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Revised Goals
Revised Goals
Bonnie Kinnamont
Stephen Darville
CIS1200
02/10/2011
-I think this goal should be more specific. An a or a b is a broad range. This goal should
state exactly what grade the student would like to achieve.
-This is a great goal but the writer is only hoping. You have to have a realistic goal. If the
writer doesn’t think they can make the dean’s list realistically, maybe they should scale
back and shoot for a more realistic goal.
3. I wish that I could lose ten pounds before the dance next Saturday.
-A goal should be moderately challenging as well as realistic. This goal seems very
challenging and honestly, it seems unhealthy.
-As long as the student has ample time to reach this goal, it sounds realistic and
achievable.
-Although this isn’t a very specific goal or well measured, it is attainable. The writer of
this goal should be more specific and lay out a timeline of smaller goals to achieve in
order to achieve the large goal.