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INT. DINING ROOM - MIDNIGHT
DANIEL dressed in nothing but his pyjamas, sits, distressed.
MAN
So, Daniel, it's up to you now.
DANIEL looks up...
MAN (CONT'D)
The choice is yours.
The man disappears in a burst of flames.
CUT TO BLACK.
A title fades in:
Utopia
FADE TO BLACK.
MARK (V.O.)
For as long as my family has gone
back, no man has made it past their
20th birthday. Not my grand father
nor his father before him. Not even
my brother. I remember the day I
found out like it was yesterday.
MARK
Oh... hey, Dan. Not get much sleep?
It's MARK'S BROTHER, DANIEL who doesn't even look up at MARK
as he sits down with him. He looks defeated and like he's
contemplating something on his mind.
DANIEL
Yeah, Mark. Not any all actually.
MARK
Something on your mind?
DANIEL
(still looking down)
You know I care about you, right?
MARK
What?
DANIEL looks up at MARK. Pausing for a moment.
DANIEL
You know that, right?
MARK
Yes, of course I do. Why are you
even asking, what's the matter with
you?
A concerned look grows on MARK's face. DANIEL takes a moment
to compose himself before speaking again.
DANIEL
Look, I just wanted you to know
that...
DANIEL is nearly in tears. MARK is really concerned at this
sudden upset but places a hand on his shoulder in an effort
to comfort him.
MARK
(in an irritated tone)
I should what, Dan?
DANIEL
Be a better man than me, Mark.
MARK's entire body freezes. He gives a confused look at his
brother.
MARK
Why are you acting like this?
3.
DANIEL
I'm sorry, I should really start
getting ready.
DANIEL leaves the room. MARK stares at him leaving and his
eyes don't move from the spot on door. MARK moves his head
slightly toward a calendar to the right of the door which
says the date 20/2/2018 and the words: "DAN'S 20th" written
and circled in red.
A RECEPTIONIST opens the door into the classroom and pops her
head in.
RECEPTIONIST
Is Mark Murphy in this class?
MR. HARRISON
Yes, he is.
RECEPTIONIST
Oh great, he's got a call from his
mam.
(whispers)
It sounds urgent.
MR. HARRISON
Alright, I'll let him know.
MARK overhears this and begins to pack up his things. MR.
HARRISON stops him.
MR. HARRISON (CONT'D)
Woah, Mark. I still need an answer
from you. Is the gift of life fair?
MARK sighs and begins to think for a moment...
MARK
In terms of what?
MR. HARRISON has a confused look on his face but does not
answer. An awkward silence fills the room. Not all classmates
are being attentive now. MARK's stares at one spot like he's
zoned out as he speaks.
MARK (CONT'D)
I mean, it's quite... complex. No
one chooses to be born or where
they are born or who their family
is. You just play the lottery.
Except, in this case, you don't get
to choose to play or not. You just
play. Some people get a head start,
there's lots of inequality. But,
still, most people choose to keep
going because it can get better. I
guess the real question is: "Would
eternal life be a gift or burden?"
The entire class is now listening to him. MARK snaps back
into reality.
MARK (CONT'D)
I-I don't know... Can I go now?
5.
Though inconsolable before, once she see the two walk off
together, all her emotions come to a halt.
MARK
I just... It's not something the
average person will experience... I
don't even know where to begin
preparing. How do I even prepare?
JOSEPH
You can't. You just do it. It's
just something that happens to us.
It's out of our control. The only
thing I can advise is to accept
that you're going to experience
this. This is going to happen.
MARK
Accept this is going to happen...
MARK (CONT'D)
Why is it that everyone chooses to
death?
JOSEPH slowly stops what he's doing...
JOSEPH
Because there's more to it than
death...
A strike of lightning can be heard from a distance. JOSEPH
continues his task once again... MARK turns to look out of
the window and takes another sip of his water as he ponders
the meaning of what his dad just told him. A feeling of
regret grows on JOSEPH's face...
LUCIFER (CONT'D)
Ah yes, the Murphy's. Always a
delight seeing you.
MARK's expression subtly changes to a confused one. LUCIFER
picks up on this...
LUCIFER (CONT'D)
You seem surprised to see me.
A subtle confused look grows on MARK's face...
MARK
I'm sorry?
LUCIFER
I was assuming you'd be expecting
my visit.
MARK nods...
