Name : Ririn Marini

Class : 4-B

Student’s Number : 2223120947

Step 1 Prewriting

Listing

One of the Most Exciting Moments in My Life

My 20th Birthday

My First Day in Campus

Study Tour in Jogjakarta

My First Art Show in Senior High School

Untirta Adventure Camp

Study Tour in Jogjakarta

My exciting moment

My first time visited Jogjakarta

When senior high school

In December 2011

When I was in the 3rd grade

With my school friends and my teachers

Visited several historical places

Visited Borobudur temple

Visited Prambanan temple

Visited Keraton Jogjakarta

Stopping at an inn with my beloved friends

Shopping

Took some photographs

Step 2 Organizing

Outline

Study Tour in Jogjakarta

My exciting moment

A. My first time visited Jogjakarta

- when I was in senior high school

- When I was in the 3rd grade

- In December 2011

B. Visited several historical places

- visited Borobudur temple

- visited Prambanan temple

- visited Keraton Jogjakarta

 - Visited the places with my friends and my teachers

Step 3 Writing

Rough Draft

Study Tour in Jogjakarta

Visited Jogjakarta was one of the most exciting moments in my life. It was my

first time I visited the city. I went there when I was in the 3rd grade with most of

my friends in SMAN 1 Ciruas. It was in the last months, December, when we had

a long holiday. I visited Jogjakarta to study about the historical places and also to

enjoy my holiday. There were several historical places that I visited. In the first

day, I visited Keraton Jogjakarta. There were so many historical things that were

still saved in there. Then, I also visited Prambanan Temple. The other exciting

place in Jogjakarta that I visited was Borobudur Temple. There were many unique

temples in there. When I wanted to reach the temple, I needed to go so many

upstairs. It very tired, but finally all of my tired was changed when I got the

beautiful temples. That made the study tour more exciting was because I spent my

times with my beloved friends and also my lovely teachers. I always miss that

moment.

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