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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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Comment 1
I would suggest using anywhere from 2-3 quotes to more clearly convey some of the ideas you hint
at. For example, perhaps you could give a direct quotation (or at least paraphrase) of the authors'
thesis statement/purpose as stated by the authors themselves.

Comment 2
Remember the question being asked by the prompt is

How the source fits into your research/how you will use it in your research?

So I'd ask, "for what larger purpose does knowing this help you?"

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Comment 3
What's their thesis statement?

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