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After getting essay question:


Steps need to follow
1. Question analysis
2. Planning
3. Introduction
4. Body Paragraphs-BP1,BP2
5. Conclusion
6. Check for mistakes

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Agree Disagree Essay

Steps
• Question analysis
- Read minimum 5 times and understand it in Bangla
(each and every word)
- essay specific topic
- instruction
- identify essay type
• Planning
➢ Idea Generation
o Imagine your friend asks you this question
o What will be your opinion – agree/ disagree

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o Now your friend asks you – why do you agree /


disagree? What’s the reasons?
o Now your answer is:
1st reason : ……why do you agree/disagree?
How does it happens?
What’s the effect of this?

2nd reason : ……why do you agree/disagree?


How does it happens?
What’s the effect of this?

Example: …tell your friend from your


experience – how true your reasons

Your logic why other people think opposite


view – what are the reasons? How it happens?
Example:
Also mention – your opinion firmly to support
your view.

• Put your ideas into structure


o Your agree/disagree reasons with explanation in BP1

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o Your opposite view agree/disagree reasons with


explanation in BP2
• Writing an Effective Introduction
- Paraphrase the topic
- Clearly mention your opinion
- Outline
• Writing Supporting Paragraphs
- From planning- BP1, BP2
• Writing a Conclusion
- Again paraphrase essay topic
- give your opinion with reasons in one line.

Agree Disagree Essay Structure


Introduction:
S1: General sentence on essay topic (always true
)**optional
S2: Paraphrase the topic + opinion
S3: Outline
BP1: reasons of strongly agree/ disagree
S1: topic sentence
S2: 1st reason
S3: supporting details
S4: Another reason

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S5: supporting details


S6: example for two reasons
BP2: reasons of others view (your opposite) .
S1: topic sentence
S2: 1st reason
S3: supporting details with example
S4: mention your position strongly with reason for opposing
Conclusion:
S1: paraphrase essay topic again
S2: restate your opinion with two main reasons that you
mentioned in BP1
S3: Closing sentences ( recommendation
sentence**optional)

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Agree Disagree Essay


Introduction
Sentence 1:
One of the most pressing issues in modern society is …[essay
topic]……….
Sentence 2: While some argue that __________ [viewpoint
which you disagree], I firmly believe that __________ [viewpoint
which you agree].
Sentence 3: This essay will examine both sides of the argument
and provide an overall opinion.

Body Paragraph 1------- supporting reasons for your viewpoint


which you agree/disagree
Sentence 1: To commence/begin with, there are several reasons
why people believe that…… [your viewpoint – agree/disagree]
Sentence 2: Perhaps the main reason is ……………………… [first
reason]
Sentence 3: This is because………...[how/why]
Sentence 4: Furthermore, ………. [ another reason]
Sentence 5: If …………….. then………………….. [how/why]
Sentence 6: For example, research has shown
that………….[support both reasons]

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Body Paragraph 2-------------- supporting reasons for viewpoint


which you disagree
Sentence 1: On the other hand, other group of people think that
__________ [viewpoint that you
disagree]_______because______[reason]
Sentence 2: They believe that __________ [explain the view-
why/how].
Sentence 4: A good illustration of this is that / For
instance………….[example]
Sentence 5: However, my position remains firm in supporting the
idea that __________ [restated main idea with cause of
eliminate this idea] because ………..[reason]

Conclusion:
Sentence 1: In conclusion, although _______ [state the opposing
view], I remain convinced that ____________ [restate your
opinion].
Sentence 2: If ________, __________. [recommendation
sentence. Use conditional sentence]. ----optional

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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the
following topic:
Some people say that it is better to work for a large company
than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples
from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Question analysis:

Some people say that it is better to work for a large company


than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Planning:

Opinion: work for large company

Reason for agree

Reason 1,2: career growth & facilities

How:
- have various departments, hierarchical structure – allow
to reach higher post

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- better benefits- health insurance, Gratuity, PF, HI,


external training programs
- Unilever – offer more extensive training program

Why people think small company better

- Small company – friendly and personalized work


environment
Why – small team, have direct impact on decision making,
feel valued
Example: research – small companies offer collaborative
work culture

Introduction:

Sentence 1: One of the most pressing issues in modern


society is the choice between working for a large company or a
small one.

Sentence 2: While some argue that working for a small company


offers unique advantages, I firmly believe that being employed by
a large company is a better option.

Sentence 3: This essay will examine both sides of the


argument and provide an overall opinion.

