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(1) Letterhead MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIAL COMPANY (P)LTD.

14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

(2) Date 16 March 2015


Sender’s Address
(3) Inside Address – include reader's
Mr M.K. Gupta
name and designation Managing Director,
Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd
14 Travis Street
Singapore 899014

(4) Salutation Dear Mr M.K. Gupta:

(5) Subject line Rate List of Building Materials

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

(6) Complimentary close Yours sincerely

Hardkaur
(7) Signature block
Ms Hard Kaur,
Manager

Enc. (2) 5
(8) Enclosure (optional)
MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015
Sender’s Address
Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,
Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd
14 Travis Street
Singapore 899014
• The Heading—consists of the name
Dear Mr M.K. Gupta:
of the firm or the individual and the
Rate List of Building Materials
address. These are the essentials for xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
a printed letterhead, although there xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
may be additional printed data. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

Yours sincerely
•The Date Line—consists of the Hardkaur
month, the day of the month, and theManager
Ms Hard Kaur,

year. Enc. (2) 6


MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015

Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,

The Inside Address Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd


14 Travis Street
The InsideAddress

– Receiver’s complete name, title,


Singapore 899014

Dear Mr M.K. Gupta:


company and address (Letter
Rate List of Building Materials
Address) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
– Consists of the name and xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

address of the person or the xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

firm to whom the letter is written Yours sincerely

and should correspond in Hardkaur


Ms Hard Kaur,
essentials to the envelope Manager

Enc. (2) 7
address.
MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015

Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,

–Begin with Dear: Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd


14 Travis Street

–Use Mr. or Ms. beforethe Singapore 899014

receiver’s Dear Mr. M.K.Gupta: Salutation


name. Rate List of Building Materials

–Use Dear or Attention followedby


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

an appropriate title, such as xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

Customer Service Department or xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
Sales Manager. Yours sincerely
–Use Dear Sir or Madam orLadies Hardkaur

and Gentlemen. Include BOTH Ms Hard Kaur,


Manager

genders for a general audience. Enc. (2)


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MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015

Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,
Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd
14 Travis Street
Singapore 899014

The Subject Line—enables the Dear Mr. M.K.Gupta:

Rate List of Building Materials The Subject Line


reader to know at a glance xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

what the letter is about. It xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

may be placed in various xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

positions (sometimes above Yours sincerely

the inside address). Hardkaur


Ms Hard Kaur,
Manager
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Enc. (2)
MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015

Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,
Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd
In the first paragraph, consider a 14 Travis Street
Singapore 899014
friendly opening and then astatement Dear Mr. M.K.Gupta:
of the main point.
Rate List of Building Materials

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The next paragraph should begin xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

justifying the importance of the main xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
Body
point. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

The closing paragraph should restate the Yours sincerely

Hardkaur
purpose of the letter and, in some cases, Ms Hard Kaur,
request some type of action. Manager
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Enc. (2)
MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015

Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,
The closing begins at the same Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd
14 Travis Street
horizontal point as your date andone Singapore 899014

line after the last bodyparagraph. Dear Mr. M.K.Gupta:

Rate List of Building Materials

Capitalize the first word only (for


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

example: Thank you) and leave four xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

lines between the closing and the xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
sender's name for asignature. Yours sincerely

Hardkaur
Closing
A comma should follow the closing.
Ms Hard Kaur,
Manager
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Enc. (2)
MITRAN DI BUILDING MATERIALCOMPANY (P)LTD.
14 GOLFLINKS, NEWDELHI-110007

16 March 2015

Mr M.K. Gupta
Managing Director,
Modern Marvel Pvt.Ltd
If you have enclosed any documents 14 Travis Street
Singapore 899014
along with the letter, such as aresume,
Dear Mr. M.K.Gupta:
you indicate this simply by typing
Rate List of Building Materials
Enclosures one line below the closing. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

As an option, you may list the name of each xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
document you are including in the envelope. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
For instance, if you have included many xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

documents and need to ensure that the Yours sincerely

recipient is aware of each document, it may be Hardkaur


Ms Hard Kaur,
a good idea to list the names. Manager

Enc. (2) Enclosures 12


WRITING A SIMPLE
MEMO
The word “m em o ” is short for memorandum.
A memo is: a short written communication that is often
used in the workplace to provide information or ask for
some form of action to takeplace.
Memos

• Recipient: internal

• Form: print / electronic

• Tone: less formal than letters

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Why learn about writingmemos?
•Important form of corporate communication.

