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SKRIPSI
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ABSTRACT
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ABSTRAK
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ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
gratitude to Allah S.W.T for blessing, love, opportunity, health, and mercy, to
complete this skripsi. Then, shalawat and salam always are given to our prophet
Muhammad S.A.W who has brought us from the darkness to the brighter path in
this life also become a motivation for the researcher in finishing this skripsi. This
University.
and support for the researcher. In this valuable chance, the researcher intends to
First, this skripsi would not have been possible without the help, support
and patience of his supervisor, Prof. Konder Manurung, DEA., Ph.D for his
supervision, advice, and guidance from the very early stage of this research as
well as giving him extraordinary experiences throughout the past few months.
Then to his co-supervisor Zarkiani Hasyim, S.Pd., M.Pd who has helped him
patiently finishing this skripsi by giving suggestion, guidance, and correction until
the completion of this skripsi. Greatest appreciation goes to Dr. Hj. Rofiqoh,
M.Ed as his reviewer and the Coordinator of English Education Study Program
for her advice, supervision, and crucial contribution in the improvement of the
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result of this skripsi. Also appreciation goes to Drs. Mochtar Marhum, M.Ed.,
Ph.D and Afrillia Anggreni, S.Pd.I., M.Pd as the Chairperson and Secretary in his
skripsi examination.
The researcher presents his sincere appreciation to Prof. Dr. Ir. Amar, ST.,
MT, IPU., ASEAN Eng as the Rector of Tadulako University, Dr. Ir. Amiruddin
Kade, S.Pd., M.Si as the Dean of Teacher Training and Education Faculty, Dr. Hj.
Sriati Usman, M.Hum as the Head of Language and Art Education Department,
and all staff for their administrative assistance, especially Rahayuni, S.Si as the
appreciates to all lecturers of English Education Study Program for their guidance
Nurhayati, S.Sos., M.Si for allowing him to conduct the research there. Also to
the staff for allowing him to conduct his research in the library. He could never
Deepest appreciation goes to his beloved parents, his late mother Surni
S.Pd for the endless love, pray, and support. And his father, Djisman G. Hanusu
for the phone call every week in order to remind him to keep going and never give
up. Also to the princes and princeses of his family, his beloved brothers and
sisters. Ririn, Titin, Didi, Pipin, Dani, and Aril who never stop asking about the
completion of his study. Their text messages keep him annoyed but magicaly give
him reason to be focus to finish his study as soon as posible. Furthermore, the
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He is very grateful to have some close friends who always support him.
They are Malik, Audi, Nisa, Iyah, Dian, Sasa, Fia, Della, Shasa, Pute, Naurah,
Ana, Jihan, Tasya, Rinia, Dimas, Rara, Anissa, Ekhy, Farid, and Ridha. They are
always good listeners for every problem he faced, especially when he had to
revise this skripsi and re-start over and over again. Their opinions never stop
surprise him and also allow him to see his problem from a different angle. His
gratitude also goes to his work partners. They are Vani, Rizky, and Devi for every
He would like to say thanks to his brothers and sisters of Fearless Class
19th, thank you for being such a good second family who always ready to help
him, and thanks for the time that they have every day and night.
Finally, the researcher would like to thank everybody who are important to
This skripsi is far from perfect, but it is expected that it will be useful not only for
the researcher, but also for the readers. For this reason, constructive thoughtful
The researcher
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
COVER i
APPROVAL ii
HALAMAN PENGESAHAN iii
MOTTO iv
ABSTRACT v
ABSTRAK vi
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS vii
TABLE OF CONTENTS vii
LIST OF FIGURES ix
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION 1
1.1 Background 1
1.2 Problem Statements 3
1.3 The Objective of the Research 3
1.4 Scope of the Reseach 3
1.5 Significance of the Research 4
1.6 Operational Definitions of Key Terms 4
CHAPTER II LITERATURE REVIEW AND THEORETICAL
FRAMEWORK 5
2.1 Literature Review 5
2.2 Theoretical Framework 15
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHOD 17
3.1 Research Design 17
3.2 Data Source 17
3.3 Technique of Data Collection 18
3.4 Technique of Data Analysis 18
CHAPTER IV FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION 19
4.1 Findings 19
4.2 Discussion 27
CHAPTER V CONCLUSION AND SUGESTION 33
5.1 Conclusion 33
5.2 Suggestion 34
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REFERENCES 35
APPENDICES 39
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LIST OF FIGURES
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LIST OF APPENDICES
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
1.1 Background
any message. Hyland (2003) states writing is among the most important skills that
need to develop and it involves composing skill and knowledge about texts,
most challenging of the four English skills, because Choudhury (2013) states
writing skill needs the ability to create, organize ideas, and translate them into a
cohesive text that is readable as well. Writing is a complex process for English
learned because at least English learners must have read, mastering English
using grammar correctly and have limited vocabulary, therefore they are difficult
appropriate methods and a media in teaching and learning process to solve the
problems which make the students interest and enthusiastic. One of the several
specific. Based on that, it can be assumed that clustering technique looks similar
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to mind mapping technique. However, Buzan (2007) states mind map uses all
pictures and make possible the ideas to association in radial design. Information
can be illustrated with symbols, image, words, links, color, and attachments to add
context, helping to reveal new directions, greater clarity, and big ideas. Then,
Langan (2006) argues clustering is a technique that groups the ideas from general
to more specific and more guided. The students can use this technique to produce,
relationship among the ideas and details that occur to them, the students can use
line, boxes, arrows and circle. Both of these techniques are appropriate method in
writing. Recount text is one genre that is required for students to write well.
