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    Here is a revised response with improved analysis of the literary devices and their purpose: a) The phrase "weary bones" used to describe the zookeeper is an example of personification. By giving human qualities like being tired to the zookeeper's bones, the writer effectively conveys how exhausted the zookeeper feels after a long day of work. This helps the reader empathize with his situation. b) The description of the animals as "prisoners" and "inmates" is a metaphor. Comparing the animals to prisoners highlights how trapped and confined they feel in the small zoo cages. This metaphor allows the writer to subtly criticize the poor living conditions in zoos and draw attention to the need for animal welfare

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    Here is a revised response with improved analysis of the literary devices and their purpose: a) The phrase "weary bones" used to describe the zookeeper is an example of personification. By giving human qualities like being tired to the zookeeper's bones, the writer effectively conveys how exhausted the zookeeper feels after a long day of work. This helps the reader empathize with his situation. b) The description of the animals as "prisoners" and "inmates" is a metaphor. Comparing the animals to prisoners highlights how trapped and confined they feel in the small zoo cages. This metaphor allows the writer to subtly criticize the poor living conditions in zoos and draw attention to the need for animal welfare

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    CamScanner 10-24-2023 22.43

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    Here is a revised response with improved analysis of the literary devices and their purpose: a) The phrase "weary bones" used to describe the zookeeper is an example of personification. By giving human qualities like being tired to the zookeeper's bones, the writer effectively conveys how exhausted the zookeeper feels after a long day of work. This helps the reader empathize with his situation. b) The description of the animals as "prisoners" and "inmates" is a metaphor. Comparing the animals to prisoners highlights how trapped and confined they feel in the small zoo cages. This metaphor allows the writer to subtly criticize the poor living conditions in zoos and draw attention to the need for animal welfare

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    There is a good selection of relevant points to cover all three points Points:
    required by the question.
    Grammatical and some spelling errors have been indicated Content = 15/15
    which can be noted for improvement. Language = 2/5
    It is advisable to use an English dictionary to confirm Total = 17/20
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    Points = 3/10

    Feedback: The choice of words/phrases needs to match the requirement of the question
    such as the zookeeper’s condition in part a) and the animals in part b). This then needs to
    be correctly explained in terms of not only pointing out the literary device they contain such
    as personification or metaphor… but also need to be correctly linked to the purpose of the
    chosen words/phrase in the context of the paragraph i.e what does the writer want to show
    by using those words/phrases.
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