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Izellah Navarro
EN111-14
There is a well-known saying, “What doesn’t kill you makes you stronger. Many people
from all around the world have, and still are facing battles that are not exactly in war fields, those
people are fighting for their lives in the depths of their own homes attempting to stay strong for
themselves and their families. “Poor Family Relationships in Adolescence and the Risk of
Premature Death: Findings from the Stockholm Birth Cohort Study” written by Susanne Alm, Sara
Brolin Låftman, and Hannes Bohman, is an article that shares the logics and statistics of
components of virulent environments within one’s home at the age of adolescences and the
outcomes that are to come out of it. Research and studies found in the article justified that it is
essential during the upcoming a child that they have somewhat of a close relationship with their
chosen guardian(s), as the authors continue to explain how “high levels of family cohesion, in
terms of strong familial bonds, warmth, and connectedness, are associated with higher well-being
and fewer mental health problems among adolescents [3,4,5]. Conversely, low levels of family
cohesion are likely to be stressful and may accordingly have negative consequences for
health” (Alm, Laftman, Bohman). This article was very informative as it was clear and thorough
with the authors’ explanation of their evidence in regard to supporting their claim of toxic home
After reading this article, it can be found that the authors’ main goals for their research were
to illustrate the impact of unhealthy relationships inside a home environment in relation to their
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newfound information from previous studies that worked on gathering and analyzing all the data of
the functions of poor family relationships and the risks that are given towards premature death as
well as to a child’s mental and physical health. As the article frequently focused on the
psychological area of the study, the authors learned that from a deprived strong parent-child
relationship it was very often “associated with an increased risk of reporting both internalizing
symptoms and functional somatic symptoms up until the age of 42... later health outcomes have
followed the offspring as long as to retirement age, and relatedly, knowledge about the effects of
poor family relationships on premature death is scarce” (Landstedt et al.). For this article, the
authors chose to use quantitative data to represent their research of all the evidence of the variety of
studies used. Their article obtained statistics, reviews, and interviews of the project from different
groups of studies like the Metropolitan Study database and Stockholm Birth Cohort.
I would say the article is most likely accurate due to the fact of how the data they chose to
use as evidence showed multiple experiments the researchers went through and the number of
individuals they had to examine and interview in order to get a result that thoroughly displayed the
extent of the issue. However, I would take note of how some of the data made up many of the older
generations rather than millennials despite the topic being still very relevant in today’s society.
From my observations, this article had been through many reviews and careful construction. I have
yet to come upon any errors, whether it be through their choice of gathered information or
grammatical mistakes.
From my recent studies over this article, I stand with the claim of the authors that an
adolescent can experience true trauma from toxic home environments. The research shown proves
what can cause and affect a variety of psychological disorders in people’s lives due to a tragic
childhood. As someone who has grown up with many ups and downs within my family, I
understand the importance and necessity of having a close bond with my parents and the trauma it
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can cause from the absence of it. I found this article extremely insightful for someone who has
experienced many struggles at such a young age. With this new information and understandings, I
would recommend the use of this article to students majoring in psychology or maybe even nursing.
I believe that the research could possibly be very helpful to anyone that is studying the topics of
family relationships, the mental health of minors, effects of a lack of bond, and etc.
In conclusion, with all things considered, Alm’s, Låftman’s, and Bohman’s findings on poor
family relationships in adolescence truly allowed readers to indulge and explore the range of data
that came from such cruel pasts of individuals and the effects that were brought upon them. The
authors shone a light on research from the Stockholm Birth Cohort Study as explained in detail
what specifically caused such effect on children and how most would react. They described the
illnesses that many individuals found themselves coming upon and how they brought them up in the
future. This article is a perfect example of showing people who don’t realize that one of the main
essentials needed in a child’s life is care and affection from the ones around them. The need for a
loving home is so undervalued, and most often take that for granted. With this reading, it can be
learned that simple acts can lead to such harmful consequences. People never truly realize the
impact they have on one another so it is important to realize what strength there is to just a few
Alm, S., Brolin Låftman, S., & Bohman, H. (2019, May 14). Poor family relationships in
adolescence and the risk of PREMATURE Death: Findings from the Stockholm birth cohort
PMC6571769/