in the past. Anderson and Anderson (1997) state that recount text is a piece of text
retelling past events, usually in the order in which they happened. The purpose of
recount text is to give the audience a description of what occurred and when it
use for teaching students’ writing ability. This research aimed to review related
writing recount text on scientific articles and undergraduate theses. Therefore, the
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technique and the effect of clustering technique in teaching writing recount text
undergraduate theses and scientific articles between 2013 until 2022 about the use
1. Theoretical significance
This research can be used as references and theories for researcher who
2. Practical significance
English teaching-learning process. For students, this research can improve their
learning process.
the meaning of the terms used in this research, the researcher provided some
definitions:
specific.
2. Writing ability is an ability to convey ideas between the reader and writer
3. Recount text is a kind of text that tells about experience in the past
CHAPTER II
any message into the written text. According to Brown (2008), writing as the
sharpen your main ideas, to give them structure and coherent organization.
Harmer (2006) states writing is an activity to help students solve problems with
developing language into written form clearly. Nunan (2008) defines writing is a
mental act that creates ideas and expresses ideas into sentences and even
important to learn such as the most used ability in academic learning besides
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Writing has many genres of text. However, there are five genres of text
that are generally used and should be learned in school, such as: 1) narrative text,
provides information and describes any thing such as humans, animals, plants and
based on existing scientific facts; 5) recount text, it has the goal of describing past
Due to the quotation, there are some genres of text and all of those texts
are important in taching and learning writing. Genres of writing are important
organization.
Writing ability is an ability to convey ideas between the reader and writer.
In learning writing ability, there are some aspects that should be ordered to
make a good writing. According to Heaton (1988:135), five major aspects are
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good writing. Each element plays a vital role in conveying ideas, engaging
readers, and ensuring clarity and accuracy. Developing proficiency in these areas
improves the overall quality of writing and enhances the students’ writing ability
to communicate effectively.
the students’ writing ability. Writing ability is very important for the students
especially to get a good writing. Brown (1994:343), gives some tips that can help
process. Therefore, those tips in the quotation empower students to develop their
writing skills and achieve their desired level of proficiency in learning writing.
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writing is the most used ability in academic learning. According to Weigle (2002),
writing is an important part of the curriculum in the schools from the earliest
grade onward, and most children in countries that have a formal education system
will learn to write, at least at a basic level in that setting. It means the teacher
should know the problems faced by the students during teaching learning process
to know the efficient technique to solving the writing problems in writing class.
As the most used ability in academic learning, writing has reasons why it
should be taught in learning English. Seth (2004:123) explains the reasons why
and guides students to reinforce learning. Teacher plays a vital role in supporting
students in the writing process, teacher inspires, instructs, and empowers students
teaching writing also has reasons and the teacher should use the proper technique
so that students’ writing ability can be improved. Those reasons in the quotation is
academic success.
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Recount text is a kind of text that tells about experience in the past. Knapp
and Watkins (2005) define recount text basically written out to express an
recount text has a purpose to tell what happened in the past. Examples of recount
text are newspaper reports, letters, conversation, and speeches. Due to that, it can
be assumed recount text is about past events or activities. In recount text students
expect to express their ideas about their experience in past to entertain the readers.
text retelling about past event or experience. It has a purpose to entertain or give
pay attention about generic structures of recount text that should be used in
recount text.
There are a few different types of recount text in writing. And it may
recount text that has the same purpose to entertain the readers by retelling
Recount text has language features that should be used in writing that
Derewianka (1990:15), recount text usually uses some language features, such as:
are several techniques or strategies can be used by the teacher, such as mind
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Rico (1983), picture series by Wright (1989), number head together by Kegan
(1993) and others. “In the implementation of those teaching techniques, the
teacher must be creative so that the learners are motivated” (Manurung, 2012).