LUCIFER smiles at MARK before walking into the dining room.
MARK hesitates before following him...
MARK
(stumbling over his words)
Okay... what's the choice you are
going to give me?
LUCIFER
Ah you see, Mark. This is the
beauty of our meeting. I can only
tell you the answer once I feel you
are ready to hear it.
MARK ponders for a moment as LUCIFER sits back in his
chair...
MARK
Okay... who even are you?
LUCIFER
I think you already know.
MARK's eyes widen in concern...
MARK
You're the... devil?
LUCIFER
I prefer Lucifer, but yes, I am
what you call the devil.
MARK falls silent once again...
LUCIFER (CONT'D)
Look, not that it matters or
anything, but I already know what
you truly want to ask. So stop
avoiding them, Mark. Ask what your
heart truly desires.
MARK settles and ponders for a moment...
MARK
Before my brother died... He told
me something.
LUCIFER
(in the voice of Mark's
brother)
Be a better man than me, Mark.
MARK looks at LUCIFER in complete shock...
LUCIFER smiles in return...
14.
MARK
(with a trembling voice)
So, if you're real... Does that
mean that heaven and god is all
real?
LUCIFER looks at him in pity...
LUCIFER
I'm sorry, Mark. Of course he's
real, and all of his magnificent
creations. But, You don't think he
created you, do you?
MARK
(stumbling over his words)
H-he didn't?
LUCIFER
(passionately)
Think about it, Mark. Do you really
think something so horrific, and
unholy could be created by such an
omnipotent being? You... creatures
wage war on anything remotely
different to yourselves, hoard all
your ultimately pointless
possessions while letting others
rot in poverty on the streets you
paved beyond what is remotely
necessary. You destroy your planet,
your own home, just because you're
all too selfish to look after it.
Does that sound like one of God's
creations?
MARK looks defeated but finds strength within him to fight
against what LUCIFER has just said ...
MARK
There are good people here too.
LUCIFER
You're right, no truly great people
but, yes, good people exist.
MARK
So, what happens when we die?
LUCIFER
You stop existing.
MARK
What about our soul?
15.
LUCIFER laughs...
LUCIFER
That little amount of divine power?
We harvest that to create more...
desirable beings.
MARK looks crushed...
LUCIFER gets up from his seat and walks to a specific part of
the room as he finishes his sentence.
LUCIFER (CONT'D)
Mark, I get it, it's a lot to take
in. You should have seen the state
your brother was in when I told
him.
MARK
So, if that is all true, what do
you want from me?
LUCIFER
I want to offer you a choice.
MARK gets up from his seat...
MARK
What choice-
Before MARK can clarify, the room around him begins to shake
and dissolves, MARK falls to the floor as it cracks beneath
him, and the furniture he was sat on fell into a dark void.
Whatever he was in was filled with colours flashing around
him. LUCIFER was nowhere to be seen. Not before lone MARK is
on top of a high building in a modern cityscape. The streets
void of any person or being. Almost like a ghost town.
MARK (CONT'D)
Where am I?
LUCIFER appears behind him...
LUCIFER
This is Utopia, Mark!
MARK cannot keep his eyes off the city around him...
MARK
Utopia?
LUCIFER
Well, you call it purgatory. The
bridge between heaven and hell.
16.
MARK
You made purgatory?
LUCIFER
I did. It's the closest place
humans will get to heaven, or hell
if that makes you feel any better.
MARK notices the lack of people here...
MARK
Where is everyone?
LUCIFER
This is the newly built section. As
you can imagine there's quite the
influx of people entering here.
This is what I offer, Mark. Eternal
life in this city. Or before it is
erased by time itself. In a few
decades you'll have forgotten your
previous realm.
MARK
Why?
LUCIFER looks unimpressed...
LUCIFER
Mark, God might have given up on
humanity before you were
intelligent but I see your true
potential.
MARK
Potential?
LUCIFER
Yes, Mark. If a species can defy
the odds of evolution against an
omniscient, omnipotent God, of all
things, and become the dominant
species, who's to say you can't do
it again?
MARK turns to face LUCIFER...
MARK
What do you mean?
LUCIFER
We're going to take back what's
ours, Mark, because God sure as
hell isn't going to give it up.
17.
LUCIFER smiles...
Within a flash, MARK is transported back into his chair.
LUCIFER (CONT'D)
So, Mark, it's up to you now.
