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WRITING COMMENTARY

The topic for the article is ‘The Unknown Fascinating Facts of the
Bermuda Triangle’, it is about the mystery of the Bermuda Triangle
that modern scientists are not sure of the cause.
I was originally interested in investigating ‘the impact of the
Bermuda Triangle on society and the rest of the world’ Because
many were curious about it, and were not sure what the real cause
of it was. The Bermuda Triangle is one of the most enduring
mysteries of our time. It is been associated with the unexplained
disappearance of ships and planes, leaving many to speculate
about the causes of the strange natural phenomenon. The article
acknowledges the nature, cause, and impact, of the Bermuda
Triangle. The Bermuda Triangle has been a subject that has
sparked numerous theories and has captured the imagination of
both experts and enthusiasts for decades. The article also helps us
to understand the historical background of the natural phenomenon
and the mysteries that evolved.
I have written the article mainly for young readers who were always
curious about the amusing puzzling mysteries. This also helps them
to get a clear understanding that not all mysteries have a definite
solution and never have a single definite theory. I chose to write
about this topic to provoke the curiosity of young readers and
provide them with information about the Bermuda Triangle. The
Bermuda Triangle has been an example of how nature is
unpredictable and plays a huge role in impacting our society.
I hope the article Is interesting, logical, and persuasive. I have used
simple and understandable vocabulary for all the readers to
understand. The subtitles give us a zest for the information in the
upcoming paragraph. The article is provided with pieces of
evidence for a better and clearer understanding, such as The
Bermuda Depths “produced in 1978 by Tom Kotani is the first
movie, The name of this area came from a sensational 1964 article
by Gaddis and McClendon, especially the infamous tragedy that
occurred in March 1918 when the USS Cyclops, a 542-foot-long
Navy cargo ship with over 300 men and 10,000 tons of manganese
ore onboard, sank, the disappearance of Flight 19. On December 5,
1945, the U.S. Navy estimated that around 50 ships and 20 aircraft had
gone missing there. Scientists Say Gas Bubbles Could Explain
Bermuda Triangle Mystery Newsy In 2016, scientists discovered
several huge craters on the coast of Norway, A good example is the
100 ft high tsunami caused by an earthquake and landslide in
Lituya Bay, Alaska, in 1958, An excellent example of such a theory in
action is the disappearance of Flight 19 after World War II, an incident
that happened in 1945 when five TBM Avenger torpedo bombers
flew across the Atlantic Ocean and so on. I hope the Evidence
helped you to gain a better understanding of the situation.

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