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Introductory Assignment
Introductory Assignment
Michelle Do
COMM 1000
Angie Nikolakakis
Thursday, September 28,2023
Scenario 1 -
You received a 5/100 on an assignment and are upset and confused by this mark. You draft an email to your
professor and show it to your friend before you hit “send.” Your friend replies “Woah, you’re going to send that?”
After your friend leaves, you decide to revise it before sending.
“Hi. Why is my mark 5/100? I put a lot of work into this assignment and there is no way that I deserve only a
5/100. I don’t know if you think I cheated, but I didn’t. If you don’t change my mark I am going to email the
president of the college. I can’t believe you want me to fail.
I demand to re-write the assignment right away.
Thanks.”
Reflecting on your knowledge of audience, purpose, and tone, revise your email. Be sure your purpose is clear and
that you use a tone and vocabulary that will help you achieve your goals.
1. Consider the audience and purpose. Who is this for, and what are you trying to achieve?
a. Who is the audience? (Choose one)
o The professor
o The President of the college
o A fellow student
The professor
3. Identify 3 specific things that are wrong with this communication based on the intended audience,
purpose and tone?
They need to introduce themselves in the email with their name
And thanks with their name at the end of the email.
And they tone is very angry which is rude and not polite
And they didn’t put the subject