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Shriaan Alshriaan
Writing 2
In the complex world of modern sports and fitness, Anabolic-Androgenic Steroids (AAS)
– or simply steroids – cast a significant shadow. These substances, capable of enhancing strength
and physique, have transformed the nature of athletic performance and deeply influenced health
and societal beliefs. This dual nature of steroids has naturally attracted research from multiple
disciplines, most notably psychology and epidemiology. Psychology with its interest in the
human mind, explores how steroid use affects behavior and social interactions. Conversely,
epidemiology, concerned with public health, examines the prevalence and patterns of steroid use
within populations. Exploring the nuanced methodologies of both disciplines, the analysis of two
academic articles on AAS use highlights the distinct approaches of the two in terms of data
analysis, article structure, and citation styles, while acknowledging their shared pursuit of
objective scientific.
Both articles discuss the topic of steroid use, but they adopt distinctly different
approaches, reflective of their respective disciplines' objectives. The first article “Prevalence and
research on steroid usage in Kuwait, it examines the “lifetime prevalence of AAS use among”
Kuwaiti gym users.1 Furthermore, the study identifies potential predictors of steroid use using
logistic regression, a simple statistical method. It finds that 35% of the surveyed population
reported steroid use, with factors such as “[l]ower age, being Kuwaiti, smoking, and placing high
importance on muscle tone … [being] significant predictors of “ steroid use.1 Given that
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S. Khullar, et al., "Prevalence and Predictors of Anabolic-Androgenic Steroid Use among Gym Users in
Kuwait: A Preliminary Study," Journal of Health Research, 30 (2016): 144-156.
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specified populations…” it is only natural for that article to look at the prevalence of steroid use
By contrast, the second article “Aggression and Psychological Distress in Male and
the complexity of the question at hand. The authors studied the potential relationships between
steroid use and the different psychological patterns of aggression and distress. They found that
under steroids, males are more likely to show higher levels of aggression than females.3
Additionally, as evident in the title, they were looking for qualitative patterns, and multiple
analysis. In essence, psychological research prioritizes depth and a tighter focus, whereas
epidemiology takes on a broader, more general scope. This distinction becomes clearer when we
The articles differ in the complexity and methods of analysis. The first article uses
straightforward statistical methods when analyzing its data. Utilizing the Statistical Package for
Social Sciences (SPSS), the authors performed a logistic regression on the data to determine
steroid usage prevalence.4 The findings are presented as clear-cut percentages, reflecting the
simplicity of the statistical methods required for epidemiological research. For instance, they
report that the prevalence of use stands at 35%, whereas it increases to 58.6% when the analysis
was narrowed to “Kuwaiti males between the ages of 18 and 30”.4 Because the discipline relies
2
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, "Introduction to Epidemiology | Public Health 101 Series," accessed
February 21, 2024, https://www.cdc.gov/training/publichealth101/epidemiology.html.
3
R. Chegeni, et al., "Aggression and Psychological Distress in Male and Female Anabolic-Androgenic
Steroid Users: A Multigroup Latent Class Analysis," Journal of Behavioral Medicine, 44 (2021): 1.
4
Khullar et al., "Prevalence and Predictors," 150.
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heavily on spread and simple quantitative variables, only basic binary analysis is needed. In this
case, individuals either use or do not use steroids, no other categories exist. The authors mention
this under the ‘Measures’ sub-section, “Lifetime AAS use was measured as a dichotomous
outcome variable by grouping … as…users and….as non-users.”5 As for the psychology article,
much more complex analyses are performed. Multigroup Latent Class Analysis (MLCA) is used
to analyze the collected data, and as you can tell it isn’t a common method, nor does it sound
simple. As the authors describe, “A multigroup latent class analysis… is superior to traditional
psychological research and the qualitative nature of its results and data, which ask for more
complex methods that can handle that nature. This is evident when the authors state that “a
homogenous five-class solution was the best model…” indicating that they tried other methods,
possibly even simpler ones, and found that a more complex 5-class model provided the best fit,
as opposed to fewer class models.7 As we shift focus from the methodologies employed to the
nature of citations, the contrasting academic approaches of these disciplines become even more
apparent.
The disparity in citation volume between the two articles further emphasizes the
divergent research methodologies of psychology and epidemiology. In the second article, the
authors cite many sources throughout the text. The number of citations used alone is much
greater than those used in the epidemiological article, with 74 references8 as opposed to 549,
respectively. That is around 40% more sources, which is certainly not an insignificant figure.
This simple difference alone reflects a fundamental difference between the two disciplines; the
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Khullar et al., "Prevalence and Predictors," 148.
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Chegeni, et al., "Aggression and Psychological Distress," 2.
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Ibid., 1.
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Khullar, et al., "Prevalence and Predictors," 153-156.
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Chegeni, et al., "Aggression and Psychological Distress," 7-9.
