Kelompok 4

Anggota :

01 Dwi Dian Sari N. Hia

02 Tik Tanika Marunduri

03 Gabriel Jimmy Ricardo

C.B 04 Piki Darinding
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01 02 03
Penyempitan dan Penggalian Topic Sentece. Hasil Brainstorming untuk
Topik. Mendukung Topic Sentece.

Menyusun Kerangka. Paragraph utuh.

 Damages caused by video
games to children 6-12 years
old
Penyempitan dan
Pengglian Topik
Sub Topik:
• Addicted to playing online games.
• Hobby.
• Entertainment.
• Sharpen the brain.
Hasil Brainstorming :
Narrow Topic : Addicted to playing online
games..
 Often angry.
 Frequent profanity Children have difficulty
 Often against parents controlling their emotions
 Stubbornness.
 Topic
Sentence
Addiction to online gaming makes it difficult for children to
control their emotions.
 Membuat Draft
• Children who are addicted to gaming are more irritable.
.
Detailnya : ex, getting angry if interruptes while playing a game.

• Children who are addicted to playing games like to say dirty words.

Detailnya : ex, due to losing games, children often say dirty words.

• Children who play games are more likely to fight their parents and stubbornness.

Detailnya : ex, the child argues when parents tell them to help with homework.
 Paragraph
Addiction to online gaming makes it difficult for children to control
their emotions. First, children who are addicted to playing games are more
irritable. For example, when disturbed while playing online games, he will
get angry because online games cannot be used. Another result is that
children can get used to using dirty words. For example, when losing while
playing a game a child may say dirty words to vent his frustration. Finally,
playing online games too often can also affect a child's character to
become stubborn so that they like to argue with their parents. For example,
a child who is addicted to playing games is told by his parents to do
homework then the child will definitely argue with his parents and prefer to
play games.
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