Task 2: For school children, their teachers have more influence on their

intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?  Bài viết tốt hơn trước, tuy nhiên vẫn còn dùng từ sai hơi
nhiều, cái đó thực ra cũng tốt vì sai bây giờ đỡ hơn là sai khi đi thi. Tuy nhiên là
chưa áp dụng hết được bài học nha. 6.

It is true that children are facilely affected by the surrounding environment. While
many people argue that teachers play a major role in social development and
intelligence of their students in comparison with parents, I partly side with this
idea.

On one hand, there are some reasons accounting for teachers has a stronger
impact on children. First of all, life is increasingly becoming competitive these
days, so that most fathers and mothers have to work to provide a shelter. As a
result, they do not have enough time to listen to their children’ confessions and
their children's issues. Secondly, many students have a duty to complete
homeworks which are given by teachers who may discover students’
weaknesses or talents as well. A lot of young talented professional players, for
instance, are explored by their own coaches. Hence, youngsters could be well
developed in the hand of teachers

On the other hand, children can be extremely influenced by their parents. Firstly,
the equation is divided equally between students at school. A normal class in Viet
Nam, for example, ranges from 40 to 50 students and solely with 2 teachers.
Sometimes there is a student who is stutter or later development that
usually requires the teachers more attention. More importantly, kids are almost
depended on and supported by their parents. Actually, these parents are able to
totally interfere with the decisions of kids and give them useful advice. Therefore,
children can be nourished thoroughly and receive practical instructions from their
parent. 

In conclusion, not only does teachers impact children, I believe that parents play
a major role in them as well. If we can combine these roles altogether, children
can have a bright future.