1/ INTRODUCTION

S + V + WHAT + WHERE + WHEN

The provided multiple line graph describes the popularity of 4 different Commented [MOU1]: Below => bo di
The provided/ given + ten bieu do
means of communication used by people of various age brackets in the Commented [MOU2]: Illustrates/ clearly details/
demonstrates
UK in 2011. Commented [MOU3]: Methods of communication
Communication method

2/ OVERALL Commented [MOU4]: Age groups

Overall, it is clear that the people in younger age groups preferred to use Commented [MOU5]: It is clear from the graph that
It is evident from the graph that
mobile phone and the internet, while the older age groups gravitated Commented [MOU6]: Prefer + to inf

towards landlines and snail mail. Commented [MOU7]: = prefer = tended to use
Commented [MOU8]: Post office
3/ BODY 1

Looking at internet and mobile phone, the 16-24-year-olds used Commented [MOU9]: When it comes to, regarding

these methods the most, at exactly 100 and around 90%, Commented [MOU10]: Su dung nhieu nhat

respectively. They were followed by the 25-34 age group and 35- Commented [MOU11]: In turn
Commented [MOU12]: Duoc theo sau boi
44 age group, with relatively similar figures at around 90% and Commented [MOU13]: Tuong doi tuong dong

80% for internet and mobile phone usage in turn. By contrast, the Commented [MOU14]: Lan luot la
Commented [MOU15]: Nguoc lai
older age groups were the least likely to choose these methods at On the other hand

just above 75% for the 45-54 age group and those above the age of Commented [MOU16]: S-V agreement
The percentages of people in older age groups who used

65 had the lowest values ranging from 50% to 60%. internet and mobile phone were by far lowest.

BODY 2
As for the figures for postal mail and landline phone calls, it is
obvious that the youngest age groups used these methods the least,
at around 80% for the post and below 75% for landline. It is
interesting to note that the figures for landline usage and snail mail
were remarkably similar to the internet and mobile phone usage for
both the 25-34 and 35-44 at between 80% and 90%. The older age
brackets used these methods to get information the most at above
95%.