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The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3 years.

ORIGINAL:
The provided bar chart illustrates five countries in terms of the percentages
of films made in three years, from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, three countries, country B, country D, and country E witnessed an
increase in the percentage of films produced while the reverse pattern was true
for country A and country C.
From 2007 to 2009, the figures showed the percentages of films produced
in countries D and E all rose slightly, but it rose remarkably in countries B. To
be more specific, country B saw a significant rise from about 34% in 2007 to
50% in 2009.
By comparison, there was a slight decrease in the percentage of films
produced in countries A and C. In 2007, the percentages in country A were the
highest in five countries, but it fell steadily from 80% to approximately 75% in
2009. Finally, in country C, the figures stayed unsteady. The percentages
increased slightly about 3% from 2007 to 2008 before decreasing to just under
20% in 2009.

EDITED:
The provided bar chart illustrates five countries in terms of the
PROPORTION percentages of films MADE BY FIVE DISTINCT NATIONS
made in three CONSECUTIVE years, from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, three countries, country B, country D, and country E COUNTRIES
B, D AND E witnessed an increase in the percentage of films produced while
the reverse pattern was true for ALL OTHER SURVEYED COUNTRIES.
FURTHERMORE, COUNTRY A CONSISTENTLY HELD THE LARGEST
SHARE IN THIS REGARD. country A and country C.
From 2007 to 2009, the figures showed the percentages THE
PERCENTAGE of films produced in countries D and E all rose slightly BY
ABOUT 2% ANNUALLY TO REACH APPROXIMATELY 14% AND 7%,
RESPECTIVELY. MEANWHILE, but it rose remarkably in countries B. To be
more specific, country B saw a MORE significant rise IN THIS RESPECT,
EXPANDING ITS SHARE OF FILM PRODUCTION from A THIRD TO
HALF OF ALL MOVIES STUDIED BY THE END OF THE ABOVE
TIMEFRAME about 34% in 2007 to 50% in 2009.
By comparison ON THE CONTRARY, there was a slight DIP decrease in
the percentage of films produced in countries A and C. SPECIFICALLY, THE
FORMER’S FIGURE HAD A STEADY DECLINE OF 5% BETWEEN 2007
AND 2009, TERMINATING THE PERIOD WITH ROUGHLY 75% THE
FILMS PRODUCED BY THEM. IN THE CASE OF COUNTRY C, WHOSE
FIGURE WAS ONLY A QUARTER COMPARED TO THAT OF COUNTRY
A, THE PERCENTAGE OF FILMS MADE BY THEM UNDERWENT A
DOWNWARD FLUCTUATION. In 2007, the percentages in country A were
the highest in five countries, but it fell steadily from 80% to approximately 75%
in 2009. Finally, in country C, the figures stayed unsteady. The percentages
increased slightly about 3% from 2007 to 2008 before decreasing to just under
20% in 2009.

FINAL
The provided bar chart illustrates the PROPORTION of films MADE BY
FIVE DISTINCT NATIONS in three CONSECUTIVE years, from 2007 to
2009.
Overall, COUNTRIES B, D AND E witnessed an increase in the
percentage of films produced while the reverse pattern was true for ALL
OTHER SURVEYED COUNTRIES. FURTHERMORE, COUNTRY A
CONSISTENTLY HELD THE LARGEST SHARE IN THIS REGARD.
From 2007 to 2009, THE PERCENTAGE of films produced in countries
D and E all rose slightly BY ABOUT 2% ANNUALLY TO REACH
APPROXIMATELY 14% AND 7%, RESPECTIVELY. MEANWHILE,
country B saw a MORE significant rise IN THIS RESPECT, EXPANDING
ITS SHARE OF FILM PRODUCTION from A THIRD TO HALF OF
ALL MOVIES STUDIED BY THE END OF THE ABOVE TIMEFRAME.
ON THE CONTRARY, there was a slight DIP in the percentage of
films produced in countries A and C. SPECIFICALLY, THE FORMER’S
FIGURE HAD A STEADY DECLINE OF 5% BETWEEN 2007 AND
2009, TERMINATING THE PERIOD WITH ROUGHLY 75% THE
FILMS PRODUCED BY THEM. IN THE CASE OF COUNTRY C,
WHOSE FIGURE WAS ONLY A QUARTER COMPARED TO THAT
OF COUNTRY A, THE PERCENTAGE OF FILMS MADE BY THEM
UNDERWENT A DOWNWARD FLUCTUATION.

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