MARK looks up toward LUCIFER...
LUCIFER (CONT'D)
The choice is yours. I'll see you
again at midnight.
LUCIFER disappears in a burst of flames leaving MARK sat by
himself. MARK is exhausted, and defeated. He gets up and
grabs a beer and checks the time. It's 9am. After grabbing
the beer he goes to sit down outside.
JOSEPH (CONT'D)
I met your mother when I was 17,
maybe 18, by then my father had
already gone, and his father before
him, so I knew about the "curse",
but I didn't find out the truth
until my brother told me just
before he left. I just thought that
I'd die, but when I found I had a
choice to stay, with your mother, I
can't tell you how relieved I was.
MARK
But, was the option to live forever
a temptation?
JOSEPH
It was, but that's all it was, a
temptation. All I could think of
was the Bible verse: Corinthians
10:13 'And God is faithful, he will
not let you be tempted beyond what
you can bear.'
MARK
I didn't take you for Christian,
I'll be honest.
JOSEPH
(chuckles)
I'm not.
MARK
But what's the point, if we die,
you know there's nothing on the
other side? Nothing matters, so
what is the point?
JOSEPH
I think that makes it more
valuable, knowing life will end,
you know. If there were infinite
diamonds in the world, they'd be
valueless. So, I value my time
here, I give it a purpose, I make
it mean something, even if it's
just to me. You make you're own
purpose, Mark. Don't ever forget
that.
MARK looks inspired...
19.
STRANGER
But what about the people that have
already left. Your brother?
Wouldn't you like to see him again?
MARK's snaps his head towards the STRANGER who is staring at
him. A sense of unease can be felt.
MARK
(standing up)
What are you talking about?
STRANGER
(looking across the park)
He's waiting for you, Mark.
MARK'S FATHER can be seen down the path, smiling at MARK. He
looks no different to the last time MARK saw him. MARK just
looks confused and scared.
MARK
D-Dan?
MARK'S FATHER begins walking toward the two. MARK begins to
feel a sense of unease. As MARK'S FATHER walks toward him the
scene gets darker.
DANIEL
Hello, Mark.
DANIEL speaks in a strange way, almost like a robot.
MARK
What are you... why'd you leave?
DANIEL
I found freedom that transcends the
limitations of physical life. The
pain, the suffering... they were
replaced with everlasting joy. I
want that for you too.
MARK
What about our suffering, Dan? You
left us here. I can't-... I can't
do that to them. Not when I know
how that feels.
DANIEL
Is eternal life not worth a little
sacrifice? There, you can have
ultimate peace. A chance to be
truly fulfilled.
21.
EXT. UTOPIA
There is only darkness. Suddenly a voice echoes through his
ears.
LILITH
You aren't supposed to be here.
MARK jolts back to consciousness. All he sees is a blur of
his surroundings, a mixture of blue and white. His eyes
slowly adjust to the light hitting them. MARK is clearly
scared and confused at his surroundings.
He looks up and sees this visually ageless yet strangely
ancient being in front of him.
MARK
I died, didn't I?
LILITH scoffs.
LILITH
You took his deal. Just like the
rest of them. All tempted by his
offer of eternal life.
MARK is barely listening. The light that once blinded him
displays a beautiful cityscape with modern architecture and
people flocking the streets. Just like he saw.
23.
MARK
Wow, it's... beautiful.
LILITH
Don't let it fool you, this isn't
what it looks like.
LILITH's casual demeanor stops MARK in his awe.
MARK
Who... even are you?
She puts her hands to her lips and snaps her fingers and, in
an instant, the beautiful modern streets warped into a
rundown, abandoned city. The buildings are made from
concrete. There metal support poles that are holding the
buildings up are sticking out from the corners. Rubble and
muck fall down onto the street that were once filled with
people. Now, they all are on one road, heading in the same
direction. Disgusting grotesque creatures are guarding the
sides stopping anyone from diverting from the path. The once
beautiful, blue sky is replaced with a disgusting, blood-red
colour.
LILITH
This is what you were given in
exchange for your mortality, Mark.
Not the beautiful Utopia you were
promised is it?
MARK doesn't even look away. He can't, he's in shock. Panic
shoots through his body as he falls to his knees in defeat
with his head hanging down. After a moment he looks up, tears
in his eyes, taking another look at this hellscape he
volunteered himself to.
MARK
I should've listened...
END OF SCRIPT