GCSE

Fortismere Photography Department

GCSE Photography Assessment Sheet

STUDENT: TEA!"E#$S%: T)T,E: Erin Gostick &r "o'(en co*rse+ork DATE: UN)T: 06/01/1 co*rse+ork

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Development Continue with the idea of stopping people in the street I think you maybe need more of a focus though maybe have a specific question to ask them and maybe they could write their response. Look at the work of Gillian Wearing. ovement More development of light painting needed different locations at night. This will help develop your final outcome. Landscape Should read environment strand followed by Joiners followed by your final my London responses please put in order. Close up abstraction Move images from around school up to the start of the project as this was the first work that you undertook. Look more in-depth at type and how it has been used in rt! photography. Maybe shoot some more with this in mind to develop the final piece idea further.