Handmade

Vs
Factory Made
IELTS BAND 9 ESSAY

By; Chong & Lee

Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other
items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer,
which do you prefer and why?

Give specific details and examples in your answer.

 INTRODUCTION

There are various types of products that are

available in the market. Some of them are
machine-made, while others are hand-made.

The former enables rapid production, whereas,

the latter is a slower process.However, I adore
things that are personally prepared by humans.

This essay will discuss the reasons for the

same in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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Firstly, the making of these products requires
enormous physical labour.

For instance, the villages of India, are known for

numerous arts and handicrafts. One of them is
the embroidery works on traditional clothing. In
order to, create this masterpiece the artist
devotes 2 to 3 months to a particular garment.

In addition to that, constant use of needles has

an adverse impact on their fingers.

Thus, I believe it is of utmost importance that

such innovators should be rewarded for their
dedication and hard work.
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Secondly, the making of hand-made materials
facilitates the protection of the culture of a country.

For example, in India, there is a practice that pots

are made from burnt clay, and they are decorated
with beautiful paintings.

This is an integral part of Indian culture, and it is an

age-old practice that is still prevalent due to the
presence of skilled craftsmen who are building them
with their own hands.

Hence, I am of the opinion that to protect the

cultural heritage of a nation it is crucial that I
purchase these hand-made potteries.
CONCLUSION

To conclude, there are a plethora of

products available , among them some are
quickly produced by the machine , while
others are manufactured manually.

Nevertheless, in my viewpoint, I prefer

hand-made substances as they are made
with great effort.

Besides that, it strongly promotes the

culture of a place.