Incorporating Feedback

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Associate Program Material
Incorporating Feedback
This week, you may choose from three different assignment options. Each option requires you to
address incorporating feedback into your expository essay. Seect !ption 1, !ption ", or !ption #
to compete your assignment.
Option 1: Strategies for Incorporating Feedback
$e%iew the feedback you recei%ed from your instructor, your peer re%iewer, and the
&enter for 'riting Exceence.
(ddress the foowing questions in #)) to *)) words+
o 'hat feedback did you recei%e from your instructor,
o 'hat feedback did you recei%e from the peer re%iewer,
o 'hat feedback did you recei%e from the &enter for 'riting Exceence,
o -ow did you determine whether or not to incude the feedback in your paper,
o -ow wi you incorporate the feedback into your paper,
o -ow does this feedback impro%e your expository essay,
Expain your answers with specific exampes from the feedback.
Option 2: Reising and !diting Strategies
-ighight portions of your essay in the foowing manner+
o .eow for the introduction
o /od back for the thesis statement
o Turquoise for supporting e%idence
o 0reen for transitions
o 1ink for anaysis
o 0ray for the concusion
$e%iew the feedback you recei%ed from your instructor, your peer re%iewer, and the
&enter for 'riting Exceence.
Expain which portions of your essay you wi re%ise and pro%ide a rationae for making
those changes.
1ro%ide specific exampes from the feedback to support your answers.
Option ": Reising and !diting Steps in t#e $riting %rocess
(ddress the foowing in #)) to *)) words+
Expain the steps a writer must foow to re%ise and edit an expository essay prior to
submission.
Incorporating Feedback
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Summari2e the feedback you recei%ed from your instructor, your peer re%iewer, and the
&enter for 'riting Exceence.
Identify which parts of your expository require re%ision and editing, for exampe, whether
important information is missing or whether information needs to be mo%ed to another
position in the essay.
Expain how you wi incorporate feedback into your essay and pro%ide a rationae for
your decisions.
1ro%ide specific exampes from the feedback to support your answers.