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05 - Dian Kartika Intan - Argumentative Essay
05 - Dian Kartika Intan - Argumentative Essay
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Have you heard such statements while watching Topeng Monyet? A monkey rides a
bike, holds an umbrella, or even dances with a gorilla mask. This attraction is still favored by
many people even though it has been banned in Indonesia on a legal basis, one of which is
the Criminal Code (KUHP) No. 302 which regulates acts of animal torture. The unique and
funny show may be considered entertaining for kids to adults. But in this era, being
entertained by an animal that may be suffering to death is beyond awful. Perhaps, the
monkeys are not that smart, they just, unfortunately, live surrounded by ignorants. By that,
here are some reasons why Topeng Monyet needs to stop.
Topeng Monyet is one of the familiar street attractions in Indonesia. People will
gather around hearing the special strain of Topeng Monyet’s gamelan sound. One or more
people usually take the monkey handler role, they will direct the monkey to do each Topeng
Monyet attraction one by one. A Topeng Monyet ‘team’ normally does the attraction for 10 to
15 minutes at each stop, from one village to another. At the end of the show, the monkey will
hold a box and walk around the crowd. “Please share your kindness, for the monkey’s meal,”
the handler's common sentence. Then, the box will not take a long time to be full of
donations. Perhaps we need to start asking ourselves, have we been misinterpreting
kindness all this time?
At the end of the day, discontinuation of Topeng Monyet is the best thing we could
do. We have to realize that some things are better unpreserved. You reap what you sow, we
have to start a change for a better environment in the future.
Ananda Marizka/02
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Sources:
1. Lucanus, Anton J. "Topeng Monyet: Kesenian Tradisional Indonesia Atau
Kekejaman terhadap Hewan?" University of Western Australia, 2014.
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dari-eksploitasi
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topeng-monyet
Outline:
+ Topeng Monyet is an art since long ago and has cultural value not only in Indonesia,
but in other countries
- It has to stop, we need to stop as it harms monkeys.
+ Many of topeng monyet performer treat the monkeys better these day///It’s a life for
some people
- The definition of a better treatment needs to be improved. zoonosis
+
- It has to stop. It is in the rules. Having a monkey living next to us with so called
‘better treatment’ could be a danger for us,
+ Topeng Monyet teach kids and adults to love animals as they could see and interact
with them
+ The kid who are radiated by these act may grew up thinking animal cruelty is
something ordinary, or even a culture needs to be preserve, when they get hurt, the
animal is on wrong