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ISSUE : The purpose of English language teaching (ELT) recently is poles apart
between the two sides. Firstly, some believe that teachers of English language should
encourage the students to reach native – like fluency and proficiency particularly
when it comes to speaking and pronunciation. While others argue that the English
language) to interact and connect to others around the world with their own cultures,
2. Organize your arguments (for – and against – arguments) to respond the issue in the
following table.
Body
Functions Arguments
Paragraph
The main purpose of learning English is
1 Pro
students can speak such native – like does.
The problem which face by the teacher in
2 Rebuttal
teaching process ; lack of vocabularies.
The problem which face by the teacher in
3 Rebuttal teaching process ; students environments
and culture.
Nowadays English is one of the most spoken language in the world. Learning
English is very important, because now almost in everything and everywhere we can
found English in spoken and text. Learning English is also something hard. Because
teacher still must teach students in order to they can communicate in English such
native – like does. Even not little teacher argue that English language teaching just
other the world with their own culture, background and accents.
communicate as native – like does. Because when someone learning other language
they should learn and reach it as similar as native does. When they can reach the
goals that can speak as native it is bring a pride to the teacher because they have
successfully teach them. The students who can reach the goals also proud to
themselves because can speak as well as native. So they can confidence to use their
English.
influence in the process of teaching. First, the students problem that become the
hardest thing to learn is lacing of vocabulary. How teacher can teach fast if students
do not know / remember much vocabulary. How teacher can speaks and explains the
subject using full English if the students cannot understand what the teacher says.
Teacher and students just can communicate using speech act in short sentences or
The other opponent is the culture and students environments. Culture and
students learn English, they should do more practice not only in school. But how
about students who lives in village, they grow and live with their native language,
indeed Indonesian as country language becomes second language, and much of them
cannot speaks Indonesian in a good ways. It is being more harder to make them can
Having a goal to make students can do native – like competence is good, but
the teacher must face the problem like lack of vocabularies and students culture and
environments which give students little chance to practice. In the end teacher who
push to reach native – like competence still cannot reach the goals because they face
many basics problem. In last option teacher just can teach them make students can
communicate in English to interact and connects to other the world with their own
changed, teacher should find some solutions to solves those problem above.
Reviewer’s Name : Siti Rohimah
Maximun Actual
Aspects
score Score
Format – 5 Points
Title centered (2), first line of each paragraph indented (1), 5
margins on both sides (1), text double spaced (1)
Total 5 5
Mechanics – 5 points
Punctuation : periods, commas, semicolons, quotation marks 4
(3).
Total 5 4
Content – 20 points
The essay fulfills the requirements of the assignment 5 5
The essay is interesting to read 5 4
The essay shows that the writer used care and thought 10 8
Total 20 17
Organization – 45 points
The essay follows the outline, and has an introduction, a body, 5 5
and a conclusion
Introduction : The introduction end with the thesis statement 5 5
Body :
Each paragraph of the body discusses a new point and begins 5 5
with a clear topic sentence.
Each paragraph has specific supporting material : fact, 10 7
examples, quotations, paraphrased or summarized
information, etc.
Each paragraph has unity 5 4
Each paragraph has coherence 5 4
Transitions are use to link paragraph 5 3
Conclusion : The conclusion summarizes the main points or
paraphrase the thesis statements, begin with a conclusion 5 5
signal, and leaves the reader with writer’s final through on the
topic.
45 40
Total
Grammar and Sentence Structure – 25 Points
20
Estimate a grammar and sentence structure score. 25
Grand Total 100 84