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1. INT. LILY'S ROOM - EVENING

A teenage girl named LILY is studying in her room.

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She opened her phone to check the time.

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Suddenly her MOTHER suddenly came in without knocking making Lily nervous in shock.

LILY'S MOTHER

Are you studying?

Her mother notice that Lily is on her phone.

LILY'S MOTHER

What are you doing? aren't you suppose to be studying!?

Lily's mother captured her phone.

LILY'S MOTHER

You know what you're grounded and you will not get your phone until your exams are finished!

LILY

But mom, I need my phone!

LILY'S MOTHER

When I was your age, I didn't have a phone, to be a successful woman. You don't need this!

Put this in your mind!

Lily

But I'm just checking the time! What's wrong with that!?
Lily is crying and begging her mom but her mom slap her.

Lily's mother

I don't need to hear any excuses again, this will be the last time you will raise your voice on me!

you better ace your exams or you know what is going to happen.

Her mother leaves the room with Lily's phone while Lily is crying. Lily tries to go back to what

she's doing but suddenly she feels tired and end up sleeping.

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2. INT. CLASSROOM - AFTERNOON

All students are answering their test papers.

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Lily is having a hard time answering her tests while Xia seems to enjoy the test and not having a

hard time answering it.

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The teacher announced that Xia ace the exam while Lily got one Mistake. ELLA came to try to

comfort Lily

ELLA

Lily, are you okay?

LILY

Can't you see that i'm not?

ELLA

I'm sorry Lily, how can i make you smile?

LILY

Leave me alone Ella i don't need your help

ELLA
No! I will not leave you alone, do you want me to talk to your mother and tell her about

everything?

LILY

No Ella! Don't get involved with my problems!

ELLA

Your only problem is Xia! The day that Xia comes to our life everything change, it feels like she

has a curse.

Lily sigh

LILY

What will i do? Kill her?

ELLA

Yes, kill her, it's like just killing your problem.

LILY

Are you serious?

ELLA

Of course not.

They laughed and every one is looking at them.

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3. INT. CLASSROOM/HALLWAY - MORNING

Students together with their parents are sitted in the classroom waiting for the announcement.

TEACHER

Goodmorning my dear students, and im glad to see you here my dear parents, today is the day

and I cannot let you wait any longer. Here are the results of the top achievers this 4th quarter.

Everybody claps and they are so excited to hear who is the top students specially Lily's mother.

TEACHER
Okay let's start, we have 5 students who got in Honors. Let's start with the average of 93.43%,

congratulations ROJI IYCHO.

Everybody claps.

ROJI

Yes! I already know it! My Mom will be proud of me!

TEACHER

And Next they both get 95% Congrats ELLA ENIAL and LEO NEDE

Everybody claps.

TEACHER

And now lets move on with the highest honor who got 97.4% congratulations Lilian Ly and Xia

Sanchez who got 98%. Let's congratulate Xia because she will be the valedictorian of our class!

Everyone claps except Lily and her mother.

LILY'S MOTHER

What?! Sir, I think you made a mistake?! Lily can't be the 2nd she should be the first!

TEACHER

I'm so sorry ma'am but i did not make any mistake. You should be proud because Lily got the

2nd.

LILY'S MOTHER

Proud?! So funny, how I can be proud when my daughter is only the second. She's always been

the first since elementary and now she's 2nd?!

TEACHER

Xia got the highest score and we can't change that, i'm so sorry ma'am.

LILY'S MOTHER

Ridiculous utterly ridiculous! And you,

She pointed at Lily with a ferocious face.


I told you to study right? I'm so disappointed in you Lily. You're so embarrassing I can't have a

daughter like you!

LILY

Mom! I did my best to be the top student@8!

LILY'S MOTHER

Then you're not doing your very best, and if you really try your best you will be the valedictorian!

Lily's mother pinch Lily's ear and push Lily's outside the room. The teacher tried to stop them.

Lily's mother

You stupid brat, what happened to you? All I dream is you to be the valedictorian and you

disappointed me! I do not consider you as my daughter anymore, you better go home early or

you will see your things in front of my house!

Lily is crying silently. She doesn't want to talk because she is also disappointed.

TEACHER

Lily.

Lily run as fast as her can.

TEACHER

Sorry about that everyone, umm Xia, prepare your speech for the graduation

XIA

I will, Thank you very much sir.

XIA'S MOTHER

I'm very proud of you, even if you're not valedictorian i will be proud of you.

Xia's mother embrace her face.

XIA

Thank you Mom.

