Galnayon Ma. Alyza Kae M.

10-STE
Critique Paper
Still, I Rise
By Maya Angelou

The poem “Still I Rise” was written by Maya Angelou, who was a writer and an
activist empowering women and black people. It is a powerful poem renowned for
its message of overcoming oppression. It has inspired and empowered many people
to be resilient and triumphant amidst the many trials in life.

The poem’s undeniable strength lies in its powerful message. The author faces
the degrading impacts of oppression and declares her unwavering spirit and
strength. Lines like "You may write me down in history with your bitter, twisted lies,
You may tread me in the very dirt But still, like dust, I'll rise" are testaments to an
unyielding spirit. The power is further amplified by the poem's structure. The short,
declarative stanzas and the persistent repetition of "I rise" create a rhythm that feels
almost like a chant, urging the reader to join the chorus of resistance.

Angelou's use of vivid imagery adds another layer of depth. She uses simile by
comparing herself to natural forces – the sun, the moon, and dust – that rise
inevitably, highlighting the inherent and unstoppable nature of her strength. Dirt in
the first stanza and Black Ocean in the eighth stanza refers to black people. And in
the second stanza, the word sassiness and sexiness describes feminine.

The poem uplifts black individuals and women by instilling confidence in them
and affirming their resilience against discrimination and prejudice. The persona
depicted in the poem is a black woman, recounting her experiences of oppression
and hatred. She faces numerous hurtful words and discrimination in society because
of her gender and race. Despite these challenges, she remains determined to rise
above and gain more confidence, defying discrimination, prejudice, and patriarchal
norms.

In the final stanza, the line "I am the dream and the hope of the slave" offers
hope to those people who are suffering insurmountable hardships that they think
they’re not going to surpass. The author aims to convey that regardless of the
circumstances, even in moments of despair, one can endure and emerge stronger.

The poem serves to empower black women and people, showcasing their
unwavering resilience. You may look them down but they will still rise. They will still
find the courage and confidence to confront discrimination, prejudice, and
patriarchy. Ultimately, the struggles, criticisms, and negative comments from others
contribute to their growth, pride, and resilience. Regardless of what others may say,
they will persevere and rise above.