My NameHaniza

My partners name: Irfan

Peer Assessment
I think peer assessment is Where people who work with each other assess and give constructive feedback about each others work To make my feedback constructive I will Make sure that my work is a mix of criticism, encouragement and praise. I am assessing Irfans work. Their success criteria for this learning opportunity are; To write a biography in chronological order.

What do you like about your partners work? Write down 3 things you like. For example; I really liked the way that you used empathy, the post between Iqbal and the carpet worker demonstrated how strongly Iqbal felt. 1. I liked the fact that the biography was short and easy to understand. 2. He was able to get the names of people in Iqbals life, which I was not able to find. 3. He described Iqbals living conditions neatly and effectively yet it wasnt overflowing with unnecessary information. Did your partner achieve their success criteria? Think about their success criteria; did they achieve them all? How and why? Or why not? Yes, all of the events that were mentioned were in the correct order (I think) but I think that maybe some more things happened in between them. Next time you do a biography, maybe you could include more details? What could your partner do to improve their learning? Give 2 targets for improvement. Think about being constructive in your comments. Look back at their success criteria, what areas could they still develop? 1. Maybe next time you could include some pictures. That would make the biography more interesting. 2. Maybe you could have included details for why he/other people did what they did.

My NameHaniza

My partners name: Irfan