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Three Step Response to Aaron Thomas

FROM AHMANE CURRY-MUIR

1. Velcro Words and Phrases


important tools
trace this weakness
It wasnt unique
It wasnt unique

2. Feelings
The essay feels like youre saying your writing was limited and capped because of the writing
structures that were given too you.

3. Questions
How would you have preferred to write?
Peeked interest should be pique interest
You should indent the paragraph

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