Clustering and mind mapping are two examples of techniques that can be
used in teaching writing. Clustering and mind mapping are effective techniques in
“Grouping” ideas from general to more specific. Based on Buzan (1974) mind
mapping can be illustrated with symbols, image, words, links, color, and
attachments to add context, helping to reveal new directions, greater clarity, and
big ideas. Then, based on Rico (1983), clustering can be illustrated with line,
boxes, arrows and circle to produce, to develop, and to group their ideas in a good
way.
of English and Creativity at California’s San Jose State University in the 1980s.
According to Rico (1983), clustering technique provides you with two things
essentially: choices from which to formulate and develop your thought, and focus
useful enough to impel you to write. It is a type of prewriting that allows writer to
and Hogue (2005) define clustering is a brainstorming activity that can be used to
technique. Students can draw boxes or circles in the middle of the paper and then
make lines while the students get an idea for the main topic and words related to
the main topic. This technique gives students more convenience to explore ideas
and free to write down whatever idea comes to mind. By using clustering
and improving writing ability. Teachers should provide guidance, scaffolding, and
it. Rico (1983:23) as the founder of clustering technique explains the general
the writers are free to express the ideas that are in their minds without worrying
in any ways as long as they are in accordance with the core of procedure of
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cluster. Begin to write, the words will come. The writing takes over and writes
reflection of the way the design mind naturally works-that is, it clusters for
follows:
1. Take a sheet of paper and write your main topic in the middle of a sheet of
Memorable
experiences
2. Write ideas relating to that topic around it, circle them, and connect them to
the central circle. Write them quickly, move into another space, write some
more down, move to another blank, and just keep moving around and writing.
Fishing
Cooking
Memorable
experiences
School
Holiday
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3. Write down ideas, examples, facts, or other details relating to each idea, and
4. Repeat. As you write and circle new words and phrases, draw lines back to
the last word, the central word, or other words that seem connected.
5. Keep going until you can think nothing else relating to our topic. Then, see a
set of cluster that have done, if one particular circle of the clustering is
enough to begin a draft, you can cluster again to expand the branches and or
you also can cross out the words and phrase that seem irrelevant, and begin to
helps students to generate and develop their ideas (Reid, 1993). Second, it allows
the students focus on an occasion they want to describe in his paper (Wyrick,
2011). Third, clustering technique can help students arrange their ideas in the
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sense that they will not include any irrelevant thought or unimportant points
(Sosilawati, 2012).
to write an essay writing which has long paragraph. Second, clutering technique
will confuse the students how to start their writing (Styati, 2010).
speaking, reading and listening. Teaching writing in junior and senior high school
is difficult for the teacher, especially in recount text. Students must to think
critically and understand what they have written. Students learn writing very
technique. Clustering technique is a kind of techniques that can make it easier for
and learning process will be easier and exciting. According to Rico (1983:23), the
1) begin with a nucleus word as main topic, circled, on a fresh page. 2) now
you simply let go and begin to flow with any current ideas or thoughts that
come into your head. 3) write these down rapidly, each in its own circle,
radiating outward from the center in any direction they want to go. 4)
connect each new word or phrase with a line to the preceding circle. 5) when
something new and different strikes you, again at the central nucleus and
radiate outward until those associations are exhausted.
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that the writers are free to express the ideas that are in their minds without
worrying in any ways as long as they are in accordance with the core of procedure
of clustering itself.
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
In this research, the researcher used a qualitative research design and the
library research method. Zeid (2004) defines library research is a research used
study, references and other scientific literature related to cultural values and
The researcher took the data using secondary sources from the previous
studies of three undergraduate theses and two scientific articles about the use of
until 2022. Zeid (2004) states the researcher uses library research to collect the
data from secondary sources such as thesis, journals and articles to analyze a
topic.
of the data, these documents are undergraduate theses and scientific articles
related to the research topic. Marshall and Gretchen (1994:97) explain “qualitative
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analyzing documents”.
In collecting the data, the researcher only used analyzing documents. The
researcher collected data from documents related to the research topic. These
documents were obtained from the library and internet, then documents were
To analyze the data, the researcher used the content analysis method.
