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What is the Main Idea of this paragraph?

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What 3 details are used to support the main idea?

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2/Ye^) No Does the sentence after the topic sentence relate to the first detail listed in the topic sentence?
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Is there a conclusion sentence? Is the paragraph 5-8 sentences?

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Name at least 3 strong parts of this paragraph:

Name at least 3 weak parts of this paragraph:

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If the author changed only 1 thing, what should it be?

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If this paragraph was turned in now, how many points out of 25 would you expert it to get?

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