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    Martha Maldonado wrote a commentary on her junior English essay for Mrs. Morgan. She felt she did a good job formatting each paragraph but could have used more descriptive words. Peer editing in groups helped her correct mistakes and learn that her story was easy to follow. However, she struggled with transitions between paragraphs and thinks she should have read it out loud to catch more errors.

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    Martha Maldonado wrote a commentary on her junior English essay for Mrs. Morgan. She felt she did a good job formatting each paragraph but could have used more descriptive words. Peer editing in groups helped her correct mistakes and learn that her story was easy to follow. However, she struggled with transitions between paragraphs and thinks she should have read it out loud to catch more errors.

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    Martha Maldonado wrote a commentary on her junior English essay for Mrs. Morgan. She felt she did a good job formatting each paragraph but could have used more descriptive words. Peer editing in groups helped her correct mistakes and learn that her story was easy to follow. However, she struggled with transitions between paragraphs and thinks she should have read it out loud to catch more errors.

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    Martha Maldonado

    Mrs. Morgan

    Junior English 5th

    4 Jan. 2011

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    In my essay, I think that I did a good job putting each paragraph in the right format. I

    wrote the essay in my own words and I tried my best using the right words to describe each

    situation, I probably could have used more descriptive words though. When the class got in

    groups to correct each other’s essay, it helped me to correct some mistakes I had. While peer

    editing, I also learned my story was easy to read and follow along with the topic. I had trouble

    putting transitions in each paragraph. I also should have read it out loud a couple of times in

    order to correct more mistakes.

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