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SUBJECT: ENGLISH - II (Local) Correction Revised by Riaz Ahmed sb, Nasir Mehmood sb, dated: 05-06-22 at 4:45 pm
Application writing
Writing any three aspects of the Writing any two aspects Writing any one aspect of
(Subject, Salutation, Yours Writing all the four aspects of format Wrong
given parameters of the format of the given parameters the given parameters of
obediently etc. & XYZ etc. correctly (2) attempt (0)
correctly (1.5) of the format correctly (1) the format correctly (0.5)
and Date)
Inside address Correctly written inside address (1) Wrong response (0)
5
Application writing (main
Correctly composed body of application i.e.
body)
containing proper opening, main body and Good attempt i.e. Fair attempt i.e. covering Wrong
Note: Marks of the format Very good attempt i.e. covering Nominal
conclusion/closing with excellent display of covering some of the a few of the parameters attempt(0)
shall only be awarded if the most of the parameters (4) attempt (1)
the content, organization and grammatical parameters (3) (2)
body of Application is
structure/expression on the given topic (5)
written relevantly.
The attempt which displays the most
appropriate/correct usage of transitional A good attempt i.e. Fair attempt i.e. covering
An attempt which meets the given An attempt
devices connecting the ideas logically in the covering most of the some parameters of
Paragraph writing using parameters to the most covering a few Nominal Wrong
composed paragraph with the most correct parameters (using language, contents and
6 appropriate/correct appropriate level (using four/five of the attempt answer
language/expression from a grammatical two/three different use of the transitional
transitional devices different transitional devices ) parameters (1) (0)
and lexical perspective (using at least six transitional devices ) devices
(5) (2)
different transitional devices) (4) (3)
(6)
Essay Writing
Content, Structure and
Organization
(Ideas development Fair attempt
Very good attempt i.e. Good attempt i.e.
through facts, examples, i.e. covering a
An exceptional attempt which meets the An attempt exhibiting excellent covering most of the covering some of the Nominal Wrong
details, opinions, reasons few aspects of
7 given criteria to the best possible extent display of the given parameters aspects of the given aspects of the given attempt answer
etc. with logical the given
(6) (5) criteria criteria (1) (0)
development and criteria
(4) (3)
coherence among the (2)
sentences and paragraphs)
Length: 200-250 words
Q.# Level 5 Level 7
Criteria Level 1 (Marks) Level 2 (Marks) Level 3 (Marks) Level 4 (Marks) Level 6 (Marks)
/Part # (Marks) (Marks)
Essay Writing
Lexical Aspects and
Expression Good attempt covering Poor attempt i.e. nominal
An excellent attempt displaying best use of Very good attempt covering most Irrelevant/
(Grammar, mechanics, some of the aspects of display of the given
the aspects of the given criteria of the aspects of the given criteria incorrect
spelling etc. and use of the given criteria criteria
(4) (3) attempt (0)
appropriate phrases and (2) (1)
idiomatic expressions)