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Name
Date
Unit/Crit
eria
Teacher

Holly Martlew
1st March 2016
316: Task 1: 1.1
Miss Bowater

Is the information provided accurate?

Is it presented in a visual way (pictures/videos
etc.)?
Is it an annotated poster?
Is the information provided detailed?
Is there a clear structure to the poster?
Is it insightful (showing deeper understanding of
the genre)?
Is it stimulating (engaging/interesting)?
Is the poster innovative (original/creative)?

Pass

Merit
Distinctio
n

Genre
1
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Genre
2
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Strengths
You have provided an visually interesting poster outlining some of the substyles
of Rock and Jazz. You have included pictures and video links (however these
video links cannot be accessed). The poster is annotated with some relevant
information and statements and is structured in a way that it is clear what
information is for rock and for Jazz. It is an original design and is interesting to
look at.

Improvements
You have not provided detailed and insightful information about the 2 genres
rock and Jazz. There is nothing on the poster that tells me what the genres are.
You have only listed the sub genres and supported these with a short statement.
More information is needed to improve your grade.
It is also important that we can access the videos you have attached.
If you can provide more detailed information and make your poster more
interactive this will help to improve your grade.

Current
Grade

Fail

Pass

Merit

Distinction

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