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Body 1 .

There are several reasons why playing video games bring positive effects on children . firsly
, one benefit is that games develop soft skills and improve cognitive development of
children. For example , League of Legends, a team work game, can help they to enhance
(=impove) problem-solving and communication skils. Moreover, children can learna bout
culture when connect with fogein friends through online games. Apart from that, enjoying
games is also a form of relaxation . It helps children handle stress and decrease mental
diseases on children .

Body 2 .
In spite of the above arguments , I support the view that video games have more negative
effects than positive ones .

waste time is the first i mention , if you not wanna be a streamer or professional gamer ,
focus all your time in games just got bad result .  The first drawback is that playing
games is a waste of time. Children spending much time on games might get bad
acdemic results.

Moreover, , it causes damage effects on children’s health as distrastion and can not ever be
good in study. . For example, more terrible , the way addictive very dangrous into behaviour
, more angry and violent from bad content in online games such as violent scenes can lead
to bad behaviors in children. Some children can steal money from their parents to buy
advanced options in games.

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