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The Hot Fudge Sundae

In front of me on the table sat a beautiful pure white bowl, simplistic in design, hiding a decadent surprise inside. In the bowl
was hidden something that was not so pure, however, the irresistible indulgence was worth every calorie that I knew it
contained. As I looked inside I saw on the bottom of the bowl a hot, tender brownie loaded with macadamia nuts. I knew from
past experience that the nuts had a creamy and smooth texture, almost like white chocolate. On top of the brownie were two
firmly packed scoops of ice cream, laying side by side, each one a different flavor. The scoop on the right was a rich vanilla,
flecked with dark specks of vanilla bean. The scoop on the left was a dark, smooth, bittersweet chocolate. The scoops were just
starting to melt tiny rivers of melted cream down the sides of the hot brownie, pooling on the bottom of the pure white bowl.
These scoops of ice cream were draped with a sumptuous, rich, hot fudge sauce. Topping the luscious sauce was an ample
dollop of whipped cream that was in perfect contrast to the dense, almost too rich dessert below. The whipped cream was
topped with a shower of chocolate sprinkles and finely chopped walnuts. What finally completed this wonderful creation was a
perfect maraschino cherry, its red juice sending tiny streams down the whole mountain of dessert delight. The contrast of
colors, textures and flavors in this dessert appealed to every part of my senses. I could not wait to eat it.
~© 2005 Kelly Cofske~
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Best Friends Forever


As a child at the age of two, my sister and I had pictures taken together. My sister and I are ten months and three weeks apart.
In this special family picture was look identical. Our big, dark blue and brown eyes and smile resemble two calm little girls,
enjoying the moment with peaceful smiles on our faces. In our long, dark red and blue dresses we sit straight up in front of a
warn red fireplace surrounded by green plants. Our dark brown, wavy hair even matched. We both had baby pink bows off to
the side of our heads that resemble a blooming flower. Growing up our family consisted of our father, my sister, and I. My
sister and I have both been there for each other through “the thick and the thin.” My photograph pf my sister and reveals how
close we are in age and through this paragraph it also reveals how close we are when it comes to love and friendship.
~(c) Amy Neill 2005~
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My Mother’s Kitchen
My Mother’s Kitchen is not big but it is warm and comfortable. My mother cooks a lot and it smells spicy and sweet.
Sometimes she taught my brother and me how to cook. We liked learning new things, working together and making delicious
foods. Now I live far away, but I often think of my mother’s kitchen. (From: Paragraph Writing by Zemach, D.E. and Islam C.)
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Bali
Bali is probably the most famous island in Indonesia. Also known as the Land of gods, it blends spectacular sheer natural
beauty of looming volcanoes, beautiful beaches, lush terraced rice fields that exude peace and serenity, and warm and friendly
people. Visitors will be amazed by its dramatic dances, colorful ceremonies, amazing arts and crafts, luxurious beach resorts,
and exciting night life. This exotic island also offers world class surfing and diving, and exhilarating treks in the wild.
Everywhere intricately carved temples provides inspirational spirituality. For decades this miraculous island has amazed
millions of local and international visitors. Why don’t you come and experience it?
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Miss Universe Pia Alonzo Wurtzbach was named as the “Person of the Year” by Yes! Magazine.

On her Instagram account, the Filipina-German beauty queen thanked the local magazine for the lovely piece they
wrote about her.
According to the magazine, aside from the beauty of Pia’s face, brain, and soul, what makes her the most beautiful
woman in the universe is her own story.
“It inspires and it empowers. It is about dreams as much as it is about adversities. It is the story of everyone’s journey
through life,” the magazine said.
Last August 1, Pia was also named as the “sexiest woman alive” by Esquire Philippines.
Reference: http://kickerdaily.com/posts/2016/08/yes-magazine-names-pia-wurtzbach-as-person-of-the-year/
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