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The line graph compares seven regions in term of income by top 1% populations
of each from 1975 to 2010.
It is clear that the proportion of income of the top 1% in the US, the UK, Canada
and Germany fluctuated noticeably, while the figures for three other countries
remained essentially unchanged.
Secondly, In terms of less significant changes over the course, Japan, France
and Italy has similar changes until 2005 before Japan and Italy were slightly
decreased and were relative similar over 9%, whereas France fell to around 8% in
2010. In terms of less significant changes over the course, Japan, France
and Italy had similar variations until 2005. From this year onwards, while Japan
and Italy saw slight changes and finished at about 9%, France witnessed a greater
fall, to well below 9%.
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From this year onwards, the data sets of Japan and Italy changed slighly and
finished at about 9%, France’s data fell greatly, to well below 9%.