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    The document provides a peer assessment of a partner's work on a biography of Iqbal Masih. The assessment notes that the partner achieved their success criteria of creating a detailed biography including interesting facts about Iqbal Masih. The assessment compliments the partner's use of bullet points, language, empathy, and humor. Two targets for improvement are also provided, suggesting the partner could link to other examples of child slavery or groups that exploit children.

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    The document provides a peer assessment of a partner's work on a biography of Iqbal Masih. The assessment notes that the partner achieved their success criteria of creating a detailed biography including interesting facts about Iqbal Masih. The assessment compliments the partner's use of bullet points, language, empathy, and humor. Two targets for improvement are also provided, suggesting the partner could link to other examples of child slavery or groups that exploit children.

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    Peer Assessmentworksheet Irfan

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    The document provides a peer assessment of a partner's work on a biography of Iqbal Masih. The assessment notes that the partner achieved their success criteria of creating a detailed biography including interesting facts about Iqbal Masih. The assessment compliments the partner's use of bullet points, language, empathy, and humor. Two targets for improvement are also provided, suggesting the partner could link to other examples of child slavery or groups that exploit children.

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    My Name Irfan

    My partners name Haniza

    Peer Assessment
    I think peer assessment is To make my feedback constructive I will

    I am assessing Hanizas work. Their success criteria for this learning opportunity are;
    Create a detailed biography about Iqbal Masih and include interesting facts. To know basic details and details about Iqbal Masih to include in my biography and Fakewall Use as much empathy in my Fakewall as possible. I can check this by asking my classmates.

    What do you like about your partners work? Write down 3 things you like. For example; I really liked the way that you used empathy, the post between Iqbal and the carpet worker demonstrated how strongly Iqbal felt. 1. The use of bullet points to summarize his bio 2. I like the use of language. It actually sounds like a kid. 3. I think that there was a good use of empathy and I also like the humour. Did your partner achieve their success criteria? Think about their success criteria; did they achieve them all? How and why? Or why not? Good work! It was defiantly detailed. I didnt know he wanted to be a lawyer. I think that you have achieved all your S.C.

    What could your partner do to improve their learning? Give 2 targets for improvement. Think about being constructive in your comments. Look back at their success criteria, what areas could they still develop? 1. Maybe you can get to the next stage and start linking. For example with other kids around the world that are child slaves or other groups of people who exploit children.

    My Name Irfan

    My partners name Haniza

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