Katelyn –

The subject of your research is clear from the intro. You identify the problem you are addressing
as well as the framework you are using to do so. The information in the Literature Review adds a lot of
contexts and is very easy to understand why you chose some of your secondary sources. You spread out
portions of the Literature Review throughout your paper. The Research Design and Methods portion is
one of the parts your essay excels in. You make it really clear how to replicate your process and it’s very
easy to follow. You do a good job of explaining why your research is relevant/what results come out of it.
MLA format is followed. There are in text citations. I think you did a great job on your proposal. Good
work!

Matthew –

Your intro makes the subject of your research clear. You identify the problem you are addressing
but I didn’t catch the framework. Theres a lot of context in the Literature Review and its clear why you
chose some of your sources. Your Literature Review is well spread out throughout the paper. The
Research and Design section is very clear and it makes sense why you chose the sources you do. Your
paper excels in explaining why the research is relevant and what comes out of it. MLA format is followed.
There aren’t any in text citations. You did a great job. Good Work.

Ismael –

The subject of your research is very clear. You identify the problem you are addressing and the methods
very early on. Literature Review is very well done and adds a lot of context to why you chose your
sources. Research design is very straight forward and easy to follow along. You do a good job of
explaining why your research is relevant in the real world going forward and other applications of it. MLA
format is followed. There are in text citations. You did a great job. Good work keep it up.