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    The document provides feedback on a writer's work, noting areas for improvement such as adding capital letters, punctuation, speech marks, more details, better structure, expanding vocabulary, planning before writing, using more complex sentences, expanding ideas with more details, using more adjectives to be more descriptive, and thinking about the genre and style of their writing. The writer is praised for their ideas and writing ability but advised to work on these structural and stylistic aspects.

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    Comments For Writing Skills 11-21

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    The document provides feedback on a writer's work, noting areas for improvement such as adding capital letters, punctuation, speech marks, more details, better structure, expanding vocabulary, planning before writing, using more complex sentences, expanding ideas with more details, using more adjectives to be more descriptive, and thinking about the genre and style of their writing. The writer is praised for their ideas and writing ability but advised to work on these structural and stylistic aspects.

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    11. (Name) needs to work on adding capital letters to their writing.

    12. (Name) needs to practice adding punctuation to their sentences.

    13. (Name) is a fantastic writer but needs to remember to add speech marks to
    dialogue.

    14. (Name) is great at writing but needs to add more details.

    15. (Name) needs to work on their writing structure.

    16. (Name) should widen the vocabulary they use, as they tend to use the same words
    often. I recommend using a thesaurus.

    17. I recommend that (name) spends some time planning their writing before they
    begin.

    18. (Name) still uses very simple sentences in English, I hope they can practice writing
    with more long and complex sentence structures.

    19. (Name)’s writing is brilliant, but they need to try to expand their ideas and write with
    a few more details.

    20. (Name) is good at writing in English but should try to add more adjectives to make
    their writing more descriptive.

    21. (Name) has fantastic ideas for writing, but needs to think carefully about the genre -
    and therefore style - of their writing.

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