LEO

I'm so proud of you babe, i knew it that you will be the valedictorian.
Xia smirk and laugh a little.

XIA

Really?

LEO

Of course babe.

XIA

Thank you Leo.

XIA'S FATHER

Hey! stop flirting with my daughter.

Xia's father say it with angry face but eventually smiles after showing that he was just joking.

We should be celebrating right now lets go home and i will cook. Come along Leo.

They are all laughing showing that they are in a healthy family.

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4. INT. LILY'S HOUSE - MORNING

LILY'S MOTHER

You know Lily, im so proud of you that you're the valedictorian.

LILY

Thank you mom, you know i will do everything just to be the valedictorian

Lily hug her mother,

Showing:lily is preparing her speech and you can see on her face how happy she is

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5. INT. STAGE - MORNING

LILY

To our principal, teachers, parents, ladies and gentlemen, Good day. I am Lilian Ly, as an

valedictorian of the batch 2022 to 2023. First, I would like to thank our teacher Sir Justin

Ocampo for the love and care you gave us.


Show mo si Justin

And to my mother, thank you for love and care even if sometimes I disappoint you. You are still

the best, being my only parent, thank you for supporting me. And for Ella my very best friend.

Papakita ako

Thank you for the idea you gave, you are the best, if you didn't give that idea i wouldn't be in this

place, and for my sacrifice, you are the first but i still win no matter what is going to happen. just

stay there in the ground don't even show your face.

6. INT. HOUSE - AFTERNOON

Lily crying and contemplating she was blaming herself and even think about killing herself, she

was talking. It's like she's talking and begging to her mom to forgive her but the problem is her

mother is not there. Ella came to comfort her again

ELLA

Hello, Lily how are you?

LILY

Leave me alone Ella,

I said leave!

ELLA

Okay, but the teacher announced that we will have a practice for graduation march and

graduation song, will you go?

LILY

Can you please go Ella!

ELLA

Okay!
7. INT. STADIUM - AFTERNOON

Church ni Cindrel

Graduation march

Lily came to the graduation march but she's late. What's even more worse is she's not even

talking she's only looking one person and thats Xia.

XIA

Hey Lily did you cut your tongue or something

ROJI

Yeah! And did you take a bath? Or even brush your hair?

Leo

Stop Xia, your making her worse

They mock Lily by laughing. When Xia goes to lavatory Lily followed her

Lily

We need to talk

Xia

You scared me, Okay where? Here?

Lily
Follow me

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Gilid ng building or sa forest

The First Fall

Xia followed Lily unknowingly

Xia

What the hell Lily? Where you wanna talk? We've been walking for hours? I need to go back!

Lily

Leave!

Xia

What?

Lily

I said leave, leave the school! And never come back!

Xia

You already lost your mind? Lily you can't have back what's already mine. Remember

this Lily as long as i'm here

You will always be second or let's say A walking second place medal.

Smiling
Lily

Then you leave me no choice

Sabunutan mo siya Lily,

Lumaban karin Xia

Hangang matrip si Xia

Pagnahiga mo si Xia sakalin mo siya habang sinasabi itong line na to.

Lily

How Dare you steal what's mine! ive been the first! , always the first and no one will be

better than me!

Xia was trying to shout for help but Lily's grip was too strong. Xia lost her last breath, but Lily

was not satisfied,and found a rock and destroyed Xia's face. She laughed like a maniac. While

destroying Xia's face.

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(News ni daeben)

Xia was all over the news and everyone try to help to find her

Mom:

Where's my daughter! She did not come home yesterday, Xia! Xia! Xia!

Father:

It's okay hon, we will find her, just trust me okay we will find her.
Leo:

I asked my friends and her friends but they said that she's not there.

Lily mother

What happened to my daughter! Xia please! Henry, please find our daughter!

Father :

I will. And i will not stop until i find her

2day later

Teacher Just

Lily, you can replace Xia as valedictorian

Lily:

Really! I am the valedictorian!

Ella

Congrats gurl

House

Lily was so excited to tell her the good news

Lily

Mom! Mom! I am the valedictorian now!

I did what i promise!


LILY'S Mother

Stop your nonsense Lily! You cant make me go to that graduation if your not really the

valedictorian!

Lily

But mom im telling you the truth. Sir just already told me.

Surprised mother when she find out that Lily was really telling the truth

Mom:

Ohh my daughter is the valedictorian! Im very proud of you darling i know that your

teacher just make a mistakes. I love you Lily, you always make me proud!

Hugging her daughter

End of the flashback

SPEECH

LILY

Thank you, Xia

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