Outline of Comparison Essay

Topic: Korean high school students and university students have many differences and
those different things make them want each others life.
1. Introduction (Paragraph 1)
A. Hook: Show between high school students and university students difference in
thinking each others school life style.
B. Connecting Information: They want mutual life style ironically. The reason is that
there are several different things or cultures between Korean high school and university.
C. Thesis statement: Korean high school and university have many differences, and
students want their life each other.
2. Body
A. Paragraph 2 (first point of comparison) topic sentence: In Korean high school
and university, timetable makers are different.
1) Korean high school
a. School gives timetable based on curriculum to their students.
b. Students have to follow and take a class unintentionally.
2) Korean university
a. Students make out their timetable themselves.
b. Students can take a class according to their preferences.
B. Paragraph 3 (second point of comparison) topic sentence: Korean high school
and university have different exam forms and this makes different discrimination ability.
1) Korean high school
a. Exams are consisted of some multiple choices and subject questions.
b. This form makes the lacking in its assessment function because of marking or
writing the answer randomly.
2) Korean university
a. There are many descriptive questions.
b. Have discrimination ability more than high school exam form.

C. Paragraph 4 (third point of comparison) topic sentence: In Korean high school

and university, students clothes are different too.
1) Korean high school
a. Wearing uniform is school rule.
b. If they dont wear uniform, theyll receive penalty points.
2) Korean university
a. Students are not restrained in the way they dress.
b. They dont receive penalty points because of clothing.
3. Conclusion (Paragraph 5)
A. Restated thesis: These different things make that they desire each others life.
B. Suggestion, opinion, or prediction: Even though people tell high school student
Your age is the best time in your life, and university student have freedom that high
school student doesnt have, high school students want to go university quickly and
university students want to go back their high school days. However, do the best at the
present moment.