Final Portfolio Peer Workshop

Criteria for this workshop:

Read the reviewer memo from the writer first.

Write a 100 word (minimum) note detailing the strengths of each page and areas where it
could benefit from improvement. Each note should specifically address the additional
content on the page, meaning the introduction to the page and the description for each
item. You may also include comments about the layout and arrangement of items;
however, this should not be your main focus.
Complete the rubric below.

2 peer workshops must be submitted by Wednesday, April 22 at 9:30 AM in order to receive

full credit for the workshop. No late workshops will be accepted.
Category

Genre Analysis
(20 points)

Micro-Ethnography
(20 points)

Midterm Reflection
(5 points)
Final Reflection
(15 points)
Overall
Daily
Constructi
Assignmen
on
ts
(10 points)
(5 points)
Portfolio
(5 points)

Scoring Criteria
Genre Proposal
2 peer workshops
Draft 2
Olivia's comments (either comments or summary)
Revision Workshop
Final Draft (see rubric)
Field Notes & Interview Questions
Swales Chart
Outline
2 peer workshops
Draft 2
Olivia's comments (either comments or summary)
Final Draft (see rubric)
PowerPoint Presentation
Final Draft (see rubric)
2 peer workshops
Final Draft (see rubric)
Letter to Olivia
5 Daybook Entries
2 In-Class Assignments
5 Discussion Forum Posts
5 Discussion Forum Replies
2 peer workshops
A short introduction is included for each page,
which includes a detailed description of the items
presented.
The portfolio meets the needs of the intended

Total
Point
s
1
2
1
1
1
14
1
1
1
2
1
1
11
2
5
1.5
13.5
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1

Scor
e
1
2
1
1
1
1
2
1
1
2
5

1
1
1

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audience.
The portfolio contains a strong personal
introduction that frames the rest of the portfolio.
The writer demonstrates a firm grasp of the
conventions of written English (spelling,
capitalization, punctuation etc.). There are no
typos.
Total Points

1
1
1
70

To start off with my revisions on your portfolio add the word about to your second sentence in
the info section. Overall the portfolio is very well written so far and very colorful. I can tell that
you put your personality into the portfolio and a lot of time so far. I think the only thing that
needs to be worked on is filling in your portfolio; it is just missing a few items that are necessary
for the completion of the portfolio. All of your descriptions of the work are well thought out and
I do not see anything that requires revision. I only filled in the items that were on the portfolio
because it is unfair to grade something that is unfinished.