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1. Opening (4 sentences)
1 – Context
There is no doubt that humans’ cognitive and social competencies are shaped
at an early age.
2 – Narrow (teachers vs parents)
Two parties that are instrumental in children’s development of these
attributes are undoubtedly teachers and parents.
3 – Paraphrase
Some people believe the former actually has a greater bearing on the process
than the latter.
4 – Answer
While the role of the school in helping children become more intellectually and
socially advanced is irrefutable, I would argue that parents are of no less
importance.
2. Body
Body 1 – teachers
1 – Topic: teachers are important
On the one hand, teachers play a monumental role in helping youngsters
become more intelligent and socially capable.
2 – Explain – intelligence
In terms of intelligence, the knowledge that teachers impart, especially in
primary school, is the foundation for/ precursor to people’s understanding of
the world and their ability to reason.
4 – Conclusion
Given all of this knowledge, it seems sensible why many think that teachers
are more important in how children think and behave.
2 – Explain
While teachers indeed teach students a wealth of knowledge at school, their
efforts would be futile if this knowledge is not reinforced at home.
3 – Explain
Furthermore, children look up to parents as role models, which means if the
way their mother or father acts (S) contradicts the virtues taught in class, it is
unlikely that these values will be instilled in children.
4 – Example
For example, children who grow up with abusive parents are likely to adopt
the same aggressive tendency that they see in their household, regardless of
how they are taught to behave at school.
5 – Conclusion
This is a testament to how parents and teachers need to work in tandem to
best foster children’s growth.
3. Conclusion