Global

Warming
IELTS Band 9 Essay
By: Chong & Lee
Many scientists are concerned about global warming. Research
shows that the worldwide increase in temperature is getting
worse. Furthermore, global warming seems to be related to
levels of pollution in the atmosphere. Discuss the causes of
global warming and possible solutions to the problem.
 Introduction
With a rapid growth towards Industrialisation,
our human race is impacting all-natural occurring
phenomena.

It has therefore led to major environmental issues

such as global warming due to a drastic increase in
pollution and waste generation, but there are a
number of solutions available to tackle them.

This essay will discuss the causes and proffer

(提供者) solutions to it.
 Paragraph 1
Recent development and globalisation have a drastic impact on our
mother nature and this is turning out to be the worst problem for
all living beings.

Due to the increase in population and associative commutation, the

consumption of natural resources is exponentially increased
resulting in all sorts of pollution. In all metropolitans, due to an
increase in the number of factories and industries, the amount of
garbage generated is huge.

Consequently, all the surrounding water bodies are dumped with the
by-products released during production and in turn pollute our
environment thereby increasing the impurity level of our city.

As an illustration, a cloth manufacturing organisation is releasing

out harmful chemicals in the nearby water source making it
polluted.
 Paragraph 2
However, there are ways of tackling (处理)the
above-mentioned problem.

Government should make strict rules that should adhere to

save environment guidelines. For example, any factory that
is not following the rules should be heavily fined so that
they will not repeat it again.
A
Furthermore, we all should be committed to a common
B
motto to save our planet and should promote recycling at all
levels of our society.

Firstly, this will reduce the dependency on the government

and secondly, will prevent all types of pollution generated
through our actions.
 Conclusion
To conclude, with continuous development we
are generating a tremendous amount of waste

but we can make sure to channelize our waste

and treat it under proper recycling techniques.

Although it seems tedious( 乏味 ), if each one of

us will do our part, then our world will be a
better place to live.