Sweet Thing was lacking in ________ with their product range and lacked
attention to detail.
23/ Ultimately, you cannot retail a prestigious products at ________ _market prices, and you
cannot sell luxury in the bottom-end market.
Lesson FIFTEEN
Background
Henri Claude Cosmetics (HCC), a French cosmetics & personal care products company, has developed
a highly successful eau-de-cologne for men under the name Physique.
This is the company’s best-selling men’s fragrance and best known in the company’s product
portfolio. HCC is now planning an international campaign for Physique early next year. It intends a
high-profile launch in a foreign country, which will enable the brand to achieve international
recognition.
The theme of the campaign will be ‘Physique; for the Urban Man’.
A celebrity who captures the essence of Physique will be chosen to lead this new ambitious
campaign.
Based on exotic wood essence, with citrus and spices, Physique has a fresh, woody, long lasting
aroma.
The scent is very appealing to women. Men who wear Physique say they feel confident,
attractive and sophisticated.
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Its target audience in France is ambitious, career minded men in the 30 -40 age range.
The eau-de-cologne is positioned as a premium fragrance, priced at the top end of the market.
Product details
Bottle shape:
Tall rounded bottle, solid appearance. Black, with the brand name in the centre. Silver top with screw
or spray function.
40ml - 60 euros
75ml - 75 euros
100ml – 95 euros
The price places Physique in the ten most expensive male fragrances.
Distribution in France:
Special promotions at high-class events such as Longchamp racing stadium and in embassies and
duty-free shops at the airports.
‘Physique man is confident, ambitious and resilient. He is at home in any city, and enjoys the
challenge of urban life. He has a lot of creative energy, travels widely and is optimistic about the
future.’
Target audience
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Brand image
Name
Positioning
Packaging
Slogan
Price
Homework - Carry out research on men’s perfume in different outlets for Lesson
SIXTEEN
Lesson SIXTEEN
Advertising
Exercise
A/ Look at the following words and match them to the correct definition/s:
1/ ______________means making a product or service known to the public (through the press,
television, radio etc.) in order to sell it (uncountable noun e.g. an____________ is incorrect)
2/ ________________ any public notice, as a printed display in a newspaper, short film on television,
radio announcement, etc. designed to sell a product or service to the public. Countable noun with
shortened forms : ________ (USA) _________ (UK)
3/ _______________ involves attracting the public’s attention but not necessarily to sell
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anything specific. e.g. Sponsorship of the French football team in the World Cup gave them a lot of
_____________________________.
Exercise
3/ The company wants to create a lot of ____________ around the launch of their product.
5/. A slogan is a phrase or sentence that must be very _______so as to have maximum impact.
8/. Most companies want to develop brand ____________ by advertising in the media.
9/. ______________ habits change according to age & sex & type of socio-economic group.
10/. L’Oreal is a company that relies on the use of _____________ by stars from the pop,
sport, cinema or fashion world.
11/. TV, radio, cinema, the press, poster campaigns etc. are called _____________________
which is usually expensive but has a long-term impact on the consumer.
12/. Mail shots, telemarketing, discounts, vouchers, coupons, competitions & shelf-displays
are examples of ______________________________ & are less expensive than (11) but
have a more short-term impact.
14/. Sales promotions aim at _______________________; they try to make sure people not
only buy the product once but regularly.
15/. When you do not manage to get your information across to the target audience you have a
communication _______ or ________________________.
16/. ________________ promotions are temporary tactics to increase sales, and include
17/. The statement of objectives of an advertising campaign worked out between the company
and the advertising agency is called a __________.
18/. The person who decides where to advertise, to reach the right people at the right time is
called the _________________.
Exercise
C/ Put the words in italics in the correct order.
Above-the-Line
This is an advertising strategy to promote brands through conventional forms of mass media. It
involves:
• long-term planning
• long-term investment
• long-term impact
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Below-the-Line
This involves short-term promotional methods (such as catalogue marketing, direct marketing, and
trade fair marketing, point of sale displays, coupons, loyalty incentives) that are under the direct
control of the marketer. It involves:
• short-term planning
• boosting sales
• inciting repeat purchases
Media options
Media Options Advantages Diasdavantages Other
remarks
Internet Economy viral
Borderless lack of control
Flexibility overexposure
Timeliness privacy
Measurable
Newspapers Selected geographical coverage Wasted readership
Flexibility Short ad life
Timeliness Lack of Prominence
Communication potential
Low costs
Now find some examples of successful advertising campaigns for male fragrance.
Meetings
You need to call a meeting with your colleagues to discuss the findings
from the Physique survey research above. Crucial decisions will have to
be made which may have an impact on the overall strategy of the
company. Some colleagues may not necessarily share the same views
so a consensus will have to be reached diplomatically!
Desired outcome: Agreement on a marketing strategy to enable HCC to go global for international
success.
Useful expressions
3/ Consider each of the elements studied in the survey (Target audience; Brand image; Positioning;
Name; Slogan; Packaging; Price) and devise your strategy according to your selected country.
4/ What will the marketing strategy involve? Your 4P strategy must be fully coherent with your
campaign!
Remember:
For the Physique campaign, your marketing group can introduce any changes considered
appropriate but the fragrance composition cannot be altered in any way.
All decisions must be presented making reference to the current Physique strategy, and
justifying any modifications you wish to make (or not).
Your group must demonstrate how the new marketing strategy will lead HCC to international
success.
Your group must prepare a full PowerPoint presentation of your final Physique marketing
campaign to last approximately 20 minutes. Refer back to the Presentation Element checklist and
ensure that your speech is dynamic and convincing.
Each group will present their Physique campaign to the CEO of HCC – Dominique FREGATE - and is
therefore competing with the other campaign groups in the class (CC Oral mark).