•Clear and concise communication of complex


subjects.
Memos can be written for a number of reasons :

Inform staff about


decisions/actions/events.

Request information / action/events.

Remind staff of action


needed/procedures/changes in policy.

Provide information on work related


topics.

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WRITING A
SIMPLE
MEMO
General template of Memo

MEMO

TO:

FROM:

SUBJECT:

DATE:
PART 1

To: Mrs. Agustin, Supervisor


From:
Sub:
Date:
The "to" line is usually indicated as the word
"To" followed by a colon and the name o f the
i n d i v i d u a l s o r groups r e c e i v i n g the memo. Some
examples a r e :
•To: A l l S t a f f
•To: A l l Faculty Members
PART 2

To:
From: Harry Santos, Manager
Sub:
Date:
The "From" line indicates who is writing and
distributing the memo. Your name and title
should be included. The From line may indicate an individual
or a group within the company.
•From: Gurvinder Singh, GM, AIBS
•From: Human Resource
•From: Administration
PART 3
To:
From:
Sub: Retirement Party
Date:
"Re“ stands for "In Reference To" and may be
used interchangeably with the word "Subject." This line comes
immediately under the From line and indicates what the memo
is about.

•Re: Faculty Meeting


•Subject: Faculty Meeting
PART 4

To:
From:
Sub:
Date: March 16, 2015

•Date: Month day, Year

•Date: March 16, 2015


To:
PART 5 Mrs. Agustin, Supervisor
From: Harry Santos, ManagerDM
Sub: Retirement Party

Date: March 16, 2015

After these important points of information,


a standard memo leaves several lines blank,
followed by the body of the memo. The body
of the memo should contain short, concise
text formatted for quick and easy reading.
Subject= Focus + Topic
MEMORANDUM

(1) To line
TO: Vikram Gupta, HR Senior Executive
(2) From line
FROM: Abhijeet Singh, Sales Manager
(3) Subject line SUBJECT: Purchasing Procedures
(4) Date line DATE: 10 March 2015

Note: No salutation or inside Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.


address xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.

1. xxxxxxxxxxxxx
2. xxxxxxxxxxxxx
3. xxxxxxxxxxxxx

(5) Signed initials – no


YHS
complimentary close

(6) Carbon copy (optional) cc: Hard kaur, HR Manager


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Sample
Memo
Date: March 16th, 2015
Heading To: Delhi Art Board Division Faculty
From: Maintenance Dept.
Re: New Bookshelves

As many of you know, the current office bookshelves do not


Opening accommodate text books of a standard height. To correct this
problem, all faculty offices will be furnished with new shelves
on March 23rd, 2007 between 9:00am and 4:00pm.
We apologize for any noise or disruption this installation will
cause. Faculty may schedule office hours in alternate locations
Summary as needed.
Call Manoj Gupta at ext. 3397 if you have questions.
Thank you for your compliance.
Discussion

Conclusion
Reminders
:
Be specific and precise
Start by stating exactly what it is you want
Keep memos short (under one page)
Use a business-like tone
Use bulleted lists when needed if it helps make the information
you’re presenting clearer
Stick to the correct format
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

 Word Choice
 Emphasis
 Conciseness
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Word Choice

The correct choice of words provides


clear and effective letters and memo.

Insensitive usage of words can lead to


unclear messages which leads to
confusion and miscommunication.
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Wordiness

In the event
Big in Size
In my opinion
Is able to
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Wordiness

In the event If
Big in Size Big
In my opinion I think
Is able to can
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Slang
Avoid some slang words
as possible. Example:
 Ripped off
 Bye Felicia
 Bae
 Frenemy
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Cliché
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Pretentious Words

Example:
 Initiate
 Transmit
 Manifest
 Facilitate
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Pretentious Words

Example:
 Initiate begin
 Transmit send
 Manifest shown
 Facilitate help
Principles in Writing BL and Memo
• Emphasis and De-emphasis Technique

Common emphasis technique includes


italicizing and boldfacing words,
phrases, sentences

De-emphasis technique usually uses


passive voice.
Principles in Writing BL and Memo

• Conciseness

Use of short words instead of long words


when short words can get the message
across.

Concise message promotes clarity and


save people’s time

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