My Name: Yasmin Yunos

My partners name: Ishtiaq

Peer Assessment
I think peer assessment is: When you give someone an advice that can improve their work or make it better.

To make my feedback constructive I will: Read it a couple times, look at the mistakes carefully, and make sure my feedback is useful.

I am assessing Ishtiaqs work. Their success criteria for this learning opportunity are;
1. Understand how Iqbal lived. 2. Construct a well-explained and good biography. 3. To be able to research to answer your own questions

What do you like about your partners work? Write down 3 things you like. For example; I really liked the way that you used empathy, the post between Iqbal and the carpet worker demonstrated how strongly Iqbal felt. 1. I liked the way you described his working conditions. 2. His life was put in a simple but interesting way. 3. You had lots of information, and you put them in order. Did your partner achieve their success criteria? Think about their success criteria; did they achieve them all? How and why? Or why not? You had achieved them all. Well done! You achieved them by getting all you information in order; you did construct your biography the correct way! You did do good research to be able to answer your questions.

What could your partner do to improve their learning? Give 2 targets for improvement. Think about being constructive in your comments.

My Name: Yasmin Yunos

My partners name: Ishtiaq

Look back at their success criteria, what areas could they still develop? 1. Probably you explained something a little bit too much. You can fix it by simplifying it. 2. Put in more pictures so we can actually see the conditions or anything to do him. So we can empathise it more!