Lesson SEVENTEEN
Mini group meeting on marketing strategy for the Henri Claude ‘Going Global Marketing project.
Full preparation of PowerPoint presentation and revision of presentation structure & target language. Oral
rehearsals.
Lesson EIGHTEEN
Henri Claude Marketing group PowerPoint presentations (20 mins each -questions included) CC
Individual oral mark 20%.
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Lesson NINETEEN
The length of a short report will vary depending on the amount of information and commentary that
it contains, however most short reports are between two to four pages long.
A report should be structured so that the reader can find the relevant information quickly. Generally
speaking, each section has a set function.
The short report format must have the following headings for the different sections:
Title /To /From /Date /Executive Summary /Introduction /Findings /Conclusions
/Recommendations /References /Appendices
Title
This should give a precise indication of the subject matter.
e.g. Title: Short Report on the recommendations for the future CSR policy of Boots UK Ltd.
It also states to whom the report is addressed (To = Name, Function & Company name), From = who
sent it (Name, Function & Company) and Date = when.
e.g. To: Mr Steve DUNCAN - CEO - Boots UK Ltd/
From: Ms Elizabeth JONES – Marketing Manager – Boots US Ltd
Date: 10th/June/2021
The Executive Summary
This section serves as a ‘mini short report’, covering three areas; background situation, objective &
recommendation(s).
Indeed, it should provide the following content:
A clear overview of the context situation - why the report is required.
The objective of the research/analysis - what you wish to demonstrate- the mission.
The recommendations – which result you have arrived at from your research.
The Executive Summary gives the reader a brief vision of the task in hand and provides the essential
information of the full report. Normally it is just a few sentences in length.
Note that the Executive Summary is not the same as the Introduction, which generally gives the basic
precision facts of your mission (names/dates & other specifications).
The Introduction
The Introduction is the ‘precision section’, presenting the elements to be studied, giving dates and
other concrete specifications. It highlights the criteria for selection/points of consideration. It may
also define the sequence of elements presented, and/or and should include the terms of reference
(why it is written and for whom and when it is due).The methods used for the research can also be
included here, if applicable.
e.g. This short report will compare and contrast the following _________ (elements/category
e.g. ‘no-frill’ airline companies)…, namely (names e.g. Ryan Air, Easy Jet etc… ) in order to
_________(purpose e.g. select the most suitable ____ for….) ……(dates)……. The following
points of consideration were used…..(e.g. affordability/availability/duration of trip etc). Mr
James SMITH of the Personnel Dept has requested this report be submitted by 28th June
2021.
The Findings
This is ‘fact section’ which presents the information that your research has revealed. It can be divided
into several subsections. Graphs, tables, etc should be shown in the Findings section.
No interpretation or analysis of the facts stated is required here.
The Conclusions
This section shows what can be interpreted and analysed from the concrete facts, often through
analysing/comparing & contrasting (where relevant) the information gathered. The conclusions
section usually ‘speaks for itself’ and is based on objective vision. The section uses appropriate
grammatical structures (even if/although/however/despite/while/whereas etc).
Avoid any new information; the conclusions section draws logical conclusions based on the findings.
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e.g. From the findings, it was concluded that whilst _______ offers a more attractive price
range compared to _______, it failed to satisfy ________ .Although ________ initially
appeared to be ________ , on closer analysis it proved to be _______ …..
Recommendations
This is the ‘result section’ that highlights clearly the outcome of the conclusion section and where the
final choice is stated.
It also contains practical suggestions for future action to implement this choice/plan of action or
draws the reader’s attention to potential problems that may need to be addressed. This may offer a
more subjective vision as it states actions and advice that the writer of the report feels need to be
taken based on the findings and conclusions. However, the tone of the writing should still be formal
and impersonal.
e.g. The research clearly demonstrated that __________ (result) however, it is also
highly recommended to ________ (further advice), in order to…..
References & Appendices
The sources of all information should be clearly indicated. Graphs, tables, etc. should be shown
within the Findings section if they need to be consulted whilst reading the text. Appendices only
include information that may be referred to out of interest or is required as evidence. All graphs,
charts, etc. must be clearly referenced beside or beneath.
Language examples
Introduction
As requested in the company email of 16 August 2020, the final short report
summarizing/analysing…..together with recommendations.
This report was commissioned by…./ requested by
It includes / consists of / is divided into / contains…
It is based on interviews with/ a negotiation with … / information obtained from….
information was gathered from the following sources: face-to-face interviews, a
questionnaire was sent to ….., internal company documents and market research carried
out…
Findings
It was found that…
The research showed that…
The following key areas were identified…
45% of those who replied to the questionnaire thought that….
The survey highlighted the following areas of concern.
This will inevitably have an impact on…
One of the big advantages of this proposal is that…
The negotiation showed that…
Conclusion
A key challenge facing the company is…
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In the light of the above findings, the following conclusions were drawn...
On the basis of the figures presented above….would be very profitable.
There is clearly a gap in the market, however serious obstacles still remain.
It is clear that there are significant levels of…. Unless these issues are addressed as a
matter of urgency
This has the potential to be a successful project provided/as long as ……
Recommendations
There are three main recommendations to make.
The Marketing/Operations department should….
Further research should be carried out to find out…
It is recommended that funds are provided for…..and that…..
It would be advisable to hold a meeting in 6 months’ time between both parties to
evaluate the progress made.....
Lesson TWENTY
Exam revision
English for Customer Care - Rosemary Richey - Oxford University Press 2011
http://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-a-customer-service-representative.htm
http://www.kirkwood.edu/pdf/uploaded/838/AP%20Difficult%20Customers.pdf