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Personal Narrative Revision Checklist: Do I Have (A) .? Color Lead Paragraphing
Personal Narrative Revision Checklist: Do I Have (A) .? Color Lead Paragraphing
RevisionChecklist
DoIhave(a).?
Description
Color
Lead
action,dialogue,thought,
orfeeling
Paragraphing
tointroduceanew
subtopic,toshowdifferent
speaker,toshowthattime
hasmovedforward
HeartStretchedOut
thereasonwhyyouwrote
thestory(thefeelings)
DescriptiveWords
(adjectives)
Useyoursensesto
helpyou!
a
cold
and
stormy
night,a
hot
and
humid
afternoon,
a
welllit
room,
exploding
flavorsofblueberries,the
peaceful
soundoftemple
bellsringing,asmilethat
stretchedfromeartoear
Action,Thoughts,
Dialogue,Feelings
AbalanceofA,T,D,F
throughoutmystory
TransitionWords
first,second,third,next,
also,later,then(justthen),
finally,last,soon,after(a
littlewhile),afterawhile,
thenextday,atlast,now,
suddenly,thatnight
Ending
action,dialogue,thought,
feeling,wholestory
reminder,image