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Body Paragraph 1:
Sentence 1: To commence/begin with, there are several
reasons why people believe that working for a large company is
preferable.
Sentence 2: Perhaps the main reason is the fact of career
growth and the facilities they offer because, in larger
organizations, employees often have more opportunities for
promotion and professional development.
Sentence 3: This is because these companies usually have
various departments and a hierarchical structure that allows
employees to climb the corporate ladder.
Sentence 4: Furthermore, large companies tend to offer better
benefits such as health insurance, retirement plans, and employee
training programs.
Sentence 5: If an individual is looking for stability and long-term
career prospects, a large company provides a favorable
environment.
Sentence 6: For example, research has shown that employees in
Unilever Bangladesh company are more likely to receive extensive
training , promotions and benefits.
Body Paragraph 2
Sentence 1: On the other hand, some argue that small
companies foster a friendly and personalized working environment.

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Sentence 2: They believe that, in smaller settings, employees can


have a direct impact on decision-making processes and feel more
valued.
Sentence 3: For instance, research data indicates that most
small companies often have a collaborative work culture where
everyone's opinion is heard, and decisions are made collectively.
Sentence 4: However, my position remains firm in supporting
the idea that working for a large company is more beneficial
because of the extensive career opportunities it provides.

Conclusion
Sentence 1: In conclusion, although the sense of
companionship in small companies is valuable, I remain
convinced that the potential for growth in career in large
companies outweighs the advantages of working for a small one.
Sentence 2: If individuals prioritize long-term career success and
development, choosing to work for a large company is highly
recommended.

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Full essay:
One of the most pressing issues in modern society is the
choice between working for a large company or a small one. While
some argue that working for a small company offers unique
advantages, I firmly believe that being employed by a large
company is a better option. This essay will examine both sides
of the argument and provide an overall opinion.

To commence with, there are several reasons why people


believe that working for a large company is preferable. Perhaps
the main reason is the fact of career growth and the facilities they
offer because, in larger organizations, employees often have more
opportunities for promotion and professional development. This is
because these companies usually have various departments and
a hierarchical structure that allows employees to climb the
corporate ladder. Furthermore, large companies tend to offer
better benefits such as health insurance, retirement plans, and
employee training programs. If an individual is looking for stability
and long-term career prospects, a large company provides a
favorable environment. For example, research has shown that
employees in Unilever Bangladesh company are more likely to
receive extensive training and promotions.

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On the other hand, some argue that small companies foster a


friendly and personalized working environment. They believe that,
in smaller settings, employees can have a direct impact on
decision-making processes and feel more valued. For instance,
research data indicates that most small companies often have a
collaborative work culture where everyone's opinion is heard, and
decisions are made collectively. However, my position remains
firm in supporting the idea that working for a large company is more
beneficial because of the extensive career opportunities it provides.

In conclusion, although the sense of companionship in small


companies is valuable, I remain convinced that the potential for
growth in career in large companies outweighs the advantages of
working for a small one. If individuals prioritize long-term career
success and development, choosing to work for a large company
is highly recommended.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.


Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Planning:
Opinion: big salary more important
Why : financial stability
- Comfortable lifestyle , fulfill desires, secure future
- Motivation, encourage to put their best effort

Why : job satisfaction

- Enjoy work –contribute well being


- less stress and burnout

Essay :

One of the most pressing issues in modern society is whether a big


salary is more important than job satisfaction. While some argue
that a satisfying and fulfilling job holds greater, I firmly believe that
significance a hefty paycheck is the paramount consideration in a
career. This essay will examine both sides of the argument and
provide an overall opinion.

To commence with, there are several reasons why people believe


that a substantial salary is the key factor in a job. Perhaps the main
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reason is the financial stability it offers. A high income can provide


individuals with a comfortable lifestyle, enabling them to fulfill their
material desires and secure their future. Furthermore, a generous
salary often serves as motivation, encouraging individuals to put in
their best effort at work. For example, research has shown that
employees who are well-compensated tend to be more productive
and committed to their jobs.

On the other hand, another group of people thinks that job


satisfaction is of chief importance. They argue that enjoying one's
work contributes significantly to overall well-being. A good
illustration of this is that individuals who find their jobs fulfilling are
less likely to experience stress and burnout. However, my position
remains firm in supporting the idea that a handsome salary is
crucial because content and motivated employees, who earn as
per their qualifications and needs, are more likely to bring
innovation and creativity to their workplace.

In conclusion, although job satisfaction is important, I remain


convinced that financial considerations are the cornerstone of a
fulfilling career. If individuals derive joy and fulfillment from their
work, they are likely to excel and contribute positively to their
organizations. Therefore, companies should strive to create
environments that prioritize both financial rewards and job
satisfaction to foster a balanced and thriving workforce.
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Homework:

1. Famous sportsmen often earn a lot more money than people in other
professions. Although sport is important in our lives, everyone should be
equal and such big incomes of sport professionals are unjustified. Do you
agree or disagree?

2. Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to


choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do
you agree with this view? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

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