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nature of inquiry differs. Psychological research often involves exploring complex behaviors and
mental processes, which might require extensive referencing to establish theoretical and
empirical context. As a result, the authors are obliged to reference a lot of past research to justify
and build upon their claims. On the other hand, the first article focuses more on empirical
findings and less on theoretical discourse, requiring fewer references. This is typical of
epidemiological research and is evident in both the title and the goals that the authors set at the
Analyzing the selection of references in each study, we see a clear boundary between the
research interests of psychology and epidemiology. For example, after looking through the
reference list of the psychology article and randomly choosing 4 entries, it is clear that the
sources are generally about depression, aggression, violence, and other related subjects:
meta-regression analysis,”
Montgomery and Åsberg Depression Rating Scale, and the Hospital Anxiety and
● “Eating disorder symptoms and body image concerns in Iran: Comparisons between
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Khullar, et al., "Prevalence and Predictors," 144.
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Chegeni, et al., "Aggression and Psychological Distress," 7-9.
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● “His biceps become him: A test of objectification theory’s application to drive for
From women’s body image to eating disorders, to objectification theory, we see that
differences in the ranges of sources, reflect the nature of these two disciplines; psychology
usually researches subjects deeply and in a focused manner, while epidemiology takes on a
broader, more holistic approach that focuses on societal impacts. Having observed these thematic
differences, we now turn to the citation styles, which further reveal the distinct academic natures
Each article's citation style reflects its discipline's specific needs. The psychological
article uses an interesting style of citation: the Vancouver style. The following sentence
illustrates this: “However, considering the inconsistency of results across studies (13–22) it is not
clear whether there are unobserved patterns of aggression and psychological distress among AAS
users.”13 This style of citing is very different from other styles like Chicago, or MLA. The in-text
citations do not state the author and date, but rather a number between parentheses. These are
very similar to footnotes, but instead of being expanded upon at the bottom of the page, they
correspond to the same number in the reference list, where the actual information is found. This
style is often preferred in the scientific communities. Disciplines like Psychology, which
emphasize empirical data and qualitative analysis, often cite numerous sources. To streamline the
reading experience, they use concise numerical citations rather than extensive author-date
references. This can be beneficial in presenting complex research findings and methodologies
12
Khullar, et al., "Prevalence and Predictors," 153-156.
13
Chegeni, et al., "Aggression and Psychological Distress," 2.
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typically found in psychological research. In contrast, the Chicago style used in the first article is
found in a variety of disciplines, including social sciences and humanities. This versatility
the differences in citation styles, the next aspect that illustrates the disciplines' distinct
Beyond citations, the structural layout of these articles also mirrors their disciplinary
needs. The second article uses a two-column format, commonly seen in scientific and technical
publications. This format efficiently utilizes space and aids in the readability of complex data,
formulas, and statistical analyses. It is particularly suitable for articles with numerous graphs,
tables, and equations. Seeing that the psychology article has 3 large tables that are a page long
each, 2 large complex graphs, and 1 more table for a total of 6 figures, this convention makes
sense.14 In contrast, the first article adopts a full-page format, typical of humanities and social
sciences publications, including public health. This format favors a narrative style of writing and
and qualitative analyses rather than technical data presentations. This is not to say that there
their scholarly tone and methodological caution. Take a look at the following two quotes:
“Further research using longitudinal designs may elucidate transitions between latent
classes.”15
“It may also be the case that AAS are easily obtainable in Kuwait though this is an area in
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Chegeni, et al., "Aggression and Psychological Distress," 2-7.
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Ibid., 7.
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Khullar, et al., "Prevalence and Predictors," 152.
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Both quotes use a similar tone. One that uses the third-person extensively and which states facts
as ‘likely being the case’, instead of declaring them to be the truth. These similar characteristics
are understandable since both articles fall under a common greater genre: academic articles.
Academic writing developed these features to separate the research findings from the researcher's
personal views, aiming to minimize bias and enhance objectivity. This reflects the objectivity
epidemiology and psychology underscores their distinct focuses. While epidemiology quantifies
steroid use's societal spread, psychology investigates its behavioral impacts. Variations in
structure, citation styles, and references further highlight the unique characteristics of each
discipline. Yet, both fields share a commitment to objective and cautious academic inquiry,
Reference List
Khullar, Neha, Nicholas C. Scull, Maureen C. Deeny, and Elham Hamdan. “Prevalence and
Preliminary Study.” International Journal of Men’s Health 15, no. 2 (July 1, 2016): 144.
https://www.questia.com/library/journal/1P3-4321282151/prevalence-and-predictors-of-an
abolic-androgenic-steroid.
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. "Introduction to Epidemiology | Public Health 101
https://www.cdc.gov/training/publichealth101/epidemiology.html.
Chegeni, Razieh, Guy Notelaers, Ståle Pallesen, and Dominic Sagoe. “Aggression and
https://doi.org/10.3389/fpsyt.2021.629428.