Haggarty (1996) defines content analysis is a research method that allows the
collection of both qualitative and quantitative data in one study, then analyzed
to the category. The data was presented in descriptive way. According to Luo
collects data from a set of texts, which can be written, spoken, or visual. The
1. Reading and identifying the data sources to find the information needed.
To answer the provided research questions, the data was described. The
4.1 Findings
findings related to the research topic between 2013 until 2022. In collecting the
data, the researcher used secondary data that obtained from academic writing,
researchers. The researcher found out that there are 19 studies which had been
Based on the data source, the researcher focused on reviewing five studies
Recount Text of The Eighth Grade Students of Junior High School Barata
Recount Text; Sholihah, Sutapa and Susilawati (2018) The Use of Clustering
Grade Students at SMPN 12 Palu; and Juanda, Amri, and Syafrizal (2022).
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topic, the data reviewed in this research were organized into their classifications
based on technique of the data analysis which included researcher names, title,
method, years, settings, procedures and results. The researcher provided findings
in table 4.1.
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Findings
No. Researcher Title Method Year Setting
Procedure(s) Result
1. Atik The Effectiveness Quasi- 2014 Junior This study was conducted in four The use of
Samsiati of Using Experimental High activities: giving pre test, first clustering
Clustering Research School treatment, second treatment, and post technique in
Teaching Design Barata test to each group and the research teaching writing at
Technique to Semagung was conducted in four meetings for the eighth grade
both experimental and control group. students is
Improve Writing The researcher adapted procedures of effective and can
Skill of Recount clustering technique from Buscemi help to motivate
Text of The (2002) A Reader for Developing the students to
Eighth Grade Writer. Such as : write English. It
Students of Junior can be seen that
High School 1. Begin with a blank sheet of paper; the mean score of
Barata Semagung 2. In the center, write and circle the experimental
In The Academic word that expresses the broad group was
Year 2013/2014 subject which one to write about; higher than the
3. Think of ideas and details related mean score of
to this subject; control group. It
4. Organize the ideas before it showed that Sig.
develop in sentence or paragraph. (2-tailed) is lower
than 0.05
In implementing procedures of (0.015<0.05).
clustering technique, the researcher
allowed the students free to express
their ideas to write words they like to
be used as the main topic and related
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In implementing procedures of
clustering technique, the researcher
modified procedures from Rico and
added one creative procedure to
coloring ideas or words which seem
connected. The researcher also used
the same way as the statements from
Rico by letting the students free to
express the ideas that are in their
minds without worrying. By letting
the students to write without
worrying, the setudents can be more
enthusiastic in expressing their ideas
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5. Rian Teaching Writing Pre- 2022 MA DDI In this research the researcher only Teaching writing
Juanda, Recount Text Experimental Pulau taught four times a week for recount text
Samsul Through Research Kijang. experiment class. The researcher through clustering
Amri, and Clustering Design adapted and modified procedures of technique
clustering technique based on is effective. It was
Syafrizal Technique at 10th
procedures from Rico (1983) Writing proved through the
Grade of MA
the Natural Way. Such as: result of the t-test,
DDI Pulau There is a
Kijang. 1. Choosing a topic the first step is significant
to choose a general topic difference in the
2. Generating subtopics once you achievement after
have your topic the students are
3. Generating details now it’s time using clustering
to go back to the subtopics you technique. The t-
just wrote down and take a look at test showed that t-
them observe 4,19 was
4. Doing it backwards there is higher than t-table
another way 2,074 (5%) and
5. Wrap-up at this point 2,819 (1%). By
using clustering
In implementing procedures of technique in
clustering technique, the researcher teaching writing
adapted and did some modifications recount text,
in the procedures to make it easy to students problems
understand. The researcher can be solved
implemented procedures in the same after.
way from Rico by letting the students
free to express their ideas to give the
students opportunity to try and
express their ideas.
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4.2 Discussion
teaching writing recount text. The researcher used secondary data to review
recount text. From the five studies related to the research topic showed in table
4.1, the researcher found out that all of them adapted and modified procedures of
clustering technique in teaching writing recount text. The researcher had divided
The first study was conducted by Samsiati (2014). The purpose of her
study was to find out whether teaching writing using clustering technique is
connection between the main topic and related words. The differences of their
procedure are Buscemi provided the procedures in four stages and added one
their ideas write words they like to be used as the main topic and related words in
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implemented the clustering technique to made it easier for the students to write.
Supported by Manurung (2015), that the EFL learners are motivated to learn
speaking skills when the topics are related to the interest of the learners. In her
study, the researcher guided the students to play a more active role in the teaching
and learning process so that students can understand what they have written. After
analyzing the procedures, it is also found out that the findings showed the
where the mean score of experimental group is higher than mean score of control
group (69.20>62.71).
classroom action research and aimed to find out the improvement of the students'
more concise and clear for easy understanding. Meade’s procedures focused in
making students free to add their ideas related to the main topic or other words,
also added a procedures about to write a piece without worrying about perfection.
technique by letting the students think and write ideas as many as possible in
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implementing it. Due to that, the students can freely express their ideas in their
writing as many as they can. Clustering technique is one of the techniques that
helped students easier in getting the ideas as many as possible. Line with Pica
(1986), clustering technique is very helpful to unleash ideas, images, and feelings
related to the main topic in writing. The students can write without hesitation by
allowing them to express their ideas in their writing. Based on the comparison
text. It is proven by the result, there is better improvement of students’ mean score
Susilawati (2018). Their study was to find out whether or not the use of clustering
effective is the use of clustering technique in teaching writing recount text. They
procedures in three stages, however her procedures of clustering are still focused
groups, pairs and individuals to provide different experiences each meetings in the
the topic which can make students interested in writing activity. Related to
Smalley, Ruetten and Kozyrev (2000) by using clustering technique, the students
research findings, it is also found out that the use of clustering technique gave the
positive contribution toward the students’ ability in writing recount text and in
their learning. It is indicated by the different scores that are gotten by the students
The fourth study was conducted by Mad-Adam (2020). The objective of her
writing skill in recount text of the eighth grade students. She adapted and
Natural Way. In her procedures, the researcher described more detail about the
procedures adapted in her teaching and learning process by making it into eight
stages and also added one stages in her procedures of clustering technique about
coloring words or ideas that have a relationship with the same color to make it
look more creative and fun. Supported to Sugiarti (2012), by making the
clustering technique fun, students are more motivated in learning writing. Due to
the findings, it is also found out that the students had understood about how to
researcher, it is found out that the researcher provided more detailed procedures of
clustering technique to the students so that students better understand the ideas or
words they have written and adds a creative procedure to guide the students on
marking or coloring their ideas which seem connected. The researcher focused on
making students good and creative in using the clustering technique by making
the procedures in more detailed and giving a creative stage to make clustering
The fifth study was conducted by Juanda, Amri and Syafrizal (2022).
Their study analysed teaching writing recount text through clustering technique.
Writing the Natural Way. The researcher procedures have little differences with
sentences, their procedures of clustering technique still has the same goal.
Based on the procedures and findings, it was found out that the researcher
adapted the same procedures created by Rico, the differences of their procedures
are the researcher explained it into five procedures and changed the words in each
procedures for more understanding. It also found out that there is a significant
difference in the achievement between students before they are using the
clustering technique and after they are using it, it is proved through the result of
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the t-test in her study. As Sides (1995) Stated, the clustering technique is useful
in their studies, all of the procedures are still focused on the main topic and related
words or phrases to the main topic. Also the result of their studies remain
consistent. Their studies showed that using clustering technique to teach writing
recount text is successful and effective in improving students writing recount text.
clustering technique, it does not really have impact on teaching writing recount
5.1 Conclusion
Based on the five studies had been reviewed, the researcher concluded
technique from different experts. First, Samsiati (2014) adapted procedures from
Buscemi and allowed the students free to express their ideas to write words they
like to be used as the main topic and related words. Second, Puspitasari (2016)
adapted procedures from Meade and let the students think and write ideas as many
Susilawati (2018) familiarized students to work from groups until individuals and
detailed procedures and added a creative procedure on coloring their ideas which
seem connected, she adapted and modified procedures based on Rico. Fifth,
Juanda, Amri, and Syafrizal (2022) explained procedures into five procedures and
changed the words in each procedures for more understanding, they adapted and
2013 until 2022, this technique is effective, succesfull and has strong positive
effect to use in teaching writing recount text. First, by using clustering technique,
it can help to motivate the students in write English. Second, most of the students
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clustering technique makes the students more creative in producing ideas. Fourth,
it is found out that the students have understood about how to write a recount text.
Fifth, students problems can be solved after the use of clustering technique. Based
on the data had been obtained and reviewed on findings, those five studies were
technique are still focused on grouping of words and prhases which are still
connected to the main topic by using lines or arrows and boxes or circle. The
results of those five studies remain consistent, five studies showed that using
clustering technique to teach writing recount text is effective. It was proved by the
5.2 Suggestion
Due to the conclusion, the researcher would like to suggest about the use
of clustering technique in teaching writing recount text to the teachers and next
researchers. First, in order to involve the students in the teaching and learning
process, the teacher should be more creative when choosing topics for the main
topic of the clustering technique so the students will be enthusiastic and motivated
to start their writing. Second, if the teachers want the students to write an essay
writing which has long paragraph by using clustering technique, the teacher
should guide them more after they are implementing